Reviewer: expenti0 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2025 6:08 PM Title: Introducing the fiancée

Well, now we'll get to know if hospitals for tinies even still exist or if discrimination took hold there as well. The fact that they are systematically shut off from communication and information doesn't leave much hope.

Though at least there are children, which are all small. Which on the other side leads to the very disturbing thought of what happened to the children who didn't yet hit puberty. Their parents taken, them being shoved into hamster cages, at the mercy of sex-crazed lunatics. Maybe at the age of three. That's quite the horror.

It's even questionable if this attempted killing will be more than a simple offense in court.

Yet it might pose one of the only ways for things to get better, if super-infatuated futas get all violent. And it seems quite common that they become super violent about their tinies.

Especially, it poses a problem if they're supposed to raise mixed children, while essentially be considered a lesser race that has no access to any facilities.

Though for now this world is still super-dystopian and it makes one quite sad to think about together all the implications of destroyed existences and torture of beings simply for being not as big.

I hope a bit that to the end there might be a brighter outlook at the world, without little girls who can only hope they'll make it alive till adulthood, only to be put into a life as possessions without any rights.

Author's Response:

Well, it will remain a dystopian world as inequality is backed in the setting I'm afraid but when it comes to infrastructures and the like it is light years better than our world.

Also, woman x futa only gives futa or male (extremely raremy), so no mixed children basically.

But that violent event will have personnal and societal repercussions ideally, if I manage to write it down properly.

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2025 12:28 AM Title: Threesome Troubles

I’ve really enjoyed how you explore Ashley’s insecurities in the relationship. All three of them have blind spots. Ashley pointed out very obvious things to both futas during her outburst, but she herself can’t believe the obvious truth that Julia is infatuated with her.

Julia feeding Ashley was great, as was her recognizing, unprompted, that Ashley needs normal meals too. Julia’s getting better! I love how you incorporate food and other basic necessities into Ashley’s humiliation.

I feel sorry for the futas that their relationships are primarily sexual. It sounds lonely. I think the futas understand lust and sexual pleasure, and perhaps even love, but they seem to lack joy in their lives. Where is the laughter, the contentment? It reminds me of Major/minor where the bigger race is hornier but often less socially adept. I really like that Ashley can teach them something, that her role in the relationship can be the emotional navigator.

It will be nice to see Ashley and Barbara bond a bit over books! They can borrow from each other. I hope Julia doesn’t get too jealous. It was really touching when Julia got upset that she had never made Ashley as happy as when she talked about books. Barbara, as far as we know, is not a psychopath and can connect with Ashley in ways that Julia cannot. I wonder if Julia can learn from how Barbara interacts with Ashley. Not necessarily Julia submitting to Ashley, but being a slightly more normal person to her.

I can’t wait to see Julia’s drawings!

Author's Response:

Reacting a bit late as I hadn't much time sadly ! I'm glad you're still liking the story haha ! Hopefully that'll continue in the future :) !

Reviewer: Sereum Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2025 2:41 AM Title: Abudcted

I love this story! The dynamic between Julia, Ashley, and Barbara is really hot and I can't wait to read what type of kinky shit they'll get up too. As soon as I read Miss Bauer deepthroating Julia all I could think about was Julia cock voring Ashley then cumming her down Miss Bauer throat then being brought back up since Julia wouldn't ever let any serious harm happen to her. Anyways definitely one of the hottest giantess futa stories I've read.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review !

I think that Julia would veto a deppthroating release of Ashley from her balls. But now I have that idea in mind, so who knows !

Reviewer: expenti0 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2025 3:11 PM Title: Meeting the new pet

I need to say that Julia sometimes makes hope that something about this can work out and then the bad stuff she does overweigh so stupidly much that it's not funny anymore.

Getting rid of Ashley's books, something she knew was important to her and her happiness, that was messed up. It certainly wasn't about space. There's absolutely no justification but that she again wanted to destroy her personality by eliminating one of her interests that isn't her. But that's not how there's even a chance that they'll have something remotely resembling a relationship where Ashley can feel as a person that matters. If Ashley can't have any interests then we're again at her being an empty shell at Julia's mercy, which supposedly isn't the goal (despite all the practical evidence against this).

It's a bit infuriating how Julia claims to have Ashley's well-being in mind and intends to gift her everything, only to run right over her and not give a shit about her wishes (well one shit, given chapter 12). Ashley can tell as often as she wants that she doesn't want something, but Julia takes even the autonomy of her body away from her (which ties really badly back to reality when I see Trump supporters raise canvasses that read "Your Body, My Decision"). If she truly cared the slightest bit about her mental wellbeing she'd listen. Yet sadly Ashley always loses all personal agenda, hopes, dreams, and even her mind the moment she gets into any remotely sexual situation and goes into sex slave/pet/toy mode. Even those that by all accounts shouldn't be the slightest bit pleasant for her (I mean asscrack, seriously?). It's kinda sad that the only times when she speaks up isn't when she wants something, but only to be needy of her owner. That should even bother Julia, as her future wife lost all hopes and dreams of her own. Can't see much of the old Julia in that. That becomes especially apparent when she's by herself and simply stops being a person, but some dog that only has her owner on her mind.

Barbara is certainly messed up. Her reasoning is hard to follow that she hurts tinies because she loves them. She wasn't lashing out at Julia when she specifically targeted Ashley and HER hopes and dreams and intended to put an end to them, so her justification doesn't make sense. Yet I feel particularly sorry for Marina and hope something good will happen to her in the story. Yet I have no idea what Barbara was even intending to say. Marina is a bad tiny who deserves being tortured, because she's regularly getting abused and has to take it? What does Barbara think Marina is supposed to do in a world where tinies became disposable property (tying back to the news where tinies get killed in sex crimes; certainly without murder charges for the perpetrators)? She's in no position to ask for help, because everyone around her and all of society supports the one torturing her. Marina's mind was broken by all that happened and Barbara claims she's at fault? Is she seriously unable to catch the idea that confidence has to be built up and that people may have personality issues after constant torment? As I said, messed up, and the fact that Ashley basically agreed with her, by going along in the discussion is slightly infuriating.

In addition, the part with the leash showed again quite how little care everyone shows for her. Her frickin neck could have snapped! That it only lasted a second doesn't help there. Snapping a neck doesn't get that much better even if it only lasts a second. That's by the way how most hanged men died. The sudden pressure on the neck, not the strangulation. She could've died there. Not sure how the leash was even supposed to make her look like someone even remotely fit to be in a superior position to Barbara.

Damn, how much I'd wish for some karmic throwback to all those who're yet guilty of all this neglect to those they consider smaller and lesser. I like it far more if those experience the things they make others feel. The futas are all so high of themselves that they certainly don't deserve the happiness they can only gain by taking and destroying others without any care. Maybe a virus that only targets them. Maybe the tinies will develop something. Can't even see how that society makes for any intellectual jumps the way everyone is hormone controlled.

Nonetheless, good writing. Even if it's mostly rage, it triggers my emotions.

Author's Response:

I guess rage appreciation is a thing ? I didn't want to trigger you that way haha !

The two futas are pretty messed up, yeah. But since the way they are messed up is so different, it may come to blow in Julia's face (spoiler, it will next chapter) and Ashley will make use of it. 

Remember that Ashley herself is a victim of trauma and that she's suffering herself. But I do plan of having her reverse some things. She is already building toward those victories, even if she doesn't realize it. It should start to come more into focus next chapter.

Reviewer: shadowguy015 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2025 9:26 PM Title: Addicts

This story just keeps improving. I did not anticipate the direction it would take after reading the first chapter. I am eager to see how Barbara will influence the dynamic between Julia and Ashley. I have my fingers crossed that Ashley turns out to be a switch and will come to enjoy being dominant. I am looking forward to the next chapter. PS. I think this story now deserves the "gentle" tag in the description.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the praise !  And you're right, I may need to add the gentle tag ^^

As for Ashley and Barbara, I think you may be surprised haha !

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2025 7:50 PM Title: Goddess is back

Very sweet chapter! I loved seeing how much they care for each other, and Julia supporting Ashley while admitting that she herself needs support too.

Interesting talk of “equals” while they still exist in an owner-tiny dynamic. I think it could make sense as “equal but different”. Equally valued and important, but playing different roles in the relationship. And Julia may see her role as making most of the big decisions.

The reveal that most futas don’t interact with or really care about tinies made the whole setting feel more plausible to me. Tinies are just an easily exploited minority group.

Great reminders of how strong Julia is, and a good explanation of how that’s safe. It’s very hot that Barbara is just as strong, and Ashley will be able to command that strength. She could use Barbara’s strength to be more physically aggressive with Julia.

I like how Julia is reframing the collar as a tool of pleasure. I think as they develop a more solid emotional foundation to their relationship, re-enacting their earlier, traumatic interactions will be a useful tool. Would you consider more role play elements? Now that we’ve established that Julia cares for Ashley, have them agree that she’ll pretend not to care about Ashley for a night. Let Ashley relive her worst moments to give her the catharsis of release when the role play is over. The sensation of Julia telling her she’s important is magnified tremendously when it immediately follows being degraded.

Author's Response:

Remember that for futas, Registered Individuals being "equal" doesn't mean the same thing we impart to this word. For them, tinies are equal in that they can work and being paid, basically. But everything else is them being property. In fact I'm considering a Breeding Bill down the line that could shake Julia and Ashley’s relationship, but it's very much up in the air still.

Tinies are indeed not even an afterthought for most Futanaris. They know they exist, but that's it. They don't care about them at all.

I don't think they will reenact the two weeks of Hell Ashley had, but there is a lot of ways to have kinky interactions there. 

And as always, thanks for the comment !

Reviewer: expenti0 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2025 2:47 PM Title: Naughty Naughty

It kinda bothers me how they keep up that "goddess" thing. I know, she's supposed to be submissive, which is already sad in itself, as it more than anything seems to be a trauma-induced coping mechanism that gets reinforced through regular abuse, but it's particular about the implications of the word. It's already questionable if this kind of submission makes for a healthy relationship, but whenever she says it, Ashley is demeaning herself. It doesn't come about as loving, but rather as "I'm so insignificant in comparison", which was the exact thing Julia wanted to put a stop to. She even pointed it out right here that when this idea is reinforced in Ashley's mind she's just going along with everything. No matter how self-destructive the implications are, she's seeing herself as the lesser worshipper who has no point in disagreeing with what the goddess says. It's clearly not a "heat of the moment" thing, as she's again and again falling into this line whenever she's pressured into sex. While Julia proclaims to want to treat her as someone important, she allows that Ashley becomes someone who worships her. Yet aside from it being quite the hackneyed thing to say, a worshipper is someone who thinks little of oneself in comparison. It doesn't quite fit a relationship where the big one loves the smaller equally and wants them to know it.
Now Julia should ask herself, if Ashley becomes this self-demeaning, then wouldn't she also see everyone else as better than herself? Would she be willing to worship whoever else is in power over her if her self-confidence is so little that she can only see herself as an insignificant being with no relevance to make demands of her own? Julia's actions and intentions clash quite severely on this matter. On one side she says she would die for Ashley, which basically means she's implying that she thinks Ashley matters more than herself. On the other, she still falls into the owner, but worse, in the "you don't matter in bed" thinking, by simply forcing things on her she clearly said no to and then overpowers those by imposing the "I'm your goddess" idea. Yet exactly those moments are the most problematic. In those, Ashley loses all agenda to be her own person. Yet if she isn't her own person, she's just a slave who would crouch down for everyone. It feels like those moments drive her in this direction, as well with reinforcing that the system of the registration makes her an owned slave. With a little bit of critical thinking Julia should become aware that she makes Ashley think of herself as lesser than any futa, which given all that came from Julia is something she clearly doesn't want to imply. Seems like a fault how their dirty talk becomes the norm of their interaction.

It feels like a contradiction how she wants her to be submissive and think highly of herself. Though that probably doesn't even have to be. Theoretically, it should be possible to make the calls while still reinforcing that Ashley's opinion matters.

Maybe for once, Julia should make it a point to call Ashley a goddess. Say positive things instead of pushing her down. It's kinda the question if she truly wants Ashley as someone thinking of themselves as having any value in this relationship.

Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad I finished writing the next chapter that I'll post tomorrow before this comment, because then I know you'll like the next one. At least the end of it and what it'll require from both parties ! And you're right that Ashley is debasing herself and basically hurting herself in the process. It'll be adressed next chapter and then I want to have the two of them, Julia and Ashley build up something more wholesome.

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2025 11:41 PM Title: Aimless

Good chapter, I liked the insight we are getting into Ashley’s mind. The almost-cheating surprised me but it made a lot of sense. I was more surprised that Julia tolerated it so well, even finding it arousing. Or was she aroused that Ashley didn’t go through with it, or that she confessed it to her? It ties in with Julia fucking other futas on the side. I could imagine Julia and Ashley rotating in another futa to their bedroom for Julia to violently penetrate. I get the impression Ashley would enjoy watching that.
Happy to see Agatha stick up for Ashley again. I wonder what Ashley’s parents think about all this. They obviously want to protect their daughter, but Agatha is the only one who has any influence on Julia, not that it’s much.
I really like how controlling Julia is right now. Super possessive and intolerant of privacy, but still asking for consent and allowing some basic mobility and independence. The mostly-consensual shocking is an excellent idea. I am looking forward to Julia eventually meeting Ashley’s friends and seeing if she can act “normal” and how they will react to her.
Very intense to see how Ashley has become so reliant on Julia and has built her up so much in her mind. There’s definitely an appeal to dating your deity.
Eager for more!

Author's Response:

As always, thanks for the detailed reviews ! They are fuel for my ideas, so really you're helping me a lot haha ! 

I can't wait to get back to the collar... but today's chapter is really less about Julia than it is about Ashley and her own situation. I hope you'll like it ! And won't hate Ripley too much haha !

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2025 9:27 PM Title: Work interview

Another great chapter! Poor Ashley just can’t get a win :(

It’s nice to see that Ashley saw her friends and that she can still rely on them for a sense of normalcy. They seem ok - I like the bashful QB - but I’m surprised that all the tinies have just accepted their fates. I figured there would be more talk of rebelling, or at least complaining.

I really like how Ashley isn’t content with the little handouts Julia gives her, like partial phone access, and keeps pushing for more. Julia has already come so far though! She seems friendlier and more supportive. Julia from two weeks ago would never say “you must have been so afraid, I’m sorry.” The tenderness in this sex scene was wonderful.

I’m curious to see how Julia will handle her violent urges long-term. I believe she doesn’t want to seriously hurt Ashley, but I suspect she still wants to inflict some pain. Could Ashley enjoy that? Can they find a way of doing that in a safe way? Is there a way to redirect Julia’s most violent urges, maybe onto someone else? Maybe Ashley’s worship is enough to satiate her.

It’s a big milestone for Ashley to see Julia as her girlfriend! As their sexual relationship deepens, I wonder if Ashley can leverage that more. Julia could figure out pretty quickly that a happy Ashley is better in bed. But it might be complicated to work that in with Ashley’s masochistic tendencies.

Author's Response:

We will see more of Ashley’s friends and their take on this new world order really soon :) ! And more of their futas also. Now that it's clear that story doesn't want to end just yet, I may as well go wild ! 

Ashley will always fight for more rights, but she'll obviously have to make due with the limitations imposed on her by the Registration Act - and how far Julia is willing to compromise, until she considers it's too much and even Ashley won't change her mind on that.

Julia has darker urges than you can suspect and they'll surface soon enough. Suffice to say that her love can sometimes be really twisted and that when one falls for her, it may become harder to untangle the healthy and not so healthy parts of that love, as Ashley will discover.

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2025 7:39 AM Title: Back to college

Ok, the “you don’t talk back to me” was pretty scary, and not a sign of a healthy relationship. Dominant or not, Julia needs to be able to fight with Ashley without exploding or zapping her.

She really did some psychological damage with that collar. I loved the mood-change when Ashley talked about Julia discarding her, and I hope Julia also reflects on Ashley’s terror of the collar afterwards. I thought you wrote the scene very well. Does Ashley really believe what she said, that she expects to die by Julia’s cock? I think Ashley still needs to separate her fears from her desires.

Interesting that Ashley wanted to deliberately debase herself as much as possible to calm Julia. I would like to see Ashley try to be more strategic with how she emotionally pushes at Julia. She still has some fire in her, which was very nice to see with Rebecca. I hope Marc is ok. I want to see more of the experiences of other tinies.

The additional humiliations were fun. The clothing is just rude, considering Julia was the one who threw out her old clothes, and she now has all of Ashley’s money and could use it to buy her more clothes. And the internet restrictions were chilling. Could Julia unlock Ashley’s phone if she chose?

Ripley frustrated me a lot. I acknowledge that she’s the nicest futa we’ve seen other than Agatha, but she seemed to be self-rationalizing her lies to Ashley to hide her own desires. Her reason doesn’t make sense. A tiny could just as easily harm themselves after being registered. I think it’s more likely even, unless a majority of futas are a lot nicer than Julia.

The strength lore was neat. I can’t wait to see Julia’s absurd strength in action!

Great work!

Author's Response:

Yeah, the collar turned out to be a really great tool, both to create humiliating situations, and also to confront Julia and force her to see the consequences of her actions. In the Chapter 6, currently being written, I try to show how our giantess feels about it all, how she struggles with her personality disorder and how she is, slowly, realizing it's truly an obstacle in the way to the relationship she wants to have with Ashley.

The fears of Ashley will also be adressed next chapter (but I haven't started writing this part yet, I think chapter 6 will be really long, as I don't really want to split it up). 

I can assure you that Marc is perfectly okay, now that he is the treasured tiny in a trouple ^^. Futanaris are intenses, but they can be gentle, and while he was dispirited, Rebecca wasn't demeaning to him, just a little mean. 

Regarding the clothing, she used Ashley's money to buy her her new wardrobe, so she doesn't want to uses more of it for more clothes yet (because, of course Julia can't even grasp the idea of using her own - considerable - funds to do so). 

Finally, regarding the strengh lore, it's largely exagerated - Julia would have obliterated Ashley when she backhanded her otherwise. But she is way stronger than almost anyone on Earth, and it may come in a future display.