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Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2025 4:25 PM Title: Tiny Little Pests

Another great story. 

Reviewer: JerkyLover777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2025 6:24 PM Title: Tiny Little Pests

The sheer scale that you got across for how tiny Kevin and Lily are compared to Honey was incredible. Would definitely love to see more of them exploring other parts of her body, willing on their part or not!

Reviewer: aHomester Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2025 2:32 PM Title: Tiny Little Pests

Awesome chapter! As I normally say, extreme size differences is the best. You described Honey's looming, and imposing presence extremely well

Reviewer: GTS33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2025 1:01 PM Title: Tiny Little Pests

This was a great read! I enjoyed your vivid descriptions and the overall feeling of being miniscule. Any story that involves scaling a massive giantess is going to appeal to me, but this stood out. 

Is it only going to be 2 chapters? I'd hoped for more! Personally I'd be disappointed if they only made it to her toes and died. There's just so much more Honey to scale! I'm hoping they can get her attention.

Keep up the good work! I'll be following this story :)

Reviewer: ProbablyIX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2025 8:45 AM Title: Tiny Little Pests

I've enjoyed helping proof this a lot. And I'm super happy to see you finally post it!

I love the old-school sci-fi vibes of the homemade shrink ray. The way you described it sparking and malfunctioning was really striking, too. 

The characters are really well done too. I really like Lily, personally. Her more blunt attitude is a great balancer for kevin, who seems a bit more intellectual and reserved. Or maybe I'm just drawn to cute, innocent women being thrust into terrible, sizey situations lmao. Either way I think she's a great addition. Having two tinies together makes the story a lot more dynamic compared to if Kevin was alone. It helps that their dynamic is great, too. 

Your descriptions and prose in the giantess parts are fantastic, by the way. You really sell the experience that Kevin and Lily are going through. The senses are engaged and it paints a really clear picture. Bravo. 

Since I kinda know where the story goes from here, I can say with confidence that I'm excited to read what happens next!

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