Pretty good, well-written erotic story RedFractal. A young woman with witchy powers exacting revenge on a cheating boyfriend is always a good concept. One small critique - I felt it was a bit too long for what you're going for. I think you could have accomplished the goal in about 6500-7000 words. Sometimes, the intensity/suspense seeps away with the story being drawn out too long. That said, I think you're a very good writer and I enjoy your stories. Hope you write more.