Date: January 16 2025 7:11 PM Title: You and Me
Hi, I would really like you to continue writing the Anniversary Present story. I'm even willing to pay with money. Please contact me. c22438148@gmail.com
Author's Response: As previously stated I do not wish to communicate over email, I'd be more than happy to talk over on discord.
Contact details are on my main page here :)
[Report This]Date: January 03 2025 11:53 PM Title: You and Me
Oooo, I enjoyed this story a lot. Extreme hide 'n seek? lol. Love it. Worked out so well. When Caroline revealed she knew Jason was under the bed, it blew me away. I love that type of giantess. She loved being watched. And the ending was great. Jason wanting to give himself to Caroline is so poetic. Since she knows that Jason knows about her treatment towards tinies, I wonder how'd she take the news? I'd assume she'd welcome it and possibly give him special treatment.
I hope you continue this story. I'm curious how things will turn out for Jason/Caroline.
Author's Response:
Thank you kindly!
Being entirely honest at first I really was unsure if I wanted Caroline to know and was fighting back and forth whilst writing, but in the end it really did solidify the character for me that she did and perhaps a hint towards her loneliness? I could see her wanting a partner in crime, its an outlet for her in that way, she's a woman who knows exactly what she wants but she lives in a world were well, most people are rather annoyingly too nice to shrinkees for her liking haha.
See, trying to write this as an ambiguous ending has now rather backfired with all the requests for part two! (I am rather tempted...!)
Date: January 03 2025 5:05 PM Title: You and Me
A strong start
Do all the ‘shrinkee positive’ men shrink to the same size and are their sizes adjustable?
Would you be able to add a super tough mode? So that Caroline would be able to be rough with him without potentially putting him in mortal peril. As I think it’d be great to have Jason in the possession of a gorgeous MILF/Cougar who still sees him as human, but has no hang-ups about using him as her sex toy either, particularly since it has already been stated that Caroline cares for Jason. (This is no critique but imao the whole ‘as soon as a person is shrunk they are nothing but bugs, food or disposal sex toys, even if they’re close friends and family is a bit over done and Cliche’ ) although it goes without saying that you as the author have full creative control on the story.
Ideas
Caroline could get off on the idea of using and or displaying her daughters best friend right in front of said unaware daughter. (Really think you should make full use of that ‘unaware’ tag.
if Jessica is unaware that her mom has Jason, Caroline could lend him to her with him disguised
what if Caroline and Margaret become friends and bond over Jason’s shrinking, which could lead to Jason’s own mother accidentally using him for some ‘stress relief’ in a case of mistaken identity.
Putting Jason in a cage necklace would be fun and if his size is adjustable it could a lot of possibilities for his usage.
Author's Response:
Basically anyone around slightly before and after eighteen can become a shrinkee naturally, there is no control over it, so their are medical check-ups done on all people in that age demo, usually hosted by schools to help let teens know if they are positive/negative, and if positive how long they have left at regular size, typically its 2 inches but there can be rare taller/smaller variants.
I cover a bit more of this in my other stories like Anniversary Present but typically they are given to pet shops or rehomed with family friends as their owners (family keeping them is seen as a taboo choice in this world, its usually no contact for the shrinkees to adapt as ;legal registered pets), for the most part these people get used to their new lives but some fall through the cracks, or in this case smushed under a sexy cougar - although I suspect that guy might not have been registered! technically no law was broken if you don't bother :)
As for the future, I don't know If I'll come back to this, I'm writing a few others in this world this was mainly intended as a one-shot - Jason's fate is rather up in the air, but I'm sure he was happy with however it goes the lil sicko! haha.
Date: January 03 2025 12:18 AM Title: You and Me
I second Megagiant52800's wish for a second part. The premise is interesting and it remains unclear whether or not Caroline would treat the protagonist any differently than any other shrinkee.
Author's Response: Exactly the intent sir to leave it up in the air, though I suspect Jason would be happy with either fate haha.
Date: January 02 2025 8:10 PM Title: You and Me
I am a really big fan of this story. The woman clearly getting off on not only domination for the tiny to relive stress but knowing that her daughter’s friend was watching. Interested in a part two with him shrunk and In possession of the his friend’s mother would be cool too.
Author's Response: Thank you! maybe one day in the future, I was trying to leave his fate up in the air and let the minds wander a bit haha.