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Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2026 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: Dioclesius Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2025 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great story, and great chapter!
Keep up the good work :)

Reviewer: TheMarcel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2025 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I especially like chapters 3 and 6 when Brad is trapped in a jar and involuntarily receives fluids from Jessica's pussy :)
Hope you make a new story in the future!

Reviewer: SkullNoise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2025 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is such a well done story, especially for your first one. Looking forward to reading anything else you choose to publish :)

Reviewer: Scruba76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2025 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

G’day

I just wanted to say that i absolutely loved your story, I would give anything to be like Brad in such an amazing relationship, all I can say is he was one very lucky guy and you are a very talented writer, keep up the great work

Thank you so much

Steve



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Its my first story but I have others coming.

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