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Reviewer: parapatherapper123 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2025 2:59 AM Title: Family Retreat

Fantastic story. Loved the part where Maya just casually changed his size just to stop him from snitching.

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2025 3:30 AM Title: Family Retreat

This story got my blood boiling so it really good.  I had a hard time visualizing Otto climbing his mom's foot other than that it was a well written story.  I hope we see what happens to Otto and see some remorse from his mom and sister if possible.  This beach is one bad day from getting sued.  I hope you continue your work!

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