[Report This]Date: December 28 2024 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Beauty
Astonishing develeopments!
Cant wait to see where the story goes!
[Report This]Date: December 25 2024 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Castaway
This story is seriously impressive.
The fish out of water setting lends itself super well to making Rikka a great audience stand-in and is written to have the perfect amount of wonder and inquisitiveness in trying to decipher the environment she's in. Her astuteness makes her all the more engaging seeing her read between the lines of Johan's outright lies or lies by omission (I loved the part where she figured out that Vu was saying Johan's name).
Speaking of, Johan is also fascinatingly characterized. He's understandably cynical and averse to trying to assimilate to the culture after what he's lost and he's even more of the odd one out as the only male on the island.
My favorite part is how well you capture the foreignness of the giant's culture and the pace things are being learnt. Even seeing where there are gaps of information where Johan maybe misinformed in his understanding and perhaps (speculating) there maybe areas where Lydia is misinformed.
Rikka of course is most in the dark and has to use her wits to figure things out as she goes. Johan learning what he has through through trial, error, and observing. Lydia learning by integrating with the giant's culture as best she can.
The fact none of them can fluently communicate with them or know all the nuances their culture adds an interesting foreboding, where new information could easily and drastically warp their understanding with how their society functions.
Great work so far.
[Report This]Date: December 25 2024 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Sister
Well, I'm hooked. Wouldn't be surprised of Lydia got a few things inaccurately as well. Anyway, great and patient writing, thank you for this undertaking!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2024 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Sister
I usually dont comment on stories but this one is really good!
I love the pacing and the multiple possibilities to develop the story.
Checking daily to see if there is a new chapter up!
Thanks for all the hardwork you must have put into creating this fantastic island.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2024 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Mothers
It is now clear : I am hooked and I want to read so much more ! There is so many questions I have but that I feel will be answered soon in-story.
I feel bad for Johan, the poor guy saw his dad die, his mother and sister grow into giantess and he remained alone as a little human. It must've have been really bad for his psyche.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2024 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Mothers
Amazing, giant mothers are the best!
[Report This]Date: December 22 2024 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Castaway
I really like where it's going.
I have some theories about the female member of Johan's family and what they may have become (helped by the tags) but I wonder if the story will truly go that way or not.
Keep going, please !