Reviews For My New Guardians
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Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2025 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meeting Riley

Story reads really well, definitely an interesting set up.


I look forward to more chapters.


The only real criticism, though it's only my opinion, is that you could build up more towards the action and overt sexualisation of your characters. I personally feel it helps build the tension and keep the story more engaging, but otherwise it reads really well!

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