[Report This]Date: September 27 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amanda, another fantastic story. In reference to your comments before the story, I wish my wife did look at me the way you look at men! Maybe I should be careful what I wish for, right?
Author's Response:
Who knows what dark thoughts lurk deep inside our minds eye....maybe your wife does have plans for you??....a personal urinal??...a fantasy that could easily become a reallity for you.Or maybe a meal for her,do you really know what we think?...men are so gullable...easily led...be careful what you wish for F.G.H it become a reality for you....
Amanda xxx
Date: February 21 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
MADAM AMANDA welcome back and again a very nice story you have written.
i miss you a lot
your desires are great
its natural for us to end in your stomach
Date: February 21 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Actually, darling Amanda, I have only passed comments with one other member - Stanley Williams - and nothing derogatory has been passed between us. I do like your stories, and apart from the numerous grammatical errors, your visions are rather exciting. Please forgive that silly joke, but we're all rather silly with our thoughts.
Once again, I deny sharing comments with those two characters you mentioned. Please continue your yarns. I save them all, you know. XXXX
Date: February 17 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Tony happened to meet Amanda outside the ladies public toilets: Hello, Amanda, you look please with yourself."
"Yes, I am," she replied, "I've just dumped Simon."
Author's Response:
You are persistant banfield i'll give you that but the word DUMPED is something i would never use,its very crude don't you think,i am sad that you have been sharing our personal conversations with other author's it seems you "Agrader" and "Timescribe "are not be trusted.But then you are typical males you are all the same male ego's and all that.
Let this be a warning to other female authors who write and communicate on this forum.
Date: February 15 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amanda, altho you say I am critical, I must stress that I am being constructive and helpful as is part of my profession. Jolly good to see you back and that you might construct a story to suit us both. Good luck.
Author's Response:
No insult was intended banfield thank you for your review x.
Amanda.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yet another thoughtful yarn from Amanda whom we all thought had drawn stumps and left the field. Very good story telling apart from the numerous grammatical errors, but not awfully exciting as it could be. Could try harder.
Author's Response:
Oh banfield stop being so critical and enjoy whats been written,i am sorry that i have not added to our little yarn i shall strive to please you at some point inthe future x.
Amanda.
Date: February 14 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
“Dreaming again Simon dear is it the same one,maybe its a glimps into your future. ”
This really took me by surprise, despite the slight clue given much earlier in the story.
This precognitive idea is a good new angle on a vore story.
Author's Response:
It reflects my current position my nights are filled with memories of past events,they are real to me as is the events depicted within my txt(in the fantasy context) did you enjoy it Timescribe?.Its been a while since the urge to write has taken control,i have made adjustments to the txt thank you for your review xx.
Amanda.