[Report This]Date: January 25 2025 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, a gentle story coming from you is unexpected. And it's really good, too? Amazing! The premise of giving up your life to be a doll is very appealing and you do it justice. I like the dialogue too, you get a good sense of the characters' personalities in a short amount of time. It leaves me wanting more, but for a short story you can't do better.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2025 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Short and sweet. Nice story!
I especially liked the dialogue with Emma. It's jittery and awkward in a way that really works with her character.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Gentle stuff isn't my usual forté so I'm glad it translated well. I often feel like the personality of the biggo isn't well-developed in a lot of stories so I hope to really focus on cohesive characters.
Thanks for the review!
Date: January 24 2025 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww a very cute story idea and I can't wait to see where it goes for these two
Author's Response:
I'm not sure how much steam I have to continue the plot but I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm not ruling out resisting the story. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
[Report This]Date: January 24 2025 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, this is good stuff! I wasn't sure going in if I was going to like this based purely on the description, but you've told a very effective tale here. Emma really shines as an unassured woman finding her footing as the owner of a tiny man. I saw you marked it completed, but this story has legs, and I hope you opt to continue it. Great read!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes I'm not sure if I'll revisit the story, it's a bit on the gentle side for me and while I enjoyed telling the story my own proclivities would likely shift the tone. But I'm not ruling it out! Thank you for leaving a review <3