Date: March 14 2025 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homeward Bound
So I'm guessing the only way he's gonna be able to convince his parents that he doesn't actually sectly . This is to kill himself. I'm surprised he hasn't even been thinking about it. Or he could run away I'm surprised you didn't mention. I'd rather kill myself than move in with you at the end of the last chapter. And where's Grandma in all this? Like I'm sure that she would actually be making the family. Make him bake and because she knows how hard it is on him.





Date: March 07 2025 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up
Bexi discovered the giantess kink huh, I hope the comes back around later.





Date: March 06 2025 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 5: Weight of the World
Wow every character is awesome I can't wait to see how they grow into their new roles as dominant giants. I really hope the gym shed makes another appearance when our main character is even smaller.





Date: March 02 2025 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 18: Sibling Spat
Excellent story so far, the slow burn is red hot now. I love all three of the character arcs with his new giant masters. Can't wait to see how it progresses.
Author's Response:
I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Thanks for reading :)





Date: March 01 2025 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 18: Sibling Spat
Please continue!
Author's Response:
You got it. Thanks for reading.
Author's Response:
You got it. Thanks for reading.





Date: March 01 2025 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 15: Belt
Amazing!





Date: February 03 2025 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: Belt
I'm loving how stark the dehumanisation is, and yet they are totally oblivious to it, he's clearly got an uphill struggle he won't win but I'm rooting for him to find a new 'balance' that he can work with in the longterm - or not! haha.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :) The struggles are only just beginning, but there will ultimately be a chance for him to find a sense of balance. Let’s see if he takes it.





Date: February 01 2025 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 14: Dollhouse
Have been really enjoying this story, you do commissions?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I’m glad you’re enjoying it :)
I don’t do commissions per se, as I just write for fun, but I’m always open to new ideas. Please feel free to message me either on DA or Discord (same username) if you’d like to make a request.
Date: January 31 2025 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homeward Bound
Excellent story written in first person.
Cant wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :)
Date: January 31 2025 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15: Belt
P.S. You don’t need to italicize dialogue. That’s what the quotation marks are for.




Date: January 31 2025 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 15: Belt
Interesting so far! Can I ask, how depressing is it going to get? Claire’s reveal surprised me, and his family seems to be turning pretty fast too. Are they going to lighten up or is this more of a “bad-end” story? Did Claire’s husband really fear everything, or did he just refuse to debase himself to her?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :)
Whether or not the story has a ‘bad-end’ will depend on whether the main character learns to embrace his new size and accept that he is no longer equal to the rest of the family. The way he’s treated by the giants varies from character to character, and I’m looking forward to writing and sharing how his relationship with the family changes.
Regarding Claire’s husband, I suppose the answer is both. Hopefully the main character heeds her advice.
P.S. I saw your advice about the italics and I take it on board, but I’ve come too far to go back now haha
Date: January 18 2025 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 13: Cross
Please, seek help.
Author's Response:
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Date: December 22 2024 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: Protector
The slow burn 'natural' feeling in a size stories feels so rare at times to come across, but its always been my favourite.
I'm really enjoying the characters and setting here especially as a fellow person from England's north (well, assuming you are!)
Looking forward to see the future on this story.
Author's Response:
Great to see another Northerner on here and I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Thanks for reading :)
Date: December 20 2024 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 8: Protector
Great continuation, always love seeing him adjust to smaller and smaller sizes
Author's Response:
Thanks again for reading. I appreciate your support of this story :)





Date: December 01 2024 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up
Pretty good start and nice cast of characters for what seems like a long-form story. I can see Ashleigh becoming a problem in the future and Bexi becoming protective. Sarah sounds like a caring mother, and Josh is a real bro. All the other characters are questionable to me.
I'm really curious what the MCs final size is gonna be and what his adventures are gonna be like. Again, something gives me a bad feeling about Ashleigh, lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :). I won't spoil the main character's final size, but you're right to have a bad feeling about Ashleigh haha.





Date: November 30 2024 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homeward Bound
So far this is off to a good start. I am not super keen on family stuff but you have given the characters strong distinct personalities and i am genuinely curious what these people do to a tiny guy. Thought the girlfriend was a touch over the top, but I imagine it will have a good payoff.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I appreciate the feedback :)





Date: November 30 2024 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up
Please continue!
Author's Response:
I fully intend to. Thanks for reading :)
Date: November 29 2024 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up
amazing story! Love your world building and detailed writing.
Cant wait to see Ashleigh get her revenge, and hopefully Bexi isnt done with her growth spurt.