[Report This]Date: December 21 2024 3:06 PM Title: (Christmas Special) Mince Pies, not for Santa
Yeah! More gentle and willing vore! I’m so glad to see you writing more from this setting. Your ideas are always so interesting. Like, I love the gullies huddled together in the fridge, waiting eagerly for their turn to get eaten. Avery having to pass them up because they don’t fit in the meal she’s working on, but is trying to make sure each one has a good experience with her. How excited they are to fulfill their role and how playful Avery is about the situation is so cute!
Vore is treated as this positive experience here for both parties and I can never get enough of that. Hell, the fact Avery mostly knows their names and is familiar with their quirks and personalities is so sweet, like they’ve bonded throughout the week they spent in her fridge. And I loved her fumbling through the ads to get Christmas music playing on her phone to make the whole event more festive for everyone.
The vore itself was incredible. Making them durable enough to be safely chewed was choice af, and the details of the mince and pastry crushed on them and splattered across the mouth made for a very vivid image. Avery stuffing her mouth with a five-tiny pie was super hot, and even the one-on-one interactions with Mary and Christine were appealing in their intimacy. I’m impressed with how much personality you were able to give these little ladies in such a short story (as well as Avery herself of course). I do find it funny that the gullies have no issue getting chewed on, but one landing on another when they fall into the stomach can apparently daze them? I guess their durability only works in interactions with another size lol.
Fantastic story, and a great holiday special to kickoff this anthology! I will definitely be on the lookout for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was stuck in a bit of a loop in terms of ideas so I’m glad this story has interesting ones, and also that the characters are working well enough, especially Avery. Also the actual vore parts being good is nice to hear (and yes there can never be too much gentle/willing vore)
Also yeah I was thinking about how people only seem be durable when interacting with different sizes, guess I’ll just put that in the “don’t worry about it” pile lol
Lets hope there ends up being more to look out for then!