Reviews For Pasta Night
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Reviewer: EnviTheFool Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 15 2024 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Liked this one a lot. The interplay between external actions and internal struggles were nice and there was a good amount of tantalizing detail put into the workings of the whole digestive track, especially for the smaller intestine. It was fun to see that kind of less utilized anatomical function to be used to such degree.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Yes the person who requested the comm really wanted to go into detail with the internals. I definitely had some anatomy homework for this one. It was fun! I'm glad you liked it, and I really appreciate the review. Always gives me the butterflies to hear feedback <3

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