[Report This]Date: February 03 2025 9:08 AM Title: Cynthia
You've really nailed the horror atmosphere, despite the short span you've constructed the texture there perfectly, the squalls on the roof! Maggie being.. Maggie lovely hints at some past struggles, the car accident.
Its like a puzzle piece we haven't got all the answers too making your brain tick over.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2025 8:55 AM Title: Prosopagnosia
You are sick and twisted for this one, I love it *sobs*
The way you build Chloe up as the protector and mother of the group, only for her to be the one who suffered the worst implied fate of all is so delightfully cruel.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2025 8:54 AM Title: Car
Casual vore my beloved.
Again in such a short prompt you get away with leaving the audience intrigued to the wider world Jane found herself in, which works because from the start you knows its entirely geared against her, so it puts us in her shoes out of our depth till she's quickly dispatched.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2025 12:33 AM Title: Cynthia
Excellent stories as always! Always a bridesmaid but never a bride in this space. I aim to change that by putting my money where my mouth is with reviewing your work. With a deeper respect for buildup and characterization than is expected in this medium, I would recommend CaliVore to anyone who appreciates, well... vore. Awesome work!
[Report This]Date: January 18 2025 6:45 PM Title: Cynthia
It's great to see you posting again!