[Report This]Date: November 28 2024 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Don't let that bad review get to you, incredible story as always! I thought it was pretty clear what was doing the crushing. Keep up the great writing! Always enjoy are cruel your giantesses and giants are when it comes to humiliating tinies!
Author's Response:
Always appreciate your positive reviews! And thank you. I really wanted to focus on the humiliation in a playful way.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2024 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Greetings Dalespale,
I just wanted to say that this was a solid short story. It was simple yet satisfying for those who wanted a story about a sadist hiker.
I personally appreciate the predator in this story and especially her personality and mannerisms. Based on her appearance and personality, would I be wrong to label her as a “tomboyish” girl? I say that because I think tomboy predators/giantesses are incredibly underrated on this site. I also appreciate your constant foreshadowing with the parody of”Man-eater” and Sam repeatedly saying “bro crusher.”
Really the only thing that I would have done differently was to make the footwear something more hard and unforgiving, like sneakers or boots since I am personally not a fan of sandals or socks. But this is your story and you have the right to put whatever kinks you want in it.
Overall, I thought it was a great quick read and I wanted to give you some encouragement since the first review seemed like it was a mistake.
I hope you have a joyful thanksgiving weekend.
Cheers.
10/10
Author's Response:
You're exactly right and what I envisioned with this character!
If I decide to do a second chapter, some boots may make an appearance :)
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow this was SO good! Hikers dont get enough love on this site. Your writing is great I cant wait to check out your other stories! Personally I wouldve preferred the Birkenstock to be his end, but still an incredible story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I struggled with that too to be honest as a Birkenstock crush is hot.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I appreciate your stories and how humiliating the women (sometimes men) are towards tiny losers - losers who are usually innocent. Please keep writing stories like this, as they’re fantastic.
Author's Response:
Appreciate the kind words! I had a lot of fun with Sam really being a smug witch haha.
I should apologize too for my sparky response below, but it hurts to see a 1.5 star review of something I was really proud of. Anyways, thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story line; but your descriptions of where the "Bro Crusher" crushed bros is confusing. Are they on the bottoms of her Birkenstocks, the bottoms of her socks which she is going to replace with a new pair, or both?
That bit of confusion took away from your otherwise seamless story line. One is left trying to figure out exactly where and what happened to Sam's previous losers.
If you clarified exactly where the tiny bodies of Sam's defeated competitors were crushed by her your story would easily be 5 stars. Regardless, a terrific story line about a superior female literally crushing her defeated male competition.
Keep up the great work. You can only approve from such a nice first attempt.
Author's Response:
You need to read more carefully. She clearly marks the Xs on her sandals to commemorate each crush. She clearly says she usually crushes with her sandals but did this with socks.
1.5 stars because you can't read. What the hell man. Why do I even bother posting here.