Date: December 22 2024 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: Protector
The slow burn 'natural' feeling in a size stories feels so rare at times to come across, but its always been my favourite.
I'm really enjoying the characters and setting here especially as a fellow person from England's north (well, assuming you are!)
Looking forward to see the future on this story.
Author's Response:
Great to see another Northerner on here and I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Thanks for reading :)
Date: December 20 2024 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 8: Protector
Great continuation, always love seeing him adjust to smaller and smaller sizes
Author's Response:
Thanks again for reading. I appreciate your support of this story :)
Date: December 01 2024 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up
Pretty good start and nice cast of characters for what seems like a long-form story. I can see Ashleigh becoming a problem in the future and Bexi becoming protective. Sarah sounds like a caring mother, and Josh is a real bro. All the other characters are questionable to me.
I'm really curious what the MCs final size is gonna be and what his adventures are gonna be like. Again, something gives me a bad feeling about Ashleigh, lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :). I won't spoil the main character's final size, but you're right to have a bad feeling about Ashleigh haha.
Date: November 30 2024 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homeward Bound
So far this is off to a good start. I am not super keen on family stuff but you have given the characters strong distinct personalities and i am genuinely curious what these people do to a tiny guy. Thought the girlfriend was a touch over the top, but I imagine it will have a good payoff.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I appreciate the feedback :)
Date: November 30 2024 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up
Please continue!
Author's Response:
I fully intend to. Thanks for reading :)
Date: November 29 2024 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up
amazing story! Love your world building and detailed writing.
Cant wait to see Ashleigh get her revenge, and hopefully Bexi isnt done with her growth spurt.