[Report This]Date: December 05 2024 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Product Launch
You asked to be let know if anybody wanted you to continue; here I am!
I have a bias towards tragic and unaware, so this premise is already right up my alley, and I love the story so far. The lead-up is fantastic, the perspective shifts are great (the way you do them is, to my eye, better than the typical 'same series of events, two sets of prose' approach), and I'm a huge fan of the empathy both sides have, whilst neither has the full picture.
Consider me excited to see where you take things from here!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
I'm not used to writing this type of stories so I will have to see how it goes from here, I do have some idea of what to write but I probably won't drag this one out too long.
Date: December 05 2024 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Product Launch
Wow! Yes, I would very much like to see you continue with this story. I love the idea of tinies being worn, either as jewellery, or incorporated into womens clothing iin some way. This idea of being literally trapped into the very material is thrilling, and I can see future chapters detailing skirts, dresses, blouses, whatever, all incorporating the bodies of tiny shrunken little men.
Yes, please do continue...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I'll keep working on it then.