[Report This]Date: March 07 2025 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Hello Miss Janet
I'm not sure if you have any plans for Kelli going forward but it'd be a shame to abandon her character. Context clues say Janet probably killed her last participant, "accidentally" of course, but on the off chance that he somehow survived her it would be incredible if he was the one sent to live with Kelli. That kind of karmic justice would be an incredible narrative to follow. Plus I've got a feeling that having a trained and grateful participant would do wonders for Kelli's confidence.
Author's Response:
This is not the last we'll be seeing of Kelli and I couldn't agree more with you about what she deserves. All Participants deserve their happy ending and Kelli will get hers :)
Date: January 16 2025 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Words That Bite
Here's hoping some other subject switches from his participant to being with Kelli... statistically speaking at least some participant should get a job where she has to travel abroad most of the time, right?
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PS
Deleting chapter 1 looks like a brilliant way to teach gts fans to keep an offline copy.
I like that ^^
Author's Response:
What the heck?! So weird; thank you for pointing that out!
Date: December 24 2024 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bending Over Backwards
As usual, English isn't my native language... "He'd, in less nicer words" sounds really weird to me, I hope it actually is.
And hey, this was a damn good Christmax present!
(46 chapters on patreon... I dread how much catching up I'm going to have to do when I join :)
Author's Response:
Very glad you liked it! Yes, a lot of catching up to do on Lori's story