[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 10:48 PM Title: Introduction
I guess I'm a bit curious as to what you're thinking about including in a sequel that's so enticing that you would pretty much shoot this one in the foot. The premise was really fun and Delaney was delightfully evil, but the time skip gave me whiplash. I can understand an author having to step away from a story for any number of reasons, things happen. But to stop telling a story because you're moving on to the next part is kind of wild.
Don't get me wrong, I think your writing is great, but I definitely think you did this one a disservice.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
I hope she tries a new punishment after his next loss. Maybe sewn into the back of a thong for a while.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Holy shit. Perfect Cliffhanger
[Report This]Date: January 30 2025 9:05 PM Title: Introduction
You can write. This is the best start to any of your stories. Then you skip ahead so far that it's over. Ready for part 2? You're stories never seem to be completed. I love many of your ideas, but the time skip killed this
[Report This]Date: January 30 2025 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, this story is amazing, love the whole concept and Delaney is wickedly cruel. I do hope this leads to her keeping him this way permanently *weg*
[Report This]Date: January 25 2025 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
Very nice. Looking forward to the humiliation at his wifes
[Report This]Date: January 19 2025 2:24 PM Title: Introduction
We need an update!
[Report This]Date: January 14 2025 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
There are so Mandy possibilities to humiliate Chase. It’s perfect. Please keep up this work
Date: January 14 2025 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Really love your use of the object tf, hope you do more of it!
[Report This]Date: January 13 2025 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Adding some butt content was awesome, as was transformation into a loofah. Maybe she could turn him into a thong for the next day? Or maybe to show him his insignificance she could even turn him into a freckle on her butt cheek?
Might be fun if the loofah thing became a daily ritual, and one day she left the loofah in the shower (accidentally or on purpose) and one of the other girls used him without knowing
[Report This]Date: January 13 2025 7:42 PM Title: Introduction
Loving this story thus far. Delaney is definitely a bully, but I'm curious to know more about her relationship with Chase. Was he actually an asshole to her first? Is he truly pompous and insufferable? Does he deserve this fate? Or is Delaney just a judgemental little brat who is a genuine villain to the people around her? Excited to see if these questions get answered as the story progresses.
But thoughts about Delaney aside, I think that Alexis is just a horrendous wife. League rules? So if the punishment the winner wanted was to hit him with a car, would that just be par for the course in her mind? Like damn woman, stand up for your partner! I'm so curious to find out if she has any clue what Delaney had planned or if her stance would change. Looking forward to reading more!
Feet, butts, general giantess stink and humiliation? Love it! Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: January 12 2025 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
Perfect. That s what im talking about. Thank you
[Report This]Date: January 11 2025 11:17 AM Title: Introduction
You are so talented. I wish you could also include some ass stuff or gross feeding methods.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2024 5:07 AM Title: Introduction
Can't wait to see where this goes! I also like the Idea he could be normal size with Alexis one day where Delaney tells him he has the "say off" and she could still fuck with him, make Alexis's breath a hurricane and he goes flying, make it so when Alexis touches him it's like he's been punched by the Incredible Hulk, etc etc