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Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2025 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 7: Many Prices to Pride

Violence! I love all the crushing and mangling. I wonder if Liese might save some captives next time to work out her anger on more slowly, especially if they are from the Heavenly Order.

Have you considered cross-posting to sizefiction.net? It might help this story reach a larger audience.



Author's Response: Wow, I'm surprised that I never found sizefiction.net before. With the recent security concerns on this website, I think that could be a good idea. Thanks for the recommendation, I think I'll probably end up doing just that.

Reviewer: MarsV2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2025 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7: Many Prices to Pride

VERY violent but that's what we're here for, also the Liese and Issara "friendship"

It's still peak bro!

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2025 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 5: Knowing thy Enemy

This story is excellent. Engaging characters and vivid cruel imagery. I love the budding romance and Issara’s willingness to sacrifice her own kind. Definitely looking forward to Liese destroying more tomkins!



Author's Response: I appreciate the feedback. I'm especially happy that the imagery is working well; I wasn't sure if such flourishes would work well in such a story as this, so it's very nice to get insight from another perspective.

Reviewer: MarsV2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2025 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 5: Knowing thy Enemy

Gods, this chapter was awesome, I didn't expect another one to soon but it's a pleasant surprise. I am happy that Issara and Liese are 'slightly' warning to each other. We don't know much about Liese before her family... well. But I imagine that she is only distant and cold because her family kinda just died. Maybe she was much nicer and friendly before. Though she still ate Tomkins without the malice she does now. And I can't tell if Issara is lying about the lusting of Liese, but it's a nice 'flaw' if you could call it that,  to her very no funny business attitude. 5 stars!



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the kind review. I'm not sure if I can keep up the pace that I had with these last few chapters, but I do hope that I can continue to pleasantly surprise.

Reviewer: MarsV2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2025 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4: As Mountains Yearn for Sky

So peak, the raw destruction is mind blowing. It's so...primal? And Issara is very very distrustful. I hope they truly become friends but I am not that naive. Love your story :>

Reviewer: MarsV2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2025 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Wanderer and the Witch

Dude you are so awesome, I've read on this site for years and it truly is a nook of the internet where you find so many amazing authors. You, sir, are one of the best. It's all so vivid and I can truly feel all the emotions of the characters. I feel as if I'm watching a movie when reading this. I hope this novel goes for a long time!



Author's Response:

I truly appreciate the kind words, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I do my best to give some depth and description without losing sight of the fact that it is still an indulgent size story, so I'm also happy to know that I've struck a good balance therein

Reviewer: SomeRandomGoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2024 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Wanderer and the Witch

Now this looks interesting. The "giants" and "Tinies" BOTH seeing themselves as Humans is a neat angle. 

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