I really enjoyed this story! The cruel domination was handled really well and had so many fun layers to it throughout.

The first detail that stood out to me was the lavender scent on Heather’s hands/body. I’m assuming it was either a lotion, body wash, or perfume, but I love when these kind of scents are described from the tiny’s perspective. But here it’s even better because of how the fairies notice the chemical artificialness of the scent. It’s not the natural flowers the fae adore, it’s harsh and bullshit and indicative of how monstrously unnatural these humans are to these creatures.

The constant change in perspectives flowed so well, and highlighted the cruelty by getting to see it from both sides. Isabelle’s callousness is much worse when we actually hear the “stupid fairy ramblings” the fairies are saying. I loved Heather asking what pestilence was and then cutting to the purple fairy shouting it lol. I’ll circle back to this, but the best instance of this was when the blue fairy was telling the other her true name, only to be interrupted by Isabelle who couldn’t be bothered to try and figure out what she was pleading other than recognizing that it sounded like what all the fairies say before she kills them. Also, I loved the line where the purple fairy begs her to wait, and Isabelle thinks, “What, save her for breakfast? Fairies were so strange” That line was excellent lol. So bratty and dismissive.

That early scene where they were sucking the blood out of the wings was so hot! Blood isn’t something I see used like this very often (admittedly, I don’t read that many cruel stories, but still), so seeing how it was used here was so intriguing. The fact that it’s magic fairy blood certainly helps. I loved the comparisons to jelly and pop rocks, how the magic fizzles on their lips and tongue, and the way it lit up their lips like rave makeup was such a striking visual. Fuck, I think I could read a whole story of these two sucking on fairy blood lol. How it was used throughout the rest of the story, like lube for the anal insertion, was great too.

The way you personified the magic was another stellar detail. I’ve played with this idea before, but the tiny feeling themselves out of their body (in this case, the fairy feeling her blood go down Heather’s gullet and melt in her stomach) is such a tantalizing thing to read. I don’t know how to describe it, and maybe it’s similar to what people find appealing about soul vore, but that out of body experience captivates me in ways beyond what happens to the tiny physically (though that stuff is just as hot too).

Isabelle’s character I found pretty interesting, particularly her domination over both Heather and the fairies and the semi-subtle ways those differ. Like, I get the sense of playfulness and love that goes into how she treats Heather (though that part with the scissors did scare me ngl), whereas with the fairies she is utterly devoid of any sense of affection. Heather is her lover, the fairies are tools, and that comes through clearly not just from her actions but really in how her perspective of the two is described.

I don’t know if this a criticism against the story or myself, but I’ll admit I got really lost in the middle when Isabelle took the blue fairy out of the jar. I had trouble there understanding which fairy you were referring to between paragraphs, and I didn’t catch whenever the purple(?) one moved from Heather’s mouth to her pussy. I reread that section a few times and could never really make sense of it. I think part of the issue here was not having the fairies names, so their pronouns are doing the heavy lifting, and that doesn’t help when all four characters have the same pronouns lol. But if no one else had trouble keeping up there, I’m willing to chalk it up to me being dumb. I also got the purple and blue mixed up during the anal section, but I figured that one out by the end. 

As for the anal, real high quality stuff there. I ate up every detail, even the grosser ones lol. The smut overall was fantastic, but I think the one fairy being shoved through the pucker was a standout. That and Isabelle licking the blood out of the fairy’s back. I forgot to mention that earlier but was super hot (all the mouth, tongue, and lip stuff was super hot. Yes, my bias is showing. I don’t care.).

Throughout the story, you drive home how important magic and spirits and the natural world are to the fairies, and how the humans desecrate all that effortlessly without a care or second thought. The changing perspectives helped hammer that home frequently, but that bit at the end with the purple fairy trying to recite the other’s true name was the pinnacle of that idea. The fact that after all this bullshit they suffered, the fairies have the opportunity to at least enter a pleasant afterlife is a light at the end of this horrifying tunnel, and all that gets snuffed away by these two uncaring sadists. The fairy is so close to completing the ritual but can’t, damning her cohort to an eternity of suffering, and the digested fairy is so far gone her mind breaks into finding a twisted pleasure in the warmth of Heather’s stomach acids. That ending hit so hard and was the perfect maraschino cherry on this diabolical sundae.

This story was super hot from beginning to end, and the descriptions (especially the use of color and touch) were really well written. I was so swept up in these ladies’ pleasure, I didn’t even feel bad for reveling in the fairies’ suffering, and if that isn’t the sign of a good cruel story, I don’t know what is (because I usually feel really bad reading these kinds of stories lol). Excellent work!

You really get it like nobody else does- looking forward to more like this