Reviews For A Rivals Reduction
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Reviewer: Aldo121319 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2025 12:38 PM Title: Along Came a Spider

Really fun story! I’m particularly impressed by how you were able to get the personality of each of the women that Peter interacts with to shine through so distinctly in such a short space of time allocated to each of them, particularly Hela, Sue and Doreen!

As other have already said, I’m not sure if you plan to continue this, but I know my imagination is already racing with thoughts about where this could go! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! As a long time Marvel fan it was fun to write all the characters. I am working on the 2nd part so stay tuned!

Reviewer: LeopoldArchitect Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2025 11:58 AM Title: Along Came a Spider

Fun read! Glad I'm not the only one in awe at how absurdly gargantuan they made Emma's ass in Rivals lmao. I didn't think they'd one-up Sue so quickly, yet here we are.

I don't know if you plan on continuing this or leaving it like this, but either way I enjoyed it a lot :) 



Author's Response:

I think everyone was stunned. The artists clearly love a curvy blonde lmao. Glad to hear you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2025 8:17 PM Title: Along Came a Spider

No boot stomp? Shame. Kinda curious to see where this is going, ngl.

And I don't JUST mean Emma's booty.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Emma's probably my main inspiration for writing this so we're definitely gonna see more of her lol 

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