Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

 Anticipation is the goading factor for most stories. The gradual lead-up to the grand finale; however, this was difficult to read because of the lack of paragraphs, and then the let-down as each victim is simply swallowed with just a brief mention of being "marinated" in the most delicious of sauce. As usual with most yarns on this site, the victims, willing or otherwise, are so small. Oh well.