[Report This]Date: February 04 2025 11:09 PM Title: Addicts
No tv?!! That’s harsh. Some of these restrictions just seem spiteful. Ashley’s parents must really love Agatha to put up with it. Will Ashley be able to order Barbara to turn on the tv for her? ;)
It will be hard for Ashley to raise a child when she can barely use the house she lives in, and Julia and Barbara are so large they won’t be able to help much with diapers, etc. As you alluded to last chapter, I really like the dynamic that Ashley’s futa children will vastly outgrow her and have more rights than her.
I was surprised - disappointed? - that Barbara submitted to Julia so quickly. I was hoping for more of a power struggle, to see Julia come out on top. Barbara seems to have some unresolved trauma, based on how she blew up at Ashley and was attracted to Julia because she had a loving relationship with a tiny. We’ve seen “Miss Bauer the bully” and “Barbara the whore”, but I am eager to see how the fully-developed character will fit into Ashley and Julia’s dynamic. The slave stuff is super hot, but if she’s going to be around all day, they need a real relationship, not just kink.
Using her butt to snap Ashley out of her haze was funny. I love gross Julia - bad hygiene is a great bonus humiliation.
I really like how you built up Ashley’s anxiety before the reveal. Things are good right now, but Ashley knows that Julia can make her life miserable in an instant. I wonder if they can get to a point in their relationship where Ashley won’t feel that fear, or if it’s intrinsic to the fact that she is a slave.
You call Barbara “Rebecca” by mistake a few times.
Can’t wait for more!
Date: February 04 2025 9:26 PM Title: Addicts
This story just keeps improving. I did not anticipate the direction it would take after reading the first chapter. I am eager to see how Barbara will influence the dynamic between Julia and Ashley. I have my fingers crossed that Ashley turns out to be a switch and will come to enjoy being dominant. I am looking forward to the next chapter. PS. I think this story now deserves the "gentle" tag in the description.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2025 8:06 AM Title: New Morning Routine
Cute! It’s so nice to see happy, playful Ashley. And she’s really starting to understand how to get what she needs out of her relationship with Julia.
“I wash my sextoys in the sink. I shower with my pregnant girlfriend” is a fantastic line.
Julia didn’t say if she still needed an outlet… that’s a bad omen.
Author's Response:
Ashley is indeed making progress in how to deal with her situation. Her owner is madly in love with her, so it can be used to make the whole situation bearable.
I'm really proud of the shower line, it was something I just thought on the spur to justify why Ashley hadn't been in there yet and I'm glad it works !
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 7:50 PM Title: Goddess is back
Very sweet chapter! I loved seeing how much they care for each other, and Julia supporting Ashley while admitting that she herself needs support too.
Interesting talk of “equals” while they still exist in an owner-tiny dynamic. I think it could make sense as “equal but different”. Equally valued and important, but playing different roles in the relationship. And Julia may see her role as making most of the big decisions.
The reveal that most futas don’t interact with or really care about tinies made the whole setting feel more plausible to me. Tinies are just an easily exploited minority group.
Great reminders of how strong Julia is, and a good explanation of how that’s safe. It’s very hot that Barbara is just as strong, and Ashley will be able to command that strength. She could use Barbara’s strength to be more physically aggressive with Julia.
I like how Julia is reframing the collar as a tool of pleasure. I think as they develop a more solid emotional foundation to their relationship, re-enacting their earlier, traumatic interactions will be a useful tool. Would you consider more role play elements? Now that we’ve established that Julia cares for Ashley, have them agree that she’ll pretend not to care about Ashley for a night. Let Ashley relive her worst moments to give her the catharsis of release when the role play is over. The sensation of Julia telling her she’s important is magnified tremendously when it immediately follows being degraded.
Author's Response:
Remember that for futas, Registered Individuals being "equal" doesn't mean the same thing we impart to this word. For them, tinies are equal in that they can work and being paid, basically. But everything else is them being property. In fact I'm considering a Breeding Bill down the line that could shake Julia and Ashley’s relationship, but it's very much up in the air still.
Tinies are indeed not even an afterthought for most Futanaris. They know they exist, but that's it. They don't care about them at all.
I don't think they will reenact the two weeks of Hell Ashley had, but there is a lot of ways to have kinky interactions there.
And as always, thanks for the comment !
[Report This]Date: January 30 2025 6:41 PM Title: Naughty Naughty
I love the idea of Julia making Barbara into Ashley’s toy! It shows Ashley that there are benefits to being owned by Julia, and that Ashley isn’t powerless, her power just comes from Julia. Ashley has been mostly passive so far in the bedroom, so I hope this lets more of her dominant side come out. Ashley’s repeated pacifism is frustrating to me sometimes, but I think it’s wise of her to not want Julia to get real blood on her hands. At the same time, futas are tough, and Ashley could be a little more aggressive.
More great progress from Julia! Still instinctively reacting with violence, but she can correct herself quickly. I think it’s hot when Ashley calls her Goddess, but emotional sex needs aftercare. I really like how Julia makes Ashley call her “Julia” in serious moments - the contrast against the debasement during sex is excellent.
Great emotional development from Ashley too, how she is coming to accept that she really wants Julia. Now she just has to get over her guilt at the way she likes to be treated.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
Ashley (and Julia) should start making progresses in chapter 10 and I wish to have it in full bloom by chapter 11 :)
[Report This]Date: January 30 2025 2:47 PM Title: Naughty Naughty
It kinda bothers me how they keep up that "goddess" thing. I know, she's supposed to be submissive, which is already sad in itself, as it more than anything seems to be a trauma-induced coping mechanism that gets reinforced through regular abuse, but it's particular about the implications of the word. It's already questionable if this kind of submission makes for a healthy relationship, but whenever she says it, Ashley is demeaning herself. It doesn't come about as loving, but rather as "I'm so insignificant in comparison", which was the exact thing Julia wanted to put a stop to. She even pointed it out right here that when this idea is reinforced in Ashley's mind she's just going along with everything. No matter how self-destructive the implications are, she's seeing herself as the lesser worshipper who has no point in disagreeing with what the goddess says. It's clearly not a "heat of the moment" thing, as she's again and again falling into this line whenever she's pressured into sex. While Julia proclaims to want to treat her as someone important, she allows that Ashley becomes someone who worships her. Yet aside from it being quite the hackneyed thing to say, a worshipper is someone who thinks little of oneself in comparison. It doesn't quite fit a relationship where the big one loves the smaller equally and wants them to know it.
Now Julia should ask herself, if Ashley becomes this self-demeaning, then wouldn't she also see everyone else as better than herself? Would she be willing to worship whoever else is in power over her if her self-confidence is so little that she can only see herself as an insignificant being with no relevance to make demands of her own? Julia's actions and intentions clash quite severely on this matter. On one side she says she would die for Ashley, which basically means she's implying that she thinks Ashley matters more than herself. On the other, she still falls into the owner, but worse, in the "you don't matter in bed" thinking, by simply forcing things on her she clearly said no to and then overpowers those by imposing the "I'm your goddess" idea. Yet exactly those moments are the most problematic. In those, Ashley loses all agenda to be her own person. Yet if she isn't her own person, she's just a slave who would crouch down for everyone. It feels like those moments drive her in this direction, as well with reinforcing that the system of the registration makes her an owned slave. With a little bit of critical thinking Julia should become aware that she makes Ashley think of herself as lesser than any futa, which given all that came from Julia is something she clearly doesn't want to imply. Seems like a fault how their dirty talk becomes the norm of their interaction.
It feels like a contradiction how she wants her to be submissive and think highly of herself. Though that probably doesn't even have to be. Theoretically, it should be possible to make the calls while still reinforcing that Ashley's opinion matters.
Maybe for once, Julia should make it a point to call Ashley a goddess. Say positive things instead of pushing her down. It's kinda the question if she truly wants Ashley as someone thinking of themselves as having any value in this relationship.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm glad I finished writing the next chapter that I'll post tomorrow before this comment, because then I know you'll like the next one. At least the end of it and what it'll require from both parties ! And you're right that Ashley is debasing herself and basically hurting herself in the process. It'll be adressed next chapter and then I want to have the two of them, Julia and Ashley build up something more wholesome.
[Report This]Date: January 29 2025 3:32 AM Title: The Lunch Party
I’m glad you appreciate my input. I don’t want to be overbearing.
I couldn’t be mad at Ripley, she’s too immature :)
The concept of her making this dramatic proclamation, then needing to pay the tiny staff to replace what she broke, was hilarious! And I’m sure Ripley thinks she’s a good friend, but only by futa standards. I remember Ashley wishing Ripley had registered her, that they could have been “like roommates”. I doubt it.
It seems all the futas here are still very immature, or maybe willfully ignorant to not see the pain their tiny lovers are going through. You did a great job expressing how this was just such an improvement for futas, they can’t bring themselves to care about the consequences. The futas seem focused on the worst case scenario, that a tiny might have a cruel owner. But they don’t see the negative impact of their smaller humiliations accumulating, the financial transfer and internet controls being the biggest issues to me. And for the tinies, there is a special frustration that the real enemy is the system, so they can’t usefully direct their anger at their owners, but their owners still benefit from it and hold control.
Is futa support for the Registration Act really 100%? I can see all the futas here supporting it, but I’m less certain about Agatha or Alice. It sort of feels like Ashley’s friend group’s owners are too hopped up on testosterone from their enormous balls. Or maybe these are the level-headed ones and Julia’s friends are way worse.
Ashlynn’s comment that inter-breeding will soothe tensions has me curious. What is the outcome of futa-tiny pairing, a futa, a tiny, or possibly either? Does it matter which one is pregnant? It seems like the lines between marriage and ownership will quickly blur, plus larger arrangements. And futa mothers may have mixed feelings about their tiny children being property. And if tinies raise futa children, with tinies likely getting a majority of the household duties forced on them, they can influence them to be kinder.
Also, I recall that futas greatly outnumber tinies, so many will not have registered one. They are probably quite upset about that, and even if owners soften over time, this larger group might not.
I like Caroline a lot! I hope Amadis gets to transfer her credits to a new school :(
Stella’s dub-consensual breeding was intense! I love belly bulges. But futas do not seem to respect higher education for women haha. It was great how you had Ashley walk out to see them and get an offer to join in. I’m curious if Julia would be interested in sharing Ashley briefly, or if she’s too possessive.
Rebecca, Ripley, and Marc do seem sweet together.
Can’t wait to get back to Julia! Hoping to see more emotionally charged sex scenes now that they’ve opened up a bit. I really like idea of re-enacting previous trauma, like the collar, but now Ashley has a greater level of comfort in the situation and even a little control and boundaries. This seems both hot and effective for the healing process. I wonder if Julia would respect a safe word?
Excited for more!
Author's Response:
Haha, glad you liked the chapter !
Futanaris are somewhat ignorant, especially the younger ones, who really are too driven by their libido. What can be bad about having a huge lover litterally obssessed with you ? Not having to deal with the administration, pay taxes and the like, isn't it enough to compensate from everything ? They have a hard time emphatizing with tinies, even those they love, because for them, it just seems better. They see the good side and ignore the downsides. It can come to bit them in the ass, like Ripley having to pay for what she destroyed in her grand proclamation (ultimately proving it to be quite hollow, if sadly true, in a way).
Julia's friends are... We'll see them, someday. They are supposedly quite something, yeah. Think, elite powerful kids added on normal futa arrogant behaviour.
Regarding the larger view of futas, it's exposed in tomorrow's chapter (oh shit, it's already 10 chapters in, and I still have ideas ><).
Inter-breeding basically give birth to Futas or men. With largely more Futas. Women born from a futa/normal are unheard off, basically.
And I think chapter 10 will satisfy you on the Ashley/Julia emotional sex scene.
[Report This]Date: January 27 2025 11:41 PM Title: Aimless
Good chapter, I liked the insight we are getting into Ashley’s mind. The almost-cheating surprised me but it made a lot of sense. I was more surprised that Julia tolerated it so well, even finding it arousing. Or was she aroused that Ashley didn’t go through with it, or that she confessed it to her? It ties in with Julia fucking other futas on the side. I could imagine Julia and Ashley rotating in another futa to their bedroom for Julia to violently penetrate. I get the impression Ashley would enjoy watching that.
Happy to see Agatha stick up for Ashley again. I wonder what Ashley’s parents think about all this. They obviously want to protect their daughter, but Agatha is the only one who has any influence on Julia, not that it’s much.
I really like how controlling Julia is right now. Super possessive and intolerant of privacy, but still asking for consent and allowing some basic mobility and independence. The mostly-consensual shocking is an excellent idea. I am looking forward to Julia eventually meeting Ashley’s friends and seeing if she can act “normal” and how they will react to her.
Very intense to see how Ashley has become so reliant on Julia and has built her up so much in her mind. There’s definitely an appeal to dating your deity.
Eager for more!
Author's Response:
As always, thanks for the detailed reviews ! They are fuel for my ideas, so really you're helping me a lot haha !
I can't wait to get back to the collar... but today's chapter is really less about Julia than it is about Ashley and her own situation. I hope you'll like it ! And won't hate Ripley too much haha !
Date: January 27 2025 9:11 PM Title: Abudcted
So I have to admit this story surprised me. To be honest I am usually not into futanari. Especially with over enlarged appendages. But Julia has won me over. She so delightfully cruel and yet loving. I like that Ashley is such a bottom. So yea I wasn’t really into this story, I usually prefer extreme size diference. But you have done well. I like the cruel love that is going on here
Author's Response:
Hey thanks !
I'm pretty sure this story was partially inspired by A Growing Need by lilnit. It's another great futa story, with more extreme size difference, and it's only three chapters long (sadly, if you ask me :P).
I'll be honest, I'm really liking Julia's cruelty. Usually, I don't like cruel giantesses too much, but I find that a cruelly loving giantess really gets me going, which is nice !
[Report This]Date: January 26 2025 9:27 PM Title: Work interview
Another great chapter! Poor Ashley just can’t get a win :(
It’s nice to see that Ashley saw her friends and that she can still rely on them for a sense of normalcy. They seem ok - I like the bashful QB - but I’m surprised that all the tinies have just accepted their fates. I figured there would be more talk of rebelling, or at least complaining.
I really like how Ashley isn’t content with the little handouts Julia gives her, like partial phone access, and keeps pushing for more. Julia has already come so far though! She seems friendlier and more supportive. Julia from two weeks ago would never say “you must have been so afraid, I’m sorry.” The tenderness in this sex scene was wonderful.
I’m curious to see how Julia will handle her violent urges long-term. I believe she doesn’t want to seriously hurt Ashley, but I suspect she still wants to inflict some pain. Could Ashley enjoy that? Can they find a way of doing that in a safe way? Is there a way to redirect Julia’s most violent urges, maybe onto someone else? Maybe Ashley’s worship is enough to satiate her.
It’s a big milestone for Ashley to see Julia as her girlfriend! As their sexual relationship deepens, I wonder if Ashley can leverage that more. Julia could figure out pretty quickly that a happy Ashley is better in bed. But it might be complicated to work that in with Ashley’s masochistic tendencies.
Author's Response:
We will see more of Ashley’s friends and their take on this new world order really soon :) ! And more of their futas also. Now that it's clear that story doesn't want to end just yet, I may as well go wild !
Ashley will always fight for more rights, but she'll obviously have to make due with the limitations imposed on her by the Registration Act - and how far Julia is willing to compromise, until she considers it's too much and even Ashley won't change her mind on that.
Julia has darker urges than you can suspect and they'll surface soon enough. Suffice to say that her love can sometimes be really twisted and that when one falls for her, it may become harder to untangle the healthy and not so healthy parts of that love, as Ashley will discover.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2025 1:50 AM Title: The Talk
A beautiful chapter.
I felt Ashley’s frustration at Julia’s attitude. I also started to understand how frustrating this must be for Julia. Everything just comes to her, even Ashley’s body, but not Ashley’s love, and Julia’s condition makes it so hard for her to understand how to win it.
I was really skeptical about what love means to someone with Julia’s condition. But I think it’s real because she has been so quick to bend on her decisions. “I own you, the internet is a distraction” to “I’ll think about” to “here’s my tablet” in one night? I don’t think Julia has the patience for this to be manipulation, and I don’t think she could tolerate the challenge to her authority from anyone else. Julia does love Ashley. She’s just operating with the emotional toolbox of a child.
I still think Julia has work to do. She might lack instinctive empathy, but she knows what healthy relationships look like. And there are subtler things. When Ashley doubts in her ability to work at a top museum, Julia’s pep talk is that she will inflict violence on her detractors, instead of supporting Ashley’s own abilities. But it’s clear Julia is trying. Offering to sell Ashley was the ultimate vulnerable gesture. Humiliating that it comes back to Ashley being property, but sweet nonetheless.
They’re almost there. They had a good talk, but I think another one is still needed. Ashley needs to sort out exactly how submissive she wants to be, and Julia needs to learn that she can’t play the “because I’m your owner” card during a fight and expect it to go well. And they should probably finish dealing with the unresolved trauma Julia has inflicted. Then they can finally start setting some boundaries.
I like how Ashley is starting to find some enjoyment in Julia’s power. The “I belong to you, you belong to me” dynamic is very hot. And it’s interesting you mentioned protectiveness. I would enjoy seeing Julia’s strength used to protect Ashley from another futa.
The sex scene was great. I love how Julia is total physically impervious to Ashley, but can still be pleasured by her. I’m very curious to see how you pull off the cock vore without Ashley drowning!
Author's Response:
Thanks !
I'm glad that I'm managing to convey Julia's feelings and difficulties articulating them in a healthy way. It means that, despite having to write in another language (English) than my native one, I'm managing it. Julia will keep trying, and probably get better at it, little by little, even if her efforts will sometimes blow up in her face. But that's how one's learn, after all.
Ashley being property is an important element of the setting, so I don't think it'll ever change - futas knew of the abuse that the Registration Act could lead to, they still voted for it to be put in place, so Ashley's life can't be used as an example of why it needs to be struck down. But that means that I have other ways to convey the power dynamics, so it's a plus in my book ^^.
Finally, regarding the cockvore, I don't know anymore when it'll happen... but it'll be a very important scene.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2025 7:39 AM Title: Back to college
Ok, the “you don’t talk back to me” was pretty scary, and not a sign of a healthy relationship. Dominant or not, Julia needs to be able to fight with Ashley without exploding or zapping her.
She really did some psychological damage with that collar. I loved the mood-change when Ashley talked about Julia discarding her, and I hope Julia also reflects on Ashley’s terror of the collar afterwards. I thought you wrote the scene very well. Does Ashley really believe what she said, that she expects to die by Julia’s cock? I think Ashley still needs to separate her fears from her desires.
Interesting that Ashley wanted to deliberately debase herself as much as possible to calm Julia. I would like to see Ashley try to be more strategic with how she emotionally pushes at Julia. She still has some fire in her, which was very nice to see with Rebecca. I hope Marc is ok. I want to see more of the experiences of other tinies.
The additional humiliations were fun. The clothing is just rude, considering Julia was the one who threw out her old clothes, and she now has all of Ashley’s money and could use it to buy her more clothes. And the internet restrictions were chilling. Could Julia unlock Ashley’s phone if she chose?
Ripley frustrated me a lot. I acknowledge that she’s the nicest futa we’ve seen other than Agatha, but she seemed to be self-rationalizing her lies to Ashley to hide her own desires. Her reason doesn’t make sense. A tiny could just as easily harm themselves after being registered. I think it’s more likely even, unless a majority of futas are a lot nicer than Julia.
The strength lore was neat. I can’t wait to see Julia’s absurd strength in action!
Great work!
Author's Response:
Yeah, the collar turned out to be a really great tool, both to create humiliating situations, and also to confront Julia and force her to see the consequences of her actions. In the Chapter 6, currently being written, I try to show how our giantess feels about it all, how she struggles with her personality disorder and how she is, slowly, realizing it's truly an obstacle in the way to the relationship she wants to have with Ashley.
The fears of Ashley will also be adressed next chapter (but I haven't started writing this part yet, I think chapter 6 will be really long, as I don't really want to split it up).
I can assure you that Marc is perfectly okay, now that he is the treasured tiny in a trouple ^^. Futanaris are intenses, but they can be gentle, and while he was dispirited, Rebecca wasn't demeaning to him, just a little mean.
Regarding the clothing, she used Ashley's money to buy her her new wardrobe, so she doesn't want to uses more of it for more clothes yet (because, of course Julia can't even grasp the idea of using her own - considerable - funds to do so).
Finally, regarding the strengh lore, it's largely exagerated - Julia would have obliterated Ashley when she backhanded her otherwise. But she is way stronger than almost anyone on Earth, and it may come in a future display.
Date: January 25 2025 4:26 AM Title: Back to college
I think you are a terrific writer and you are doing a great job here.
I love the S/M aspect of this story and focus on humiliation instead of violence, which is so common on this site.
I also really like both characters, and they have a great chemistry, since both of them a battling conflicting natures. Julia absolutely loves Ash, but her sexual side gets off on humiliating, dominating and debasing her.
Ash, on the other hand wants freedom and dignity of a normal person, but has very strong closeted masochistic sexual urges.
I look forward to new chapters, and thanks for writing the ones you did so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise !
Humiliation is indeed something I'd rather focus on that pure violence, as I feel Julia's character would never be able to get back on something healthier if she got off using direct violence on Ashley. And both of them are indeed struck in a situation where different portions of their personalities are at odds with each other. They need to find a way to reconcile them, otherwise everything will just blow up in their face. Badly.
Date: January 24 2025 4:47 PM Title: Back to college
I'm really liking this story, I think it's a nice mix of porn with plot. One thing I would really like to read. Is for julia to give ashlynn free reign of her body without Julia forcing her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
I have something like that in mind, but I don't know in how many chapters it'll happen. Perhaps the next, perhaps later.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2025 12:49 PM Title: Abudcted
I'm actually not that much of a fan that the MC is essentially broken at that point and basically has no fight left, instead going along with everything that's thrown at her no matter how bad.
While it might be crass, she would actually have a way to assert dominance over Julia. And that's threatening with suicide.
She was already close to it during the first two weeks. It wouldn't actually be that much of a jump. The fact that she could basically throw that into her face and completely destroy that giant asshole by doing so would be the cherry on top. Julia is thrown between making her suffer, and love. However, actual damage would completely throw her off. Ashley wouldn't even have to go all the way. Every kind of damage to her body would suffice. Next time shock collar, cut open your wrist. Or simply bite it open. Or bite through your tongue. Ram your head against the wall. The main point would be that Julia is too crude to even prevent it. She can't do first aid, she can't even successfully restrain her from harming herself, because she is harm herself. All she knows is violence and terror, but you can't terrorize someone who essentially has given up and does those things based on the fact that living without Julia making heavy concessions would be too bleak. It's even a question if hospitals still treat tinies, which would make those threats all the more severe. If she'd show Julia that for any attempt to make it worse for her, for any demeaning action she'd be one step closer to losing her, yep, that would have effect. If the next time she pushes her ito her panties, them slowly filling with her tongue blood may do wonders.
(Not sure how that appeal/openly declaring that one's dying would work, but it might at least be officially questionable if it comes out that people are killing tinies, or that Julia's "care" is doing so, yet given what we saw the Registration Act is essentially an ethnic cleansing, so that may not work)
The story riled me up quite a lot, because I feel with the "slaves" in this kind of story. If one wants to be free they should be able to at least fight for it with everything they got. Do everything one can to make the oppressors realize their mistake. And if they on't cause enough harm that it becomes apparent.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
I agree with basically all of it, but self-mutilation and suicide (even threatened) are something that really, really make me squirm. Not that it won't happen in the story, everything is possible. But it's really something I'm not comfortable with. However, I definitely wants Ashley to fight for her rights, and Julia to understand that, for her to truly form some durable and (relatively) healthy with Ashley, she needs to allow her friend to get out of the bad spiral she's in. Which is extremely difficult for her, considering her personality. The shift from a one-shot to a longer story means that I got a true end point to reach and somewhat of a slow-burn (not too slow, hopefully!)
What I'd want is for Ashley to use her life outside the house to regain some form of confidence in herself, to reassert herself, slowly but surely. It'll also be a great opportunity to showcase what the "registered individuals" truly go through, and how it affects them and the Futanaris around them. Of course, Julia remains largely a threat to her self confidence, but the events of chapter 4 will have had an effect on our giantess threat also. Ideally, I'd like the story to finish on the two of them in a healthy-ish relationship, with Julia truly doing efforts and attemps to better herself for Ashley's sake, while Ashley will find a balance between the submissive tendency her owner had induced in her (a return, with a vengeance, to who she had been when Julia grew as a teenager) and her more dominant, outgoing, natural personality.
Of course, it is one of my darker stories, so the imbalance between the two won't entirely be erased (it is, in any case, inherent to the Giantess genre, as one partner is often smaller than the other, considerably so, and thus at the mercy of the Giantess' whims and desires). But overall, now that it isn't just a grim one-shot, I want submission from Ashley's part to be freely given, hers to give so to speak, and not something Julia forces on her. Which isn't the case currently, of course, and it's something that Julia herself will need to recognize and try to correct, basically undoing her actions (both the one when she was 15 and in grief, and those of the last two weeks).
[Report This]Date: January 24 2025 6:17 AM Title: Family Dinner
Really great chapter!
I liked seeing Agatha’s much healthier relationships and the effect that has on Julia. Agatha definitely needed to talk some sense into Julia, and Ashley needed the support. It reminds me of Kat and Mouse. It does seem extremely naive of Julia, bordering on gaslighting, to act surprised that Ashley was afraid to tell her she wanted to stay in college.
The psychopath reveal was nice. Killing animals is a pretty severe expression of the disorder. We’ve seen Julia be pretty mean to Ashley, but that’s a whole other level. Julia just doesn’t come across that scary. Maybe it’s all the pink. It might be a nice contrast if you can put her in a situation where she can be really violent towards someone else, so we can see what she is capable of doing to Ashley but chooses not to.
We now have a pretty good idea of Julia’s motivations, but it’s still not clear what Ashley wants, or if she herself even knows. I was surprised that you seem to be going in the direction of Ashley enjoying some of the humiliation aspects. I should have seen it coming when she got aroused from eating sperm last chapter, but I thought it might be an effect of the sperm itself. But it was really intense that she chose to keep the collar on. I know she said it was to avoid total nudity, but I suspect the real reason is that she finds what it symbolizes thrilling.
I think Ashley and Julia are finally ready to have an adult conversation about what they want their relationship to be. Ashley now understands that she still has some rights in the relationship, and Julia has… let the pressure release? I hope they can set some boundaries while exploring this D/s dynamic in a healthier way. The psychopath thing needs to be addressed - Ashley needs to feel safe in the relationship. And I think she deserves more of an apology for being forced to sleep on a rag, eat dog food, etc. But there’s hope. Can’t wait for more!
Author's Response:
They'll need to have a discussion indeed. It'll probably happen in chapter 5, considering the flow of the story. It'll force Ashley to confront what she wants out of it, knowing that what she would truly crave (ie, not being a registered individual) is completely impossible to achieve for her, just out of her hands. She's also stuck, as someone who discovered her sexual attraction to other people far later than Julia, in a strange phase where she doesn't really know what she likes, what she wants out of any relationship, how she can feel and how she may want to feel in such a dynamic. It's particularly difficult for her considering her situation, where equality has basically be stripped out of her. She's in need of some serious soul-searching to achieve a more balanced understanding of herself, her relation to Julia and her new place in the world.
I chose to have Julia be a really severe case to better highlight the fact that she truly is in love with Ashley and tries to show it in a more conventional way - and fail miserably. She is striving to be better, and you'll see in chapter 4 that revealing herself in chapter 3 may have done more harm than good in that way, at least on a short term level. But chapter 4 may have given something very much needed for Ashley to thrive : space for herself.
God, chapter 5 is coming sooner or later... and it won't be the last... It was supposed to be a one-shot XD
[Report This]Date: January 22 2025 2:16 AM Title: Two week after
Wow! I have a lot of thoughts I will list in no specific order.
Obviously this sucks for Ashley, but the reality is that someone is going to own her. Julia might really be her best option, considering all futas appear to be sex-crazed slavers.
Are all futas sex-crazed slavers? Are some more reasonable? Julia doesn’t seem all bad - she wants Ashley to leave the house at least. I can’t tell if Ashley’s assertion that she is just “a way for Julia to feel better” is true.
I love the complexity of the relationship. The pain of the rape attempt combines beautifully with the effect on Ashley’s sexual development. Julia really is the only futa that could have this confusing effect on her.
The core question of the story is whether Julia really loves her. If she doesn’t, Ashley’s current situation is as good as it will get for her. But if she does, I think Ashley could leverage that. I’m a bit confused. Julia says she’ll give her anything in return for love, but immediately pivots back to making demands. Is this controlling behavior who she is, or the only way she knows how to be? Can Ashley coax a different kind of love out of her?
I definitely want to see more of the parents. Did they put up a fight when Agatha came? What are they going through now? I prefer the 3m size to 6m, especially for characters with dicks, otherwise insertion is impractical. Does Agatha harbor vengeance towards men after her wife’s death?
This setting is ripe for other stories too. The passing of the act is a great catalyst for action. E.g. rushing to nab a crush and hunting them down. Or a non-futa desperately trying to get to their futa partner before being claimed by someone else.
Great work!
Author's Response:
Not all futas are as unhinged as Julia, no. I think we'll see Agatha has a far healthier take on relationships with normal peoples, once she'll have settled down from the crush she has had, for a long time, on Ashley's parents.
We should see next chapter (if I stick to it) how Julia feels truly and who she is and why her relationship with Ashley is so intense, obsessive and important to her. So far I have made her obliviously cruel, but I am toying with the idea of making her truly a sadist who has fallen utterly in love with Ashley, and struggles to reconcile her own needs in such a relationship which what she knows is good for Ashley. Not sure I'll go that route yet, we'll see.
In any case, it is a certainty that Julia loves Ashley. The question is can she manage to love her in an healthier way, and why do she feels the need to be so controlling. It should be adressed next chapter, later in the week, if I can stick to it, as I said above.
We won't see too much of Agatha and Ashley's parents, but some nonetheless, since I want to focus more on Ashley and Julia, and their relationship.
As for the setting, the Registration Bill was a spur of the moment inspiration haha ! I didn't plan beyond "huge futa abduct her childhood friend". I agree that six meters is too huge for penetration but initially I had planned to end the one-shot chapter by a cock-vore scene. I still plan to have one down the line, hence why Julia's cock grew even more monstrous this chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2025 4:29 PM Title: Abudcted
Amazing story, really dig deep into humillation, love it
Please continue it
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the review !
I may add at least one more chapter, as some ideas are in my head already. No promise yet however !