Our company, Donnica?

Well, I think that says everything about how highly she thinks of Trevor right there. Even then she clearly busted her ass to get to where she is now, she views her success as something to share with him. That's commitment! It may have been a Freudian slip (one he didn't seem to catch), but it was beautiful nonetheless.

So at first glance, it may have seemed weird that Donnica had been so dismissive of his concerns until she saw how upset he really was. But I've noticed something about her. She kind of did the same thing at Azurea Island, too. In fact, there was that scene where she was getting her feet massaged by tinies with Katherine and Olivia, where she was about to explain to them why Trevor was different but ended up agreeing with them in that moment. I started thinking this then, but now, after seeing this in the office, I'm pretty confident.

Donnica is easily influenced by those around her.

It's not that she's taking direction. Far from it. That cold, heartless façade terrifies everyone around her. But both at the island and at the firm, there was a culture of disregarding and even disparaging tinies. When Katherine and Olivia asked why Donnica wasn't just making Trevor do what she wanted, she fed off that energy and seemed to forget for a second why she found him to be so special.

I feel like it's kind of the same thing here. I mean, Donnica has been using the firm to take away tiny rights since, what, chapter four? There's going to be some carryover with the employees, to say the least. And we heard Trevor complain about exactly that, hating that he had to spend so much time around those mean giants. So yeah, while Donnica didn't start treating Trevor like absolute shit, it only makes sense to me that she wouldn't take him seriously. They even talked about how he'd be doing some kind of real work at the office, only for him to end up cleaning her shoes for her, which is likely about the only thing the employees at the firm would think he's good for.

Of course, to be fair, she probably also had no reason to think that office management or accounting were within his skillset. I doubt that had come up before this chapter. And Trevor did say he had no idea what he could possibly do at the office. So maybe these factors played a part in the way she treated him, too? But yeah, I think it was mostly the work culture thing.

But Donnica really did learn from their spat on the island. When she saw how upset Trevor was, instead of doubling down and trying to force him to see things her way, she remained calm, repeated her mantra to him (Trevor, we said we were going to try), and actually heard him out. That was pretty awesome! And once she realized that he actually knew something about office management, it really was inevitable that she was going to get him to do this. As she showed here, she has the utmost confidence in his abilities; she just needed to figure out that some of those abilities were applicable to the office.

Trevor's rant was perfect! He made so many good points and sounded like an expert, but, at the same time, he came off kind of like a dick. And that's a good thing! Trevor was so laid back early on, and seeing this side of him over the last two chapters has been kind of refreshing, actually.

More importantly, Donnica has taken all of it in stride. I mean, he said some hurtful shit last chapter, but she showed her vulnerable side to him rather than toughening up and using her power over him to shut him up. In this chapter, we see her sit there calmly while he rants and raves at her, talking about how much her office sucks (that can't be fun to hear). She not only put up with both of these instances, but she actually listened to him and tried to understand where he was coming from. Like he has done with her all story, she's accepting him for who he is, even the parts that are ugly.

Last chapter, Trevor was frustrated that he had to always be the one to suck up his feelings and put Donnica first. Well, in this chapter, she took her turn. This was what had been missing in their relationship: True reciprocation. I was so happy to see that!

Also, that whole non-conversation to start the discussion about Trevor taking on the job was incredibly well written. That was a classic bit, but man did your descriptions make it super easy to envision. And they weren't wordy descriptions, obviously, but rather it was the word choices. Her eyes "assessing" him. Then her eyes widening while that unreadable expression remained unchanged. Then folding her arms. All without saying a word while Trevor desperately protests against this unspoken idea. His dialogue sold it so well, too. This was such an enjoyable scene!

Now the question is whether Trevor will be successful in his new role. I'm really curious about how this will turn out. It's going to be a challenge, and I could easily see his prediction about how the office will respond to him coming true. But, at the same time, Trevor is really smart dude, and he's well aware of how the office will view him. Might he be able to figure out a way to make it work? Will Donnica find ways to help him in this regard? Or is she blinded by her own feelings for him, assuming her employees will see the value he brings like she does? It should be pretty interesting seeing how this plays out!

Now let's talk about Annabel for a second. Based on both her behavior here and in previous chapters, I'm now convinced that one of two things is true: She's one of those "true believers" that I called Donnica before, or she's in love with Donnica.

As for the true believer theory (which is what I'm leaning more toward),I mean, when Donnica overthrew John Turner, not only did Annabel take him, but she went out and got his whole family and made them the office foot slaves. That's pretty hardcore! Then there was how excited she was to go through the leftovers of that restaurant after Donnica was done with it. Now she's especially spiteful toward Trevor because he's "holding back" her idol, Donnica. This would explain Annabel taking on a cold, calculating demeanor when her youth has been showing for most of the story so far. She's trying to emulate Donnica. She just needs this stupid tiny to stop her hero from straying from the divine truth!

Not to mention that Annabel does have a collection of tiny people, if I remember right. She has the Turners and those two girls that Donnica used to work with that she hates. It would make sense if Annabel was putting together her own little "church" with forced worship at home.

Or Annabel is in love with Donnica. This is less likely, in my opinion, but I do remember Annabel getting turned on while staring at Donnica's feet squishing tinies. And the unofficial office manager is always so eager to help Donnica or gain her approval, from eagerly trying to schedule meetings with Amber's principal and opening the door for her to excitedly offering up the Turner family as foot slaves, instructing them to put extra effort into Donnica's feet. That extra dose of hate that Annabel has for Trevor could be good old fashioned jealousy.

Either way (or even if both of my guesses are wrong), Annabel is clearly going to be a problem for Trevor moving forward.

I loved the opening segment! I thought it was adorable to see how much this had bothered Amber since finding out about Rebecca's treatment when she was kicked out of her place and lost all her shit. It also makes sense that Amber is so possession-oriented, as Rebecca made that same observation last chapter, finding it innocent that Amber's first concern (before finding out about her being thrown down the stairs) was that Rebecca lost her clothes.

I also thought the contrast between when Amber would go out with her soccer teammates to fuck with the tinies and what she was doing in this chapter was great! That Amber left her socks just outside the line before leaving was a really cool callback to that memory at the beginning of the segment. Back then, it was just cruel fun, not giving much thought to it besides how much it must suck for the tinies. But this time was different. In Amber's mind (and I kind of agree, actually), the tinies actually deserved to have to deal with her smelly socks this time. It was an earned punishment rather than a thoughtless prank, and I love the emotional growth and maturity that represents.

Another thing that caught my attention was how much she referred to the tinies as bugs, particularly at the end of the segment. This felt different from all the times she called Trevor and Rebecca bugs. While the size difference played an obvious factor in the labeling, I feel like there's more to it. It felt more judgmental here. These tinies are the ones that hurt Rebecca, turned on her as soon as she lost her registration. They're so focused on themselves that they not only just worry about themselves, but they actively "cannibalize" their own, taking all her shit and not giving her a second thought once she was gone.

And based on all the whispering the tinies were doing once Rebecca's name was mentioned, with nobody stepping up to defend or even acknowledge Amber's little ladybug, it was clear that they remembered her but just didn't care.

Not to mention how all of them, even the dude who tried to stand up to her at first, caved so easily once Amber was pissed while Rebecca and Trevor always fought back even at Amber's worst.

So yeah, bug doesn't sound too far off the mark here!

I also loved the parallel of Amber taking away what's important to the tinies because they refused to give back what (Amber deemed) was important to Rebecca. First it was the food (which I'm assuming was probably extra, as it was donated and they'd have to  have something to live off of if no one donated), and then there was the short-haired woman's anguish at them losing their pool, the shallow, toxic waters now serving as a reminder of what they used to have but likely never will again. These people took everything from Rebecca, so Amber ended up taking the things they seemed to value most.

Some would call that karma.

And I can't say enough how immensely I enjoyed that nameless asshole crumbling after all of that fake defiance. He was tough when he thought the camera and security would protect him, but as soon as he saw that Amber was pissed enough that it she might just kill him anyway, he fell apart like the coward that he is. And his refusal to give Rebecca back what was hers anyway is just so impudent, especially after seeing what was in that box. Why would he even give a fuck about that album or any of the other shit they couldn't sell. It was about shitting on Rebecca and feeling like a man by facing down a giant. I'm so glad it blew up in his face.

I'm also glad Amber didn't take that drastic step (literally; look at me, I'm punning!) and kill nameless asshole. As nasty as her brattier self could be earlier in the story, she never struck me as a killer, even when she threatened Rebecca. I can't imagine how she'd process rage killing that dude once she calmed down. Thankfully we don't have to find out (at least for now; who knows what the fuck you have planned!).

One thing this whole segment has me kind of excited about is that I could see this whole experience helping Amber see Trevor in a new light. Those tinies at the puddle were "bugs," but Trevor has acted nothing like them the whole time she's known him. She was annoyed when she felt like he was trying exert authority over her early on, but even after all the shit she did to him in response, he was never terrified of her and he stood up to her for Rebecca's sake. All of those other tinies didn't give a shit and kicked her out on the street, taking all her shit, but Trevor took on a literal giant for the sake of his friend. Not to mention that he housed her and tried to help her get somewhere that she might be treated better. And Rebecca defended him pretty fiercely before as well.

Is an Amber/Trevor friendship and/or actual familial relationship actually going to happen? Shit, I'm really starting to get hope that this will happen!

And Amber psyching herself up to tell Rebecca about the whole thing, convincing herself that her little ladybug will just be happy to have her shit back was so cute, as was how considerate Amber was when she entered her own room. The way she gently opened and closed the door, crept in, and called out soothingly was so sweet! I've really taken to Amber for some time now, but I'm liking her more and more each time we see her now!

Rebecca's reaction to finding out Amber didn't listen to her was fucking perfect. First there was her being a pissed at herself because she knew Amber was lying to her. Then there was the panic at the prospect of Amber having done something to get herself in trouble. Once she was sure that Amber would be fine, Rebecca let Amber know how betrayed and not listened to she felt. Then, when she saw just how upset Amber was at how Rebecca had been treated, the tiny eased up but finished with a tad bit of sternness to get her point across.

And Amber took all of it. No bratty retorts. No punishments. No indignance at being talked to this way by a tiny. She listened and defended herself when she felt she needed to. They had a real conversation about it. And that they can have these hard conversations, that Rebecca can come down on Amber like this and the teenage giantess can handle it will never not be awesome!

I loved when Amber told Rebecca she was wrong this time. It was such an emotional moment, but I agree with Amber on this one. That was her stuff. That dude hurt her. Rebecca didn't deserve any of that! I get Rebecca just wanting to leave the past behind, but dammit, fuck those people that did that to her!

The photo album was so heartbreaking! What a great representation of the fucked up way we all tend to process loss. Rebecca both loved and hated having that reminder of her mother back. Reliving those memories is such a bittersweet thing. And I love how Amber was shown to be so understanding here. We focused on Rebecca for a while, and I was left wondering what Amber was doing during all this. Then we see her with her head on her arms on the desk, silently letting Rebecca know that it's okay to be vulnerable around her, just like Rebecca did for Amber a couple chapters ago. For two fucked up girls who have shit on by life, they have a remarkably healthy relationship!

And that last exchange, with Amber asking why Rebecca thinks her life was ruined was gold! Rebecca finally opens up and shows that, behind all that strength and defiance, she just views herself as a failure. That's so fucked up! And Amber telling Rebecca that she's the most amazing person Amber has ever met is the perfect response. Those tears at the end by Rebecca were so touching, too! I feel like Rebecca can finally start to heal too now!

This was a fantastic chapter overall! Don't sweat the lack of smut (although you still worked a little butt stuff in there!). I feel like there was a lot going on here, and there's a lot to build off of in the chapters ahead.

Avid reader here! Thank you for the new chapter and sorry that I haven’t left a review for so long.

I really like it how you always unexpectedly add depth in places I never expected and how the tables seem to turn every chapter, and all that while keeping things hot. Thank you for keeping things interesting!

I was secretly hoping that Amber would do a little more to that town and got some legal freedom to do some more damage, but she  found a workaround for this and managed to make this entire community revolve around her feet, nice.

I didn’t see Trevor’s new job coming. This will be interesting, of course no one in that office will respect him. I’m curious to see where this is going.

Thank you for writing and until next time!

Fantastic, everything is so perfect in this chapter, the action at the start with Amber stinky feet, the part with Trevor explaining how to make the office work. And the end with when Rebecca get back her stuff and realizing their is the album is perfect. I really enjoy the way you describe the trauma of Amber and Rebecca it's really add a lot to the story.

And the small detail about how the tiny leave is so nice it's add a good buildup to the world.

And thanks to always responding to comment it's really nice, and yes i'm here since champter 5 it's been a while now lol.

Just saw your response now sorry I didn't reply earlier. For the titles, it would be finding out what works for you really. I wouldn't go ridiculously long, but maybe not 2 words or something either. A nice medium length, or like 5-10 words title that just gives an idea what the chapter is about. That way if someone is going back through it they can more easily find a certain part of the story they wanted to see again.

Am definitely still looking forward to more of this story in general, and curious as to what the next vore piece will entail since you said you had ideas to do a bit more of that at some point. I have some hopes for what I'd see with that, but just looking forward to seeing whatever you do

Rebecca still has a little fight in her so maybe her imprinting won't strip away her entire being.

Fantastic as always; damn, the nylons games part was so hot. It could be fun if she played this game, but with Tiny, who hates feet. 

Other than that, the development of the relationship between the two couples is so perfect. I really enjoy the fact you show the weak side of the giantess; it's really enjoyable to have a more human part. 

And the way we keep building this world is so great. I feel like I said the same thing every chapter, but you always make them better.

Another excellent chapter, and some interesting developments, especially with the job situation with Trevor and Donnica that I'm looking forward to seeing more of. 

One small suggestion of possible. Now that the amount of chapters is growing quite large, it may be beneficial to go back and add titles, and title future ones rather than the generic part one etc. I say this from the perspective of potentially wanting to come back to re-read parts of the story or revisit favorite moments, that it's going to get increasingly difficult to remember what chapter is what and which scenes are where. Titles would go a long way with that 

So the Donnica/Trevor section was a bit surprising to me. Trevor went all out with her stinky feet (you told me that you like smelly feet a lot, and I told you that I prefer feet with no smell). But then when it comes to pussy licking, Donnica suddenly mentions "job" and all the fun goes away!! :(

I declare a prejudice here, sir!

I really did like that my prediction about Donnica offering Trevor a job came true. I hope that it genuinely works out even if Donnica's co-workers are going to be a plot problem for Trevor that Donnica will have to deal with.

Then when the Amber/Rebecca section starts up, stinky feet again! However I did notice that this time the interruption during the foot scene so I guess I have to call it even. This time with Amber teasing about Trevor.

I am super glad that Rebecca defended Trevor and I don't think it was fair for Amber to say there is only one "Ride or Die". I think Rebecca can feel that way about both. In fact, I think Amber is learning that she can control Rebecca during sex stuff, but not so much Rebecca's feelings about things. Rebecca even told Amber NOT to try to get revenge for the guy who shoved her down the stairs, and this time Amber remains quiet but we all know she is planning on squishing this guy with her bare foot, and having Rebecca watch it!

Good chapter although, peeyew, it stunk! lol

So, first off its nice to see Trevor and Donnica having some actual discussion, and maybe some actual positive movement. Though only time will tell if its truly positive. I get both of them. Also well done, you have actually gotten me to care at least some what about Trevor. He can think with more than just his dick. I am impressed. Though if I were him, I would have definently put in some stipulations. I mean he knows how Donnica sees tiny people, it seems reasonable that her coworkers are probably pretty similar in their own views of tinies. And he wont have the protection of love of Donicca to protect him when she is inevitably not around. So yea, dude please get some protections for yourself.  But I give him props for actually sticking up for himself against Donnica. Also I give Donnica props for actually being willing to work with Trevor. She still wants to poses him, but she is at least willing to acknowledge his wants.  Still if this was a real world thing, I would tell Trevor to RUN. 

     So now I come to my favorite dysfunctional couple, Amber and her tiny Rebecca. This chapter answered a worry I had from the precious wonderful chapter. That worry is that Rebecca would be consumed by Amber. That in giving in to her feelings and love and desire of Amber, that she would cease to be the feisty little Rebecca that could still put Amber in her place. While she is far more loving and willing to be Ambers actual servant, she can still challenge Amber, and Amber is actually willing to reciprocate. They are defiantly in the honey moon portion of their relationship. Though I really am rooting for them to go the distance. Though I do wonder what Amber and Rebecca will do if Amber ever does find a partner.  

     That ending does raise some trepidation for those that have seemingly wronged Rebecca though. We have seen that Amber is willing to get physical in protecting Rebecca and that was against a peer, I do not think I would want to be that guy when Amber comes a calling. Also really dude grab her by the neck and push her down the stairs. WOW, I kind a of want Amber to get ahold of you.

     So I really enjoyed this chapter. Interested to see what happens next. 

So have you read by chance how to break in your pet. If you have not, I would highly recommend it. The reason I ask is casue both Donnica and Amber read like much nicer and more loving versions of teh four main antagonists of that story. Fair warning it is very long, and the updates are rare. But The author has vowed to finish it. 

I'm going to start at the end here, because, first and foremost, I have to commend you on how you portrayed the sub/domme relationship here.

These relationships aren't built on anger, hate, or disgust, things that have driven both Amber and Rebecca throughout most of their time together despite them clearly having feelings for each other. They're built on love and trust. A sub gives themselves to a domme not just because they're powerful and commanding, but because they know their domme isn't going to abuse that power over them. That devotion is based on admiration and a need to serve someone you love, not fear and forced slavery.

When Rebecca goes full sub and calls herself dirt and nothing beneath Amber's feet, she's saying that because of how highly she holds Amber, not how lowly she holds herself. It's an expression of love rather than self-loathing.

And Amber, in her own way, is no less vulnerable than Rebecca here! This is well conveyed throughout the scene, with little touches like Amber's demand for Rebecca to "Say it," yet her tone firm yet edged with fragility, as if she might unravel if denied, as you so eloquently put it. This wasn't really a demand at all. It was a question. Amber was laying herself bare before Rebecca in a way that she never could before the events of this chapter, and she had to know how Rebecca truly felt in that moment.

There's no doubt in my mind that, if Rebecca had refused to say it, Amber wouldn't have taken what she wanted like before. She would have been devastated, and who knows how she would have moved forward with Rebecca afterward, but she never would have forced herself on Rebecca sexually again. This was one of those proverbial "rubber meets the road" moments, presented with an awe-inspiring sense of raw honesty, and it was beautiful.

Everything Amber did beyond this point was perfect too! When she "confirmed" what Rebecca was saying about being dirt and whatnot, she chose simpler, less insulting language, just saying that Rebecca was nothing compared to her and that she was a goddess to Rebecca. And the joy she felt during these moments was so sweet and heart-melting, especially after seeing how Amber really viewed herself all this time (more on that in a bit)! Every time Rebecca showed some form of submission, it filled Amber's heart with love, not smugness or arrogance.

I also love how the word "adoration" was used several times to describe how Amber was looking at Rebecca, and how she held Rebecca like she was "the most precious treasure in existence. This is somebody that knows exactly what Rebecca has given her and values it immensely, not taking it for granted at all. This was a loving dominance, something she was doing for the both of them rather than just for herself.

And I loved it when Amber stopped Rebecca just before the tiny could work her way inside Amber's sex, picking up a Rebecca frantic and wriggling with desire, "her voice light with laughter" as she watched how much Rebecca wanted her with "amusement and adoration" (there's that word again!). Fuck! That was a hell of a little power play, gentle and necessary though it was. The callback to the string from when Trevor got lost inside Amber was so cool, too!

Having Amber place Rebecca on her chest and covering the tiny protectively with her hand as they both fell asleep was such an endearing, heart-warming way to end the chapter, too. It shows that, while the two of them say that Rebecca is nothing compared to Amber, Amber values her little worshipper more than anything else in the world. That's what the sub/domme dynamic is all about!

And, of course, there's the whole new meaning to "I'm the slave, you're the master." This used to be something Rebecca dreaded, absolutely hated! For Amber, making Rebecca say this was a vicious way of putting Rebecca in "her place," with Amber taking smug pleasure in forcing Rebecca to express Amber's superiority to her. But here, it was liberating phrase for both of them! Rebecca wasn't put in her place; she found her place and accepted it with a full heart. And Amber didn't feel that smugness in that moment; she wasn't vicious about it at all. Instead, this was a new sensation altogether for Amber, something she had never experienced before. It wasn't about power: It was about devotion. And that made all the difference.

So now we're left with a Rebecca that is fully devoted to Amber, to the point of putting the teen well above herself, and an Amber who is thankful, appreciative, and bursting with happiness at this incredible gift Rebecca has given her. Seeing this expressed here, in such a raw, powerful form, was incredible, but I'm really interested to see how this plays out in their daily lives. If I had to guess, I'd say their interactions with each other won't appear too differently from the outside, but, to the two of them, the meaning behind their squabbles and "punishments" will be completely different. Oh, and I don't think Rebecca is going to get anywhere near as vicious toward Amber as she was before, for a lot of reasons.

So yeah, fucking phenomenal job showing us what a real sub/domme dynamic looks like in its purest form!

Jumping all the way back to the start, I like how the reason for Rebecca's resistance was finally verbalized. She was trying to fight those feeling deep inside her, wanting to hate Amber so bad but just not being able to do it. And holy fuck was that last insult she threw at Amber cruel. I was glad to see her realize that and apologize once she saw how badly she had actually hurt Amber. I've been saying this whole time that if she knew how profoundly her words were affecting Amber, and I felt vindicated here! Any doubt that Rebecca truly cares for Amber evaporated here, even if Rebecca still couldn't admit it quite yet.

It was also great to see Amber feeling real regret for taking out her frustrations on Rebecca in the shower. Yeah, it sounds like Rebecca was hard on her after practice too, but it was really nice to, for the first time, see Amber feel bad about punishing Rebecca after the fact. That, in and of itself, was a huge change for her.

The (kind of) three-way sex scene was incredibly hot! There's just something about a big forcing two tinies to fuck, especially when there's actually some history there between said tinies (as there was between Trevor and Rebecca), that's just enthralling. And that moment when Trevor realized that Rebecca was completely focused on Amber and vice versa when it was his dick inside her? Fucking brilliant!

Oh, and I loved the flick, too! I'm all about that casual stuff, especially when Amber was too entranced to even really think about what she was doing (not that she would be afraid to do that anyway). There was no ill intent or annoyance there. Amber just wanted Rebecca, and it seemed as though Amber's hand moved on its own to make that happen. To me, that added a deeper, more primal layer to the whole scene!

I also love the jealousy that Amber showed when she thought Trevor and Rebecca were trying to fuck. It was sweet, in it's own way, and obviously there was a level of irony there since Amber accidentally put them in that position in the first place while she was sleeping. But with Amber's mood, it makes perfect sense that she'd just assume the worst.

Trevor still trying to reason with Amber is pretty nice, too. They don't seem to get along too well on the surface, but I feel like there's some kind of respect there, something earned over time. Well, respect may be a strong word, but it seems to me that there's this odd bond between them. Amber sounds more like a typical teen around him than someone trying to dominate him, even despite calling him a worm from time to time. I don't know, this is hard to explain, but I just feel like something's there, you know?

I found Rebecca's denials in the next segment at least as funny as Trevor found them. Yeah, there might be something to the whole pheromones thing, but there's clearly so much more going on here than just that. You've done a masterful job of showing how much these two women have in common for some time now, and you've done so in such a nuanced way. So Rebecca comes off like a lovesick idiot in denial here, which is perfect! It complimented that apology I mentioned before so well, too. Oh, and Amber getting jealous at Trevor "touching" Rebecca again when he was comforting her was cute!

I'm curious if the next chapter will show us where Trevor and Donnica ran off to. That was an interesting little tidbit to note. Or maybe Amber and Donnica just needed the house to themselves for what came next ...

I started this review praising you for how well you wrote that sub/domme scene, so let me end it by praising you at least as much for how you portrayed Amber's abuse here.

First off, I had no idea that this was coming, so it blindsided me completely! I even have a character in my own story who kind of acts this way (but way worse than Amber) who has some similarities in her background, and I still didn't even suspect this. I'm both disheartened and so glad that Rebecca went through something similar so that she could recognize the signs, if that makes sense. It's terrible that this happened to her too, of course (and I wonder if that experience will come up again at some point), but at least she can use that pain to help Amber and show her how to not lose herself in the pain.

But this was fucking heartbreaking! That mantra Amber kept saying, "Nobody likes me. Nobody wants me. I just need to shut up and move on," sounds like something that was told to her. That wasn't ever stated, so maybe it's just a culmination of Amber's feelings, but the implication here is that the physical and sexual abuse weren't enough; somebody had to throw in some mental abuse for good measure. That's so fucked up. Those monsters took so much from her, and it sounds like they wanted to make sure they fucked her up as much as possible. My eyes are watering a little bit just thinking about that.

A sad aspect of this that isn't mentioned is that Donnica didn't notice any of this. I'm not even saying that to blame her. My mind goes back to Amber saying that things were rough when she was young, and I can't help but picture Donnica working so hard to pull Amber and her out of there, to give her kid everything that she deserves, but missing that deeper connection with Amber in order to get there. She was busting her ass and failing to make a real connection with these guys (If I remember right, isn't that why she decided to date Trevor: to try dating a tiny to see if it was any different than those empty relationships from before?), and she never even considered that those men would damage her daughter so deeply. She still doesn't know. I think this speaks more to the disconnect between Donnica and Amber than anything else we've seen so far (or will see, in all likelihood).

But that's pure speculation on my part, so I could be wrong on all of that. I just wanted to share it because it popped in my head while reading this.

But man, when Amber finally breaks out of her trance and "tells" Rebecca that she hates her, my heart ached even more. I love that it was noted that this was a question stated as a fact. Amber wanted so badly for Rebecca to tell her that she was wrong, and the way Amber finally let it all out after Rebecca did that was so touching.

It was a small thing, but I noticed that Rebecca thought of Amber as a child multiple times in this segment. Maybe it was unintentional, but I can't help but think this was one last effort to deny those feelings for Amber. She couldn't hate Amber anymore, so emphasize the age difference (how old is Rebecca again?). 

And the way Rebecca made Amber talk to her after it became clear that it was too much for Amber to talk to anybody else was such an awesome moment. You know, when it was noted that Amber and Rebecca talked for hours about her abuse, it was also stated that Rebecca "became the giant," with Amber being the vulnerable one for once. That's an incredible way to phrase that, and as much as I loved Rebecca before, I feel even more strongly about her now. Also, Rebecca was kind of "the giant" for most of this segment, with her fighting to cut through Amber's defenses, getting her to admit that she had been abused, and, again, making Amber talk to her about it. I'm a big fan of tinies stepping into big roles when the timing is right, and that's exactly what happened here!

Lastly, dipping back into that final segment real quick, I just wanted to say that I really appreciated you taking a second to differentiate between Amber drunkenly getting Rebecca off and the powerful moment they shared with Rebecca inside Amber's mouth here. These two scenes read differently anyway, but to have Rebecca note that was important, I think. Smut isn't always just smut. Sometimes it can reach a different level with the right build behind it, and this is a perfect example of that.

Damn! This chapter was fucking amazing and well worth its length! I don't think any of us can reasonable expect every chapter to hit these emotional highs (so don't worry about that), but I'm really excited to see what you've got for us next!