Reviewer: rrclover Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2025 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homeward Bound

turn around and look towards the end of the bed, wondering if the fall would kill me if I were brave enough to dive over the edge. I suddenly find myself envisioning numerous scenarios in which I’m granted the relief of instant death. I imagine myself hiding underneath the kitchen counter and jumping out in the footpath of a passing giant, and I’m overcome with a sense of tranquillity as I visualise the immediate end of my existence. No more misery, no more humiliation, just the sweet serenity of nothingness.

Thanks, this is what I was wondering at this point. He should be considering suicide. Or at least threatening it. I mean, it's the natural thing to do. Most riders never actually mention it in their stories. Which is kind of unrealistic because the human mind is sometimes pretty fragile. And I'm assuming that's why he's starting to feel fatigue and stuff. His mind is probably telling him to give up because he wants to be normal again. And his mind is probably telling him death. Will equal normalness. I know that's not exactly right. But that's sometimes what people believe I don't know how religious the main character is. I'm assuming he's probably normal Christian.

And it's been a while, but I'm assuming the aunt of the family, the one that actually gave him the talk and talked about crushing. Her husband still hasn't learned about what the family's doing with him. I'm assuming she's probably the one that straight Because she was the one that's quarter.Quotes say that the family actually cares about him I'm beginning to think that she would actually take better care of them than the family.

Last thing I do like the story but. Can you give me a warning if it's about to become more gentle like the beginning Per say Or are you gonna have an arc where he lives with Josh? And his dimensive ex-girlfriend. I typically don't read stories. That are really cruel, but I like your beginning. And i'm assuming because you responded earlier saying he'll find a balance later that I'll continue reading

Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2025 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 21: Salmon Fillet

Amazing 

Reviewer: rrclover Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2025 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homeward Bound

So I'm guessing the only way he's gonna be able to convince his parents that he doesn't actually sectly . This is to kill himself. I'm surprised he hasn't even been thinking about it. Or he could run away I'm surprised you didn't mention. I'd rather kill myself than move in with you at the end of the last chapter. And where's Grandma in all this? Like I'm sure that she would actually be making the family. Make him bake and because she knows how hard it is on him.

Reviewer: methodman Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2025 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 5: Weight of the World

Wow every character is awesome I can't wait to see how they grow into their new roles as dominant giants.  I really hope the gym shed makes another appearance when our main character is even smaller.

Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2025 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 18: Sibling Spat

Please continue!

Author's Response:

You got it. Thanks for reading.

Author's Response:

You got it. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: SuperDuperSecret101 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2025 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: Belt

I'm loving how stark the dehumanisation is, and yet they are totally oblivious to it, he's clearly got an uphill struggle he won't win but I'm rooting for him to find a new 'balance' that he can work with in the longterm - or not! haha.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :) The struggles are only just beginning, but there will ultimately be a chance for him to find a sense of balance. Let’s see if he takes it.

Reviewer: Glaazius Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2025 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homeward Bound

Excellent story written in first person.

Cant wait to see where it goes.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2025 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 15: Belt

Interesting so far! Can I ask, how depressing is it going to get? Claire’s reveal surprised me, and his family seems to be turning pretty fast too. Are they going to lighten up or is this more of a “bad-end” story? Did Claire’s husband really fear everything, or did he just refuse to debase himself to her?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)

Whether or not the story has a ‘bad-end’ will depend on whether the main character learns to embrace his new size and accept that he is no longer equal to the rest of the family. The way he’s treated by the giants varies from character to character, and I’m looking forward to writing and sharing how his relationship with the family changes.

Regarding Claire’s husband, I suppose the answer is both. Hopefully the main character heeds her advice.

P.S. I saw your advice about the italics and I take it on board, but I’ve come too far to go back now haha

Reviewer: SuperDuperSecret101 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2024 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: Protector

The slow burn 'natural' feeling in a size stories feels so rare at times to come across, but its always been my favourite.

I'm really enjoying the characters and setting here especially as a fellow person from England's north (well, assuming you are!)

Looking forward to see the future on this story.

Author's Response:

Great to see another Northerner on here and I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Thanks for reading :) 

Reviewer: MXP20 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2024 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up

Pretty good start and nice cast of characters for what seems like a long-form story. I can see Ashleigh becoming a problem in the future and Bexi becoming protective. Sarah sounds like a caring mother, and Josh is a real bro. All the other characters are questionable to me.

I'm really curious what the MCs final size is gonna be and what his adventures are gonna be like. Again, something gives me a bad feeling about Ashleigh, lol.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :). I won't spoil the main character's final size, but you're right to have a bad feeling about Ashleigh haha.