[Report This]Date: March 10 2025 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
oooh I've been excited for this one <3
And you didn't disappoint! Short and to the point, but jam-packed with character. I think the story's length actually contributes to the casual nature of the events too. To Julie, this is an everyday thing, just a pill that she'll probably forget about by the time tomorrow's girl comes around. Though of course for Stella it's a life-ending disaster, right as she was about to get with her crush.
Your prose is fantastic, too. Every detail is clear, and evocative. You're really good at condensing a lot of information into a single elegant passage. The 'as she settled on procrastination' line gave me a chuckle, as well as all the slang references to HRT lol.
Also just a really hot story. The way Julie sucked Stella in like a thick bunch of noodles was fantastic, and everything about how you describe Julie's insides was phenominal.
Really great work!
[Report This]Date: March 10 2025 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic work! One of the best cruel one-shots I've read on GW.
I loved how Julie fully recognizes that what she's doing is wrong but she doesn't care because she enjoys it too much. The actual act of vote was very well-written. I particularly liked the transition from tasting to swallowing. "Without much fanfare, the tasting stopped. The pressure however dropped like hammer." is a great line - you can easily imagine the sudden disorientation and panic swelling inside the prey. The war zone inside her stomach was vivid, great acid imagery. The coffee scent was a wonderful touch.
The central theme of consuming other people to improve yourself is excellent, the way their deaths directly lead to Julie becoming more attractive. The only thing I'd add is a comment about the nutrients from their bodies being used to fill out her curves - it's important to use every part of the tiny, not just the estrogen!
This site could always use more girl cock content!
Date: March 09 2025 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This story reminds me of the comic called Vanity by openhighhat. It ran for only 2 chapters years ago and I’ve been so sad that there’s no plans to continue it. It didn’t involve a trans woman but the premise was still pretty similar, and I’m glad to have gotten this! Your writing is so great, I really enjoyed this!
I really really hope there’s more chapters but I also understand if you only intended this to be a one-off. We definitely need more stories like this with trans women, especially F/f!
[Report This]Date: March 08 2025 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful work ^^ happy women's day!