This story managed to deliver one final twist, I was convinced I had the situation with the children figured out, but I was mistaken. Of course, there is nothing wrong with the way it was done.

A notable achievement of this story is the fact, from the moment the first chapter was posted until the conclusion, it never lost the "New" tag. For a story spanning 26 chapters, that is truly impressive.

In a previous review I wrote, I shared an idea involving alternative timelines. I mean no disrespect, as I fully recognize that this is your story. but I have never reviewed a story as extensively as I have reviewed this one. so I am sharing four alternative timelines for this story that I have thought about. 

The first is simply What if julia never attempted To rape Ashley. So when the Registration Act happened They were still friends, or maybe even lovers. How would they tackle the changes that the ACT would bring while already having a healthy relationship.

The second is what if Barbera Was the one to find Ashley in the Club and become her owner? This, I think would be really fun idea to explore. 

The third idea is: What if Ashleys coma had lasted for 10 years? To me, this would be another fun idea to explore. 

The 4th is What if Ashlynn was only in a coma for 10 days? And this one I have an additional idea to combine it with, that being that Instead of Julia killing the Girl that put Ashley in a coma. Say some deal was stuck to Not go to trial. And the end result would basically be that Julia abuses the girl into becoming Ashley's Slave. 

but To finish this review. I want to say many, many thank you for sharing this amazing story With us readers. you're a really talented writer And I am really looking forward to reading more of your work.

Damn, I wasn’t expecting an ending. Sad to see it’s over, but this was one hell of a story. I’ve been reading this since January and while I had doubts about whether I’d wanna continue at points, you proved your merit as a writer every single time. Cheers

I have noticed the characters often use the word "goddess." Mostly, it seems be used in the same context as the word "god" in real life. However, I have also noticed instances where seems as if they are actually talking about a real goddess. So, is it just a saying, or is there actually a goddess? 

This chapter maintains the high quality seen throughout the story, and I really enjoyed it. 

p.s. I have read your "Soulmate of the Godling" story on SizeFiction, and I believe it has the potential to be a really good story. I really liked the first 3 chapters.

Well, if this chapter wasn't a new low for Julia, in an already pretty deep abyss.

Her wife almost died, her child just born, first act: "I'm gonna leave the room to fuck around with the woman who almost got you killed."

Especially, the part that she apparently doesn't feel anything for her daughter aside from a sort of accomplishment over her pretty much broken "get-along-with-everything-wife", she doesn't seem to particularly care about it.

Neither did anyone seem to mind here anymore that the increasingly sprawling discrimination threatens tinies and even Ashley to an ever greater degree. As I said, big low for Julia, after proclaiming she'd care about Ashley.

Ashley sometimes seems too little of a person with a will, the way she goes right away again along with any sexual antics, despite having almost died, her relationship with Julia should certainly become more equal instead of always taking the role of the slave (Julia was at times pretty much dependent on her approval).

Strange that Julia didn't take the obvious solution of implanting the last egg into herself. I thought it was going that way.

I really liked the cockvore scene! Ashley being the one to push for it was a fun power inversion, and it was really hot to read how aroused it made Julia. I also love love love muscular, smelly Julia! More abs! More biceps! More thighs!

Julia needing to spend time away from the family from work is an interesting twist to the dynamic, and a good way to get Ashley and Barbara closer together. I wonder how Julia is dealing with her urges while she is away?

Speaking of Julia's urges, we haven't seen her truly violent side in a while. It's something she may have been working on with Barbara while Ashley was in the coma, but I think it's still an important part of her character. I want Ashley to witness Julia inflicting severe, bone-breaking pain on Barbara. Will this frighten Ashley, or arouse her, or both?

I think another comment brought up the idea of Julia expanding her harem of partners. I am not opposed to this, if you introduce new characters slowly enough for us to get to know them. It would be interesting to see Ashley take a role in this. Maybe Julia could have Ashley and Barbara interview candidates to bring into their relationship in some capacity. Just don't give us too many new names at once.

The birthing chapter had a lot of good tension! Barbara's frantic rush and powerful footsteps (I love how strong she is!) were great at setting the scene. The world-building with the collar salesfuta was a nice touch, and it was great to see Barbara get so angry about it. And of course Dr. Nelson was a good twist, especially the way she starts to acknowledge Ashley's strength by the end.

I wonder how Isley having a tiny mother will affect her growing up. It seems to impact her legal status a bit, in that she has less right to own Ashley than Samantha does. Will she face discrimination or bullying growing up? Will this make her resentful of Ashley or push them closer together?

Another great chapter. 

One thing that has surprised me is the lack of discussion about Julia and possibly Barbara needing to take additional lovers. Barbara might be fine with just Ashlyn considering she is older and submissive, but Julia would definitely need to take lovers given the vastness of the limbo for a futa.

I am curious about Ashley's pregnancy While it could be completely normal, the emphasis on how large her baby seems to be makes me wonder if she could be carrying twins.

I also have two ideas that I'm not sure I want to happen, but I will share them here. The first is that the hospital made a mistake, and the baby is not actually Julia's.(it's a girl) The second idea is a continuation of the first, where the hospital and/or Julia takes the baby away from Ashlyn. 

Which would almost certainly be enough to push Ashlynn to be suicidal. 

I would not like to see the second idea come to fruition. I just wanted to share it. 

Looking forward to the next chapter, i'm really excited to find out how the wedding will go.

I have to say, this story is very good, I love the characters, Ashley is awesome, Julia's developement and growth is incredible, the smut scenes are very good. I hope you keep writing this story for a long time, is there an idea on the amount of chapters you want to write?

Interesting developments! Barbara is being so sweet with Ashley. The imagery of Barbara holding her in her mouth was so powerful; I loved how vulnerable Ashley was.

I can see that Ashley and Julia need to build their relationship back up a bit. I like that you are fully acknowledging how hard the time gap is on them, and how Barbara and Julia have their own relationship now.

I really liked Ashley trying to soften Julia with praise! I hope we see more exploration of Julia's younger mindset, with her seeking validation from Ashley. It gives Ashley a good measure of power in the relationship. (But not quite enough to get knocked up by Barbara.)

Are they going to a country where tinies still have rights? That will be an interesting change in dynamic! e.g. no collar in public. Ashley may be confronted with the opportunity to escape - to be free from Julia, to live independently. And of course she won't take it, but this will have an effect on her relationships.

Cock vore incoming! How will she breathe in there??

I really like the direction this chapter went! Ashley was starting to get comfortable, but the core of the story is Ashley’s struggle. I applaud you for making the bold decision to change the status quo and add tension back to the relationship.

I liked the restaurant scene. It was nice to see all of Ashley’s friends, tiny and futa, come to her aid. I loved the detail of the futas not allowing hard alcohol to their tinies.

The Breeding Act is wild! Do these Radicals even know any tinies? Julia’s intense response, compounded by the time pressure of Ashley’s fertility, makes perfect sense.

I hope Ashley can take the time to figure out what she wants out of life and what happiness means to her, considering the situation she is in. She can still find joy in books, her relationships, and hopefully her growing family.

Julia showed a huge amount of growth in offering to transfer her ownership! I wonder how she’s been dealing with her violent urges, with the stress of Ashley in a coma and a newborn at home. I’m not surprised she killed that futa. I wonder if that had any lasting effect on her.

Ashley is still very self conscious about being replaced by Barbara, and also about sex in general. It was so sad to read how she was worried her family would find the dildo in her corpse. I want Barbara and Ashley to really talk about the crazy circumstances that brought them together. And hopefully the futas can encourage more confidence in Ashley.

Ashley is about to be surrounded by futa children, between Julia’s kids and her half siblings. I am eager to see how she handles the stress of helping to raise them, and eventually her feelings as they outgrow her.

I thought it would be the typical power story where the giant is extremely evil and has no context beyond that, but I was surprised by the fact that his behavior evolves. I love the little details of the clothes, shoes and everything else, how the physical characteristics impact the characters, how Ashley slowly becomes more submissive to Julia, how Julia becomes that more compassionate side towards Ashley, it's just beautiful. I don't know, in a previous chapter I saw that Ashley came when she saw Julia twice her height, it would be amazing to see a bigger Julia in the future, that eclipses Barbara Bauer or that the smaller futas look the same as Ashley's scale. I think it could give it an interesting touch because of Julia's addiction to power.