[Report This]Date: February 08 2025 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A Teleportation Gone Wrong
Interesting first chapter. Curious to see how this goes. Kobolds are sadly not used very often in size stories so this is a rare treat. .
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! Yeah, I know, the lil guys are always disrespected. I'm trying to lean a little bit into the draconic pride of the race, something that we'll be better seen on the next chapters
And to be honest, I'm also looking forward to see where the story ends up, there are a bunch of possible scenarios in my mind.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2025 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A Teleportation Gone Wrong
This is a super fun start to a promising story. The worldbuilding is simple but elegant, and the different characters are a lot of fun.
Zydrith is super cute, and having her formally much more physically gifted party shrunken down and having to rely on their diminutive peer is a really fun idea.
The descriptions of size hit quite well, too. The sense of scale is quite strong.
Can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you, i'm really enjoying writing this, it's a nice change of pace in respect of the more modern settings.
I'm also trying my best to portray a sense of wonder, exploration, and adventure in the chapters, I feel that it's fundamental for the vibes this story is meant to evoke.
And yes, there will be a series of situations where Zydrith will be forced to become the brawn of the party, despite her lack of athletic prowess. We'll see how she will deal with that.