This story is off to a really strong start! All three of them feel like real people. I like that Ella is burdened by her feelings, though just little enough to not let that stop her. And she isn't trying to like engineer his enslavement or anything, at least for now she's basically just trying to cheat with him. Though, I can see her getting carried away after awhile. I wonder about Olivia's role in the story. How long it'll be before she finds out, what she'll think when she does, or if before she finds out she'll herself be interested in being more physical with Noah's small form. Lots of possibilities!