[Report This]Date: April 13 2025 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Excellent chapter! Love this world you're building.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Melanie and I were meticulous when crafting the MG-verse. This story is just a spinoff, go check out Magna Gratia if you're craving more!
[Report This]Date: April 13 2025 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Excellent chapter! Love this world you're building.
Author's Response:
<3 <3 <3
[Report This]Date: April 12 2025 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! I was wondering when we would see Jeaninne again! I'm loving this Magna Gratia spin-off.
Author's Response:
It was inevitable! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: April 12 2025 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
What is simply weird is that physics don't apply to minis. Take the falling guy. At this size, no fall, no matter how high, would kill them. Ever dropped an ant? They just move on. There's simply not enough weight to make them gain enough inertia. If there are insects and smaller animals in this world then their rules would have to apply to beings of their size.
Author's Response:
The physics can be a little confusing sometimes. Usually we write as though each person is like a normal human and is affected by forces in the same way, no matter their size. Things like the surface tension of a water droplet or the density of bone make anything involving extreme size difference very unrealistic, so more often than not we ask the readers to suspend their disbelief.
For this specific example though, it isn't the fall that kills that character. It's more likely the wind blowing them at speeds far greater than terminal velocity into something. Think fly hitting the windshield of a moving vehicle; yes it's small but it'll still go splat. We try to avoid going into that level of detail in the story since it can be heavy handed, but I am happy to elaborate for you here in the reviews. Hope that makes sense!
[Report This]Date: March 19 2025 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great work. I love to see massive size differences but I like there to be interaction between sizes. You're knocking it out of the park in that regard. I'm tempted to go and read the whole Magna Gracia series now. Keep up the good work! I'm excited to see what's next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! If you do read MG, let me know what you think of it. Plenty more to come, stay tuned :)
[Report This]Date: February 25 2025 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
That's some sick casual cruelty and gaslighting from the scientist. It makes sense the Brobs would use lili slave labor instead of using tiny robots since they're technologically backwards compared to the other races.
I have a feeling the lilis would continue to be picked off until Emily and her husband are left.
I do have a minor nitpick, though. When the Brob was spraying them down with water in the first chapter, I assume the nozzle shot out microscopic water droplets because I feel like regular water droplets would be like giant boulders to lilis.
Author's Response:
This story has no shortage of cruelty, in several flavors. I tried to avoid cruelty for cruelty's sake like we too often see in other stories, though. Most of this serves a purpose on some level. That doesn't excuse it, of course.
It was a normal bottle, so the droplets were very large. The reason no one got crushed under any of them was due to the spread of the nozzle.