Reviews For White Christmas
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Reviewer: live_laugh_loom Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2025 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice! I love when bigs return to taunt their toys incognito. I hope you continue to share your writing!

Reviewer: SeSawTer Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2024 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

i must say that it is amazing for your first story. i'm adding you to my favorite authors and waiting for more! perhaps even a second chapter to this one? i'm curious what more these two could do!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much ! This is such a nice comment.

I don't think I'll write a direct follow up to this one. But the two protagonists are clearly not stopping here, so... Who knows? 

Reviewer: Megagiant52800 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2024 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story! This is very similar to Clover by Kosmita years ago. I love the idea of a giant couple doing their thing then shrinking back down, pretending to be the police, only to get the views of their victims so they could get off to it. Great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you !

I remember reading Clover so many years ago. It probably played a role in my subconscious ;)

Glad you enjoyed the story !

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