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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2025 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 3: Of Bras and Beers

Aww, so close to unaware vore. I love unaware full tour vore with survival. Oh well, maybe a later chapter, for now I loved the close call



Author's Response: I have some other vore stories on my profile if you're interested? I highly recommend Forbidden Candy and Barry Flavored Boba. 

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2025 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 3: Of Bras and Beers

This story has been great and I can't wait to see more chapters with our two main characters. If your looking for an idea how about Dylan ending up shrinking really micro small while on Chloe's thong string. The fabric could be like a jungle lol.



Author's Response:

I am glad you're enjoying it! Believe it or not, that is actually VERY close to something I am outlining that's coming up for Dylan. Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2025 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Stuck Underfoot

Nice work! You open to story requests or comms? The contact feature on the site is borked so how should I contact you?



Author's Response:

If you have Twitter or Bluesky I am there (links are in the notes at the bottom of each chapter) and I try to respond fairly quickly there. If that does not work, I can leave my email. 

Reviewer: Raso719 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2025 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 3: Of Bras and Beers

I love how despite how careless Cloe is, she genuinely does seem to care. It's a unique and fun dichotomy. I also like the story in the background that she's met someone while at the gym that she might be interested in. It sets up some foreshadowing that maybe our little hero will end up in the middle of some naughty shenanigans. 

I feel like you've put so many little things in this and the last chapter that if love to see expanded on. I feel like there's also juat enough world building you've done to branch into some side stories as well. Like, I'd love to see how some of the even smaller folks are managing, or even if there's any ultra-nano people who have been reduced so small they're considered lost forever. I definitely would love to see how some of the tiny ladies are managing...



Author's Response:

Oh she definitely cares about Dylan, but is a bit... flighty and clumsy. Its an adjustment for both of them. And don't worry, we will be checking in on the other tinies sometime fairly soon. 

Reviewer: Raso719 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2025 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: "Oh, There You Are"

I definitely like where this is going! Poor Steph. I wonder if the implication is she was played with the night prior?

Would love a scene with a girl shrinks uncontrollably until she's microscopic and too small to be seen! Maybe some poor girl thinks she can escape if she gets small enough or an unnoticed nano girl ends up worship her new cellmate who doesn't even know she's there?



Author's Response:

We shall have to see where things go in the future! Glad you're enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2025 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Stuck Underfoot

The story's off to a good start! Given that Dylan already suspects what caused his shrinking, might be good for him to test it in front of Chloe in a more controlled environment. Obviously embarrassing, but once they know how it works they can have some fun with him being micro. 



Author's Response:

We shall have to see how the two of them adjust to things and find out!

Reviewer: Worshiper Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2025 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Stuck Underfoot

Hi,

Cool looking story. Love a tall, gorgeous and also slightly careless woman in these kind of stories. 

Since there is a nose tag and she seems to be "allergic to everything" I was thinking if maybe Dylan would be having to survive one of her allergic attacks at really small size. I would love that : ).

Keep it going please :)  



Author's Response:

That’s definitely a possibility. There is going to

be some grosser things than I usually write here. 

Reviewer: hornet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2025 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Stuck Underfoot

Great story! Can't wait for him to get smaller.



Author's Response:

Oh we are definitely going to see some fun sizes!

Reviewer: Derpywolf647 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2025 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Stuck Underfoot

An excellent start to a series and I look forward to more chapters. I do like the second reduction in size, it gets it down to a persoanl sweet spot. Great descriptions of the enviroment helps keep the reader immersed. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope the follow ups live up to expectations!

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