[Report This]Date: March 16 2025 3:15 PM Title: Waking the Beast
This is a super cute little one-shot you've got here!
I'm normally not a huge M/f fan (nothing against it, but it's just not my thing), but I decided to give this a look because I'm enjoying Headlines and Heartstrings so much. I'm really glad I did!
I love the nervous, kind of embarrassed virgin energy the MC has at the start. That "Grab me ... Just grab it" had me fucking rolling! It was kind of adorable watching him try the "fake it until you make it" approach, honestly. Very endearing!
To see the tiny woman gently call him out on this and take charge of the situation was incredible! I may not be all about the giant cock, but tinies calling the shots is always as fun as it is hot!
And I love how she's so understanding and not the least bit judgmental. He was obviously concerned about that, hiding behind that false bravado (that I hope worked better for him before this moment), so to see her take the situation seriously and try to get to the heart of the matter was great! She could have laughed him off (even though he's much bigger than her, I think it's pretty clear even by this brief one-shot that the dude wouldn't use his size against her on purpose, even if she made fun of him) or just lost interest pretty easily. But she obviously cares about the guy and genuinely wants to help him out.
It'd also have been completely understandable for her to be annoyed at him thinking that her being his first time because she's only three inches tall. That could be taken as a bit demeaning, but it really didn't come off that way between her saying it and his explanation about his trouble being confident around women in general. It wasn't so much that he thinks tinies are easy or "the implication," but he just thought she'd be less scary as a woman to him because of her size. It also helps that he ended up being wrong and that he was just as awkward with her anyway!
But man, her referencing how he during their English lectures (a nice piece of information that ended up telling us a lot in and of itself, by the way) and using that to bring out his confidence was such a cool moment. It was her way of bringing out the real him, the one she first became interested in, using his passion to move past the bravado and nerves and share something special with the real him.
What a wonderful idea to build this story around!
And, of course, the MC asking his first if she's okay afterward is a nice bit of gentle interaction. She wasn't made of glass, but after that "almost violent" release, he wants to make sure his tiny partner is okay. That's really sweet!
Finally, we get the tiny girl wanting more from him, prepping him for round two as the credits roll! Well done!
Author's Response: Very glad you took a chance on this story, even though M/f isn’t your cup of tea. Even more pleased that you left one of your usual thorough reviews, and were able to get some enjoyment out of it!