Reviewer: Somewhereinthenight Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2025 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Day 219

Another excellent story from you!! So sad what happened at the end of Chapter 2 :( 
I would love to see that demoness get some karma but knowing some of your other stories - something tells me that won't happen. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!   I hope the next chapters explain more. 

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2025 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Day 219

Smells like Citrus? Something tells me that 1,900ft demoness corpse will exude a far less pleasant smell after about a week or so. This isn't something that gets touched on very much in these sorts of stories, but then again usually giants are portrayed as invincible, so the seldom die anyway. But in a story like this were they can be killed and die, eventually its going to decay. Its not like they can be cremated or buried either.

Managing to kill one might be an impressive feat, but that corpse is going to be a problem for people in a wide radius for a VERY long time to come. Probably years, possibly decades even. The bigger a giant is, the longer it takes for the body to completely rot away. And the skeleton likely never will. The only positive is that it would probably enrich the soil or something, but that's about it.

Anyway, was this story inspired by Attack on Titan? I've never seen that, but I know OF it, and that's kinda what I'm reminded of here.

The manner of killing these giants by flying planes full of explosives directly into them reminds me of that chapter in your other story where Parker defeated the rebels in Ostrov. The rebels there tried to do that same thing to her, but for some reason she managed to survive. If I'm to be completely honest, I don't think that realistically Parker would have survived it though, and she'd have ended up dead just like that Demoness.

Anyway, I'm not sure where this story is headed but it will be interesting to find out.

BTW, I hope your recovery is going well and you'll get back to 100% eventually. But even if not, you are still able to write which is a good thing. I just want to say that with a story like this one here which isn't overtly fetish material, this is the sort of thing you could perhaps get published in some form of mainstream media and potentially earn an income doing that. I'm not sure how well it would work out, but its always something you could consider anyway. Because that's the case with Attack on Titan, so there is some sort of niche out there for something like this outside of the fetish community, if you know what I mean.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I mean, the citrus thing was just a fun thing for me.  Like this already wholly unrealistic so I was just having fun with it.  I bet it would smell like shit if it were real and they were decaying.  The corpses would be a problem for sure if they do manage to take one down.  

I have never seen Attack on Titan, I am aware of it but don't really know too much other than what people have told me, I don't watch a lot of animes to tell the truth.  

Thank you for the recovery wishes, it's still tough, but we're getting there.

Reviewer: poweraxe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2025 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Day 219

Excellent first chapter.

Sorry, not sure best way to phrase this but how "nude and sexual" do you plan to make this? Like will it just mostly be some breasts stuff, or will you explore some action with nipples, ass, vagina, etc.?

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Not planning for it to be as lewd as my other stories, espcially the stories I'm working on right now, but there will still be a bit of lewdness coming up in the next couple chapters.