[Report This]Date: January 21 2025 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Reciprocating
This story is lovely, I'm so glad I read it.
The main dynamic between Lisa and Trish is really sweet, and you strike a great balance between horny and heartwarming.
Trish was a lot of fun to read, especially spotting all the fun little references to anime and games. And who doesn't love a big girl who stinks good? Jokes aside, I think you did a pretty good and respectful job of portraying her, particularly her anxiety when they leave the house.
As a trans woman who would also love to be tiny and at the mercy of a hungry significant other, it's safe to say I really resonated with Lisa's character lmao. It's always great to see transfemme characters, especially in the tiny role, and I think you did a great job with depicting her. Her and Trish's relationship is really sweet, I love the way they support each other.
I quite enjoy your take on shrinking too! It's a neat world you've set up, and I liked the little details about it, like Lisa needing to communicate via a phone, and the restaurant talking about tiny accommodations. I really like how you approach the fact that someone like Lisa would definitely see the silver lining of a shrinking disease. Oh, and Lisa having a tiny bike was a really fun idea. I'm surprised I haven't read it in more stories, it makes so much sense.
Really well done, and I'm excited to read whatever these two get up to next!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review and rating! :3
The goal was exactly that, showing the lives of two dorks who love and support each other dearly despite, or even because of, their weird quirks. I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed spotting the references while it wasn't exactly necessary to the plot, I felt little details like that give these characters so much more personality which is always a nice touch in these kinds of stories.
I am super really happy that you were able to resonate with Lisa lol. She was actually the first trans characters I've ever written.
Thank you for appreciating the worldbuilding set up, in stories like this I personally feel that details on how life and the people/tinies living those lives helps the reader get invested and I always love seeing other writers add those kind of things.
Once again thank you so much for the review. I have a few stories and ideas in the works involving Trish and Lisa that should be ready to post soon so they will be back for sure. If you have any recommendations for situations for these two dorks to get up to I am all ears lol and if you want you could absolutely use these characters in your own stories as I really enjoy your writing style.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2025 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Reciprocating
Really enjoyed these two!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad to hear it. <3
Date: January 06 2025 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Feast
Nice, and with Lisa still in the mouth there is still a chance of swallow!
Date: January 04 2025 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Cleanliness is Next to Godess-liness
Nice. I wonder if Lisa will end up being swallowed again during the dinner reservations.
Date: January 03 2025 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introductions
I really do like this, they are sweat and adorable together. I really like that they really are careful and one wasn’t faking it until the other areas small.
Author's Response:
Thank you, my goal for this story was to have a gentle couple exploring this new reality of one of them being shrunken without losing any feelings for one another. So often are there stories on here that start off like that and then one of the people stop caring about the other. I just wanted to make one gentle and caring the whole way through. :)