1. Scarlett coming in to challenge Amber can only be a good thing as iron sharpens iron as they say. Will it lead to her improving her game to get on Scarlett's level only time will tell but if anyone is determined enough to do it it would be Amber.

2. Becca really is a good soul who got a bad lot in life but she seems to be rubbing off on Amber little by little as we go. Thus I fully expect her to eventually break through and help Naomi when the time comes for it.

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3. Shocked to see Trevor so willingly surrender his quest for staying somewhat independent from Dominica. I understand Becca breaking a little but she still to have her morals and compass. Curious to see where this goes for the whole tinies rights movement with the recent events.

4. Anna seems to have slipped into her new role ever better than her old one. Who knew after all the tinies she brutally trained that all she wanted was to be in their place even if she was ten times their size.

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5. Holy fuck that was one of the most incredibly hot things I've ever read here!

6. The sheer power, humiliation and pettiness Helena used to degrade her at her feet was just a chefs kiss. Making her suffer at the smell in the cage even before the moment was truly incredible.

7. I do hope to learn more about the sister in future chapters and how she came to be in Helena's capture alongside her sister.

8. With Anna firmly under Domica's control and Naomi seemingly moving towards a possible friendship/mutal respect with Amber it seems we have found our next big bad to challenge the utmost divine rule of Dominica. 

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9. Wow a brave play by Becca but it seems to have worked out and strengthened their relationship as a whole.

10. With this revelation in Becca/Amber relationship and what Naomi is going through it truly seems the overbearing weights upon both of them is their mothers domineering stature and command over everything they seem to behold.

11. It is nice to see Becca still has her passion for helping others even with her willingness to mostly obey Amber without question.

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12. The jury is still out on Naomi but it is wonderful to see Amber getting what looks like a true genuine friend in Scarlett. It seems both girls can really use one at this juncture in their lives.

13. Given their seemingly shared appreciation of each others looks and the sudden realization of their shared affliction it makes me wonder if we will see poor Becca more overwhelmed by tootsies than she ever thought possible.

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I'm glad to see you are in a good place and hope it continues to get better for you.

It's great to see you back at it! I've missed that hypnotic writing style of yours, and man, I was hanging on damn-near every word I've read so far.

I just finished the first segment, and it looks like you came out swinging here! There's so much shit happening in the background of this one, and the actual meat of the matter is incredibly interesting as well!

My first thought as I read the segment was that it reminded me a lot of when Annabel had her big life-altering revelation after Trevor talked to her about empathy. Annabel was appalled by this at first (and actually wanted to crush Trevor for suggesting that she empathize with the dude who ghosted her), but once it hit her, she saw everything in a new light (well, except for tinies not named Trevor, anyway).

That's the very same lesson Rebecca is trying to teach Amber here, even if, unlike Trevor, she doesn't realize it. With both Scarlet and Naomi, Rebecca's life experiences helped her see that there was more to things than Amber and her knew and that it's important to understand why people do the things they do, even the mean, sometimes evil things.

Yeah, at first glance, Scarlett is just some conniving bitch out to steal Amber's spot, but what exactly is motivating her to come in and immediately make an enemy like that, especially when it's costing her any chance she has at making any friends. That's a big sacrifice to make, being miserable socially in order to thrive athletically, although Rebecca's observation that Scarlett could at least play at the collegiate level makes a lot of sense in this context. There's probably more to it than just that, but I could easily see Scarlett thinking that a little time as a pariah in a new school is well worth securing her future at a good college, both for athletic and academic reasons.

And you know I've been banging the drum for Naomi pretty much from the start. Yeah, she's done some fucked up things and almost killed both of our beloved main tinies in the same night, but she's also clearly the victim of abuse (and who knows how long that's been going on). That can seriously fuck with people, especially if it starts at a young age. We already know that the reason she wants to be a tiny-crushing goddess is because the only "positive" influence left in her life after being taken from her father (another traumatizing event, surely) is that Youtuber goth lady who routinely does it for views, speaking that same nonsense that Naomi was that night.

It makes total sense that Rebecca can see the signs of abuse from Naomi (they're a lot more visible than Amber's are) and that Rebecca would want to help Naomi, even though Naomi not only almost stepped on her like a bug but made clear that she would do much worse now if given the chance (that whole "limb from limb" thing she talked about, all in that dark-toned whisper was fucking chilling!).

Speaking of Naomi's abuse, I'm absolutely ecstatic that you're exploring that further! This was something I was really hoping you'd follow up on at some point, and it looks like we're going to dig much deeper into that in the coming chapters (or even coming segments; reviewing like this is kind of fun, not knowing what's coming in the paragraphs ahead!)

And holy fuck did you do an awesome job of making that abuse tangible here! That empty presence Naomi had up until she realized that Rebecca was in the room with them (also being clever enough to realize that the reason Amber put herself between Naomi herself and the desk was because Rebecca was hiding there) was unsettling but also depressing, knowing why she is the way she is. And the way she crumpled when Amber went to hit her was fucking perfect, as was how long she stayed that way, not moving long after Amber put her fist down. Victoria forcing her to thank Donnica for a compliment and for a job she absolutely didn't want completed the package!

Back to the perspective and empathy thing, I was intrigued by Amber's reaction to all this. She picked up on the signs almost as much as Rebecca did. She knew something was wrong with the way Victoria was talking to Naomi. She knew Naomi wanted no part of that job. She knew that Naomi's obedience was being forced into obedience. All the pieces were there for Amber to figure out what was happening.

But something prevented her from caring.

And that also caught my attention. Amber was so against even considering helping Naomi, even though Rebecca, the one who almost died, was fighting for Naomi. That struck me as a bit odd, although I guess maybe it shouldn't have with Amber's possessive nature? I struggled to understand why Amber so emphatically be against Rebecca's desire to give Naomi some help (I totally get why Amber didn't care at first; it's easy to hate someone for their actions without thinking about the reasons behind them, especially when a loved one is involved). But this line near the end of the segment really spoke to me:

Amber just stared at her, utterly dumbfounded, the sheer absurdity of Rebecca’s words making her head spin. How could she say this? How could she even consider this after everything Naomi had done? Had Rebecca forgotten everything that happened on Azurea Isle? Had she forgotten just how close Amber had come to losing her?

Not how close Naomi had been to taking Rebecca away from her, but how close Amber had come to losing her. I feel like there's something there beyond simple possessiveness. Maybe guilt? The way Amber emphasized herself here seems to imply responsibility rather than selfishness, at least to me. Does Amber blame herself for what happened? And, if so, is she channeling that guilt into hate toward Naomi, since she's the one who actually tried to do the deed? I don't know, but it would explain a lot if this were the case. I don't think there's enough there to say for sure, though.

And, of course, the segment rounded back to the major theme of Amber and Rebecca's arc: the master-slave dynamic that's growing between them. I thought it was really sweet how worried Amber was about Rebecca after Naomi left, as well as how Amber didn't take advantage of her authority and force Rebecca to open up. She let Rebecca have her space and tried to comfort her, which was an awesome expression of Amber's love, given how easily Amber could have demanded that Rebecca just spit it out (and Rebecca would have obeyed, if the end of the segment is any indication).

Hell, even when Amber forced the issue, it was through reassurance rather than order. I really like that Amber is taking her master role with Rebecca seriously, not just using it to get whatever she wants out of Rebecca. Despite a part of her viewing Rebecca as lesser because of her size, the real her (yeah, I'm still calling it that!) still respects Rebecca as a person, which is very encouraging to see!

But Amber does use her authority to get out of uncomfortable conversations, which I still think will come back to bite her at some point. The way Amber shut down Rebecca's concerns had to be really disheartening to Rebecca. Having been the victim of abuse herself, Rebecca naturally feels like she has to help now that she sees the signs in Naomi. Amber shutting her down like that is surely going to negatively affect Rebecca's psyche. Maybe Rebecca will lose more of herself or maybe this is an issue strong enough that Rebecca will fight more aggressively than she has lately and Amber might do something that she'll regret. Either way, it should be fun to keep an eye on this as it develops.

But back to the theme of obedience, I found it interesting to compare Amber's brand of it to Naomi's. Victoria now seems to have total control over Naomi, which, to me, implies that Victoria did something truly horrible to her after they got back from the island. That would make sense, since Victoria doesn't give a shit about her daughter but clearly cares about the status that comes with being Donnica's friend. Fuck Victoria, by the way!

But Amber's obedience was different. She was defiant to a point, pushing boundaries a bit with her own mother. But Amber knew there was a point where she had to stop pushing. I don't know what those consequences are that she's so worried about, but she just can't get past that point with her mom, even when Donnica is doing something unreasonable like forcing her to hang out with a mortal enemy just so Donnica herself can make nice with said enemy's mother. Donnica is kind of treating Amber like a prop here (even if she doesn't think about it that way), which is pretty fucked up in its own right.

But that whole exchange made me think back to that scene on the beach between Rebecca and Amber, as well as how much Rebecca's taunts that Amber would be going to the island for the rest of her life and end up married to the son of one of her mom's friends bothered Amber. Amber doesn't want the life her mom has laid out for her. She wants the freedom to choose, and she's strong-willed enough that she'd probably find success in almost anything she'd do. But the weight of her mother's judgment is too heavy for her to lift off herself. I mean, again, what consequences are so worrying to Amber if she defied her mom more? Honestly, I think she's most afraid of Donnica being disappointed in her, of hating her for not fitting into Donnica's perfect world. As far as I can tell, that's the only thing Donnica could take away that Amber would really care about (only because Donnica doesn't know Rebecca is living there too): her love.

This is especially sad because we know Donnica doesn't feel this way. Yeah, she'd be upset if Amber didn't follow what she had planned for Amber's life, but Amber is more important to Donnica than that. The few times we've gotten a deeper look into Donnica's thoughts on Amber prove that. It's this whole goddess complex thing that's muddying the waters here. Donnica just expects the world to bend to her will, but she doesn't consider how doing this affects the people she cares about most.

And I did enjoy that brief deeper look into Donnica in this segment. I love how she regrets hitting Naomi, even though she knows Naomi deserved it. That Donnica  was "disciplined" that way as a child explains a lot about her, too. Her parents were distant and abusive, so Donnica's idea of "strength" is really twisted, which sucks (although I can't say I'm not enjoying it at the same time! Does that make me a bad person?).

But yeah, it was nice to see that Donnica's offer to help Naomi was a sincere one and not just some power play over Victoria. Donnica officially cares more about Victoria's daughter than Victoria herself does. Did I mention fuck Victoria?!

Oh, and I know it's a bit late to say this, but it was great to see Victoria and Naomi back! This was a great time to bring them in, and I can see a lot of storytelling potential in these two. Things could go a lot of ways with them. Naomi working at an office filled with tiny-haters could be interesting, and I'm very curious how she'll interact with Trevor there (assuming Trevor is still office manager, of course; I'm not sure what the long-term fallout of the "Helena Incident" was). And as much as I hate Victoria, she's also sexy as fuck to me, so storytelling potential? But seriously, I hope that bitch gets what's coming to her at some point (even though I love the fact that, given how you've told this story so far, that's far from a given; it'll make it that much sweeter if it happens!).

Fucking awesome start to this one! It'll take some time, but I'm going to go through this segment-by-segment. I'm curious if you've got as much stuff going on in the others as you do in this first one!

I created an account specifically to review this story, and im truly impressed by its depth and richness. The narrative is intricately crafted with engaging plots and unexpected twists, showcasing the thoughtful care put into this masterpiece. Every element feels meticulously designed and seamlessly woven together. The characters also undergo remarkable development, making the story incredibly immersive and captivating.

Thank you for writing such a Masterpiece!

Well, my prediction on how this would go down was almost entirely wrong. I mean, over on the story-talk channel on Discord, I quite literally said that the only thing I was sure of was that this wouldn't turn out well for anybody involved. And then it turns out well for everybody involved (well, except for the caged tinies, but that fine)!

I do feel like I as at least partially right when I said that Trevor would embrace/realize his feelings for Annabel, though. I just didn't think a relationship as unique as what the three of them now have was even a thing.

I'll also say that while what happened overall surprised me, everything made perfect sense to me as we moved through the chapter, and I felt like the character work here was spectacular!

But first, I want to address the "little brother, goddess mother" thing. I'm not 100 percent sure on this, but I think this is Annabel's way of marrying her love of Trevor and Donnica with her belief that the two of them truly belong together. She wants Trevor as a romantic partner and to experience a level of closeness with Donnica that one might for a parent anyway, so she rationalizes these feelings by giving these feelings a familial context. Not only that, but calling Trevor little brother is her acknowledgment of him as a near equal to her (you know, except for the size thing, which she knows he wants her to exploit), as they're both on the same level below Donnica, the goddess mother.

That's what makes sense to me, anyway. Like I said, I'm not sure if there's some context to this that I'm just missing or if Annabel is supposed to come off as crazy as Trevor says she does, but I feel like this is her way of justifying her intense love for the only two people who have ever truly cared about her except for maybe her dad; we don't really know much about that relationship).

As for how this chapter was set up from S2 on, I think you did a masterful job of navigating us through a lot of stuff. For example, noting how clean and meticulous Annabel is did a great job of selling Trevor's unease when they first arrived at her condo, but more than that, I feel like that made her complete and total breakdown at the end of S2 and for most of S3 that much more powerful. She's a perfectionist how is always in control, but her initial failure, her plan for Trevor not working out at all, was something she just wasn't equipped to handle. Yes, the emotional rejection from Trevor was a factor, but I think the fact that everything didn't fall perfectly into place was at least as much to blame. She just couldn't accept that things didn't work out she had planned for them to.

As for that initial approach, it made a lot of sense to me. I kind of liken it to her own "awakening" (there, I used your word for it instead of breaking!) when she broke Tegan, not in the manner in which she was trying to get Trevor to accept it but in the message itself. Annabel accepted her place in the world, to serve Trevor and Donnica in the best way she could, from the love she (thought she) saw in Tegan when the tiny was so completely devoted to worshiping Annabel's toes.

Annabel could never do that to Trevor, however (and no, I don't think what she did to the tinies in the cage later on is the same thing as what she did to Tegan). She also respects Trevor and knows how smart he is, so she assumed that showing him her love, Donnica's love, would be enough for him to come to the same conclusion that Annabel did and realize that he belonged to them.

She was wrong, of course.

I've mentioned before about how well you've set things up in previous chapters, despite your pantser ways (I'm never going to stop giving you shit about that, just so you know!). But fuck, the way you built up Trevor losing his shit when he feels like he's being treated as lesser really culminated at the end of S2. When Annabel first made her pitch, he was a little annoyed and tried to take charge of the situation, even dropping Donnica's name (which shows how concerned he was, as he's gone out of his way to not do that up to this point). but once Annabel slips up and gives him just enough for him to piece together that Annabel had Donnica's blessing for ... whatever this was (in his mind), he flipped out! The way he screamed at Annabel about how much he hated her and how much he hated Donnica, it was the most intense he'd gotten with a giant before. He felt so utterly disrespected and underestimated from the two people he loves most (even though he couldn't admit his feelings for Annabel at the time), and it showed with the force with which he verbally went at Annabel.

Also interesting was this line from Trevor:

"I hate you with all of my heart. I hate every last one of you. It’s a goddamn joke that you would ever think I could love you. Any of you! You imbeciles."

Trevor doesn't view himself as an equal to the giants (or at least the giantesses; he didn't really mention the giant dudes later on) in this world; he views himself as above them. He thinks he's smarter than them. Tougher than them. Better than them. This is really important to establish, as it explains some of his thoughts a little later on, when Annabel shows him her "true self."

But yeah, seeing Annabel's world crumble in front of her as Trevor ripped it apart with his words was fantastic! She clung so desperately to her beliefs. Her plans. The way she envisioned this conversation going. And then, once she started to realize that this, the most important task of her life, wasn't going to work out how she had been so sure it would, she kind of snapped.

The ending of S2 is perfect, by the way. It's such a dramatic cliffhanger, even within the chapter itself. It gives every indication that Annabel is about to do some bad things to Trevor, with no hint to the contrary. I almost fell into that trap, but I held firm to my belief that Annabel has tied her very sense of being to serving both Donnica and Trevor, so I was sure that whatever she did, Trevor would be safe and not harmed (I love how she mentally walked back that "there will be some pain" line to Donnica from the previous chapter, by the way).

Annabel's actions in S3 make so much sense to me. She's a bitter person because of the way she was treated by her peers (at the very least), so her wanting to give Trevor a reason to hate her is a natural reaction to him telling her that he hated her. Also, she wanted to lay herself bare to him, keeping no secrets from him, hoping deep down that he could accept the real her.

She didn't hold back, either. Those two vore scenes, oh my God! The were so fucking good, especially since I know that this isn't necessarily your thing. Annabel's mentality here, how indulgent and lazy she was with every action, how she took her time, the way she didn't break eye contact with Trevor with the second one: all of it was phenomenal. And you provided some great detail from both a tiny and giant point of view. It was smart to have her eat two tinies so you could give us both perspectives too. Very well done!

Annabel's anguish at Trevor not accepting this (in her eyes) should have been utterly devastating to her, and holy shit was it ever! First, she kept pushing, smashing the rest of the table tinies with her fist and responding to Trevor's anger at her eating habits by pushing further. Then, we she saw how shocked he looked, she thought it was a sign of his disgust, his fear, his hatred, and she felt truly rejected by the man she loves. Instead of getting angry and taking it out on him, something I still say she's incapable of actually doing at this point, she drowned herself in sorrow and went catatonic. It wasn't even about failing Donnica at that point. It was all about being rejected by Trevor after giving him all of her.

But Trevor didn't reject her. He just needed time to realize the truth about himself. Before I mentioned that he put himself above the giants in his own mind. Well, it stands to reason that he does so with his fellow tinies as well (except Rebecca, probably because of what a fighter she is and the respect he has for that). He never really cared about what happened to the rest; that's why Donnica's actions to take away tiny rights never bothered him that much. He even admitted that he hated those table tinies for being weak.

This is also why he accepted Annabel and silently acknowledged his love for her. Her killing those other tinies so brutally didn't bother him at all. That's been a façade this whole time, something he made himself pretend to believe so he could feel like a decent person and deny the truth. He doesn't want to be viewed as just a tiny. He doesn't want to be looked at as a nothing and cast aside. This explains his drive in the office, too, fighting so hard to succeed, to show those monsters all around him that he's not only good enough but that he's better than them. That's why he was compelled to tell Helena to "obey" during their confrontation. This is vital to who he really is.

So Annabel was exactly right when she said that Trevor doesn't just love the power but that the power loves him back as well. He wants to be dominated, but he also wants to be acknowledged. to be respected, to be loved by the ones dominating him. This is what separates Donnica and Annabel from people like Victoria and Helena in his mind. The former see him for who he really is and they chose him, while the latter don't give a shit (although Victoria did kind of recognize this slightly in her thoughts before she killed those three tiny servants, I think), but to someone like Helena, Trevor is nothing and her dominance is grounded in that belief.

Annabel's happiness in realizing this, realizing that her love doesn't think her a monster (at least not one any less than he himself) was so gratifying to read! I was so happy for her! Her world had fallen apart, and with a simple look as he stared into her eye, Trevor wordlessly pieced it all back together again. This was beautiful in the darkest of ways, given the context surrounding the sweet moment. And Annabel, in that moment, finally claimed what she wanted this whole time with that simple, matter-of-fact declaration: "I'm going to fuck the shit out of you."

Backtracking (and jumping forward as well, oddly enough), I found Annabel's repeated framing of Trevor as "one of us" really intriguing. It took me longer than it probably should have to piece together that this meant that Trevor, hidden beneath his layers of resistance and rebellion, was a true believer just like Donnica and herself.

He has no problem with tinies being put in their place by people like Donnica and Annabel, with their manipulation of the law or their breaking of tinies. He's cool with all that. He "understands" why things are the way they are, and he not only accepts it but embraces it! He's special because he stood out and earned the love of Annabel and Donnica. They see the real him and love him for it, putting him above even the other giants in their minds (something Donnica herself has acknowledged at least once). Basically, they've given him exactly what he wants; to be acknowledged as better than being a mere tiny.

But at the same time, Trevor knows that he is a tiny and enjoys the feeling of helplessness at the hands of those who love him. And that's an important distinction, I think: He loves feeling helpless but not actually being helpless. That's part of his drive to succeed, too. It's why losing that job because of Donnica bothered him so much. But at the same time, it's that feeling that makes him love worshiping Donnica's feet and ass so much. It's why part of him wanted her to stop him when he left her office in the last chapter. It's why he was subconsciously attracted to that part of Annabel that scared him in the first place.

And we see Annabel take full advantage of this distinction when Trevor complains that she's "ruining it" when she calls herself big sister (which, yeah, I see his point for sure!). Bending him over her finger and spanking him with that ruler of hers (awesome to finally see it put to use, by the way!) was such a great scene! She put those breaker skills to good use! She wasn't seriously hurting him, and since she finally understood the nature of Trevor's love, she gave him what he really wanted: loving dominance through her power over him. The blend between pain and pleasure for Trevor was expertly portrayed, and Annabel pushing it, keeping it up even after he relented and going until he had to crawl to her pussy because he couldn't walk immediately afterward, was incredible! She pushed him to the limit in an odd yet endearing display of love, and I ate that shit up!

The sex scene itself was so fucking great! You conveyed Annabel's power so well throughout the whole thing, and the almost ethereal way you present the world between Annabel's thighs from Trevor's perspective really made this first time between them feel special! Of course, this time feeling so different for Annabel, the injection of love and tender willingness with it being Trevor rather than a slave inside her, also gave this scene a unique feeling. She finally knows what love is! 

And that end of the segment, with the silent conversation and him going up her ass is such a wonderful way to display the new bond that they had just formed.

As for Donnica, I love so much how worried and nervous she was at the start of S5. She made the decision to give Trevor to Annabel for a night out of pure desperation, her terror at the thought of the only man she ever loved abandoning her. So that she had so many second thoughts about it, that she agonized over not answering his calls and then agonized even more when they stopped coming, is such a powerful display of her love for him. Actually, the fact that she was so far removed from her normal, powerful self throughout the segment encapsulates how she feels about Trevor and how important he truly is to her so well!

That Annabel not only acknowledged that breaking Trevor would have destroyed the man they both love but was able to convince Donnica that this was true was so satisfying. It took a combination of Annabel's deep devotion and seeing it for herself in Trevor, but she's finally accepted that he's not going to leave her and that he didn't need to change who he is for that to be the case. That strength in him, that resistance, that rebellion is exactly what makes Trevor so special to Donnica and Annabel, and he'd just be another tiny without it.

I also love that Annabel fought so strongly to prove this point to her, almost to the point of defiance. Annabel isn't just a mindless servant to Donncia; she's devoted her life to her goddess mother. She wants what's best for Donnica just like she does Trevor. Now, usually that means doing whatever Donnica says, but, like with Trevor from time to time, she'll do what's necessary to give her master what she needs, even if it leads to her contradicting Donnica's immediate wishes or commands. She wanted to preserve the man she loved when she told Donnica that breaking Trevor would destroy what they both loved, but she defied Donnica for Donnica's own sake here as well. She knew how devastated Donnica would end up being if she continued down this path, so she fought against it in order to preserve Donnica's happiness, even when Donnica was convinced that she had to break the resistance out of her little lover. I really, really like this super complex dynamic!

And to see Annabel be embraced by the two people she loves most, to be included in their love, was such a fulfilling scene. Donnica not being upset that Annabel slept with Trevor was interesting, but it actually kind of makes sense to me. She feels a special kinship with Annabel, and she realized at the end of the last chapter that Annabel saw what she herself saw in Trevor, that Annabel truly understood. Between that and realizing the depth of Annabel's devotion and the innocent, subservient way Annabel presented this knowledge to her, I can see how Donnica didn't feel threatened or jealous here. I mean, Annabel was practically hers already.

So it was so nice to see that made official. Not only that, but Donnica truly understood things as Donnica had, I think, realizing that bringing Annabel into the relationship wasn't her decision alone, goddess or not. It was so sweet for her to check with Trevor and get his approval as well, showing just how much of a partnership Donnica sees this relationship as. Given her need to make Trevor "hers," it was important (at least to me) for her to see her love as an equal and consult him about the Annabel decision.

S6 was such a fun segment! I love the playful dynamic between Annabel and Trevor. Trevor trying to get under Annabel's skin was so fucking cute! It makes sense, too. Trevor's pushing here to get a reaction. He wants Annabel to do something about it, because he loves her using the power she wields over him yet knows he's perfectly safe in her hands no matter what he says or does. It was great to see Annabel find something that genuinely annoy him, though, spitting on him. And the way she blamed Trevor for them being lazy in bed (we already saw with Amber how pissed Donnica can get about her loved ones not getting ready fast enough) was so funny and fit that brother/sister-style dynamic she keeps projecting onto Trevor (you know, other than with the sexy stuff).

But more than that, the least segment had a much more relaxed feel, something much appreciated after five intense segments in row to make up the bulk of the chapter. The playfulness mentioned above was great, but I love how Donnica was acting more like she acts around Amber when dealing with Annabel and Trevor than the supreme goddess she is most of the time. Not so much for the mother mentality of it but because it felt more natural for her. She's wasn't exactly the person we see when she's with Trevor and those deeply buried, vulnerable emotions come out, but it doesn't feel like she needs to project that all-powerful façade around Annabel anymore, either (which she did except when she was desperate at the end of the previous chapter).

Annabel was also more natural around Donnica as well. She wasn't constantly calling her master or bowing to her. She does call her goddess mother, but she's also adorably whiney and more at ease now, which is awesome to see! She's no longer on the outside looking in, and it really shows here!

But man, that last bit, with Annabel calling herself ugly and Donnica not having it, telling her she's beautiful and that, as an extension of Donnica herself, she would have none of that talk from Annabel.

But then, Annabel does get a moment with that true Donnica, the one she keeps hidden from everyone but Trevor. When she calls Annabel baby girl, tells her she loves her, and to never think less of herself, that moment felt so real. There was no goddess mother, no all-powerful deity, no ruthless and demanding master; there was just someone who really cares about Annabel, doing everything she could to pick Annabel up when she was down. This was my favorite moment in the whole chapter, and there was a lot of competition for that No. 1 spot!

And to end the chapter with Donnica not only knowing that Trevor was up Annabel's ass, but to be playful about it and be amused, was just perfect. It's further acknowledgment that Donnica is good with Annabel and Trevor doing stuff together, a sort of open endorsement for the reader, just in case they thought that Donnica would have issues once she actually had to share Trevor. It was such a great way to cement this new aspect of Trevor and Donnica's relationship and let us know that, at least for now, happier times are ahead for Annabel!

So yeah, there was a ton of buildup to this chapter and anticipation was incredibly high, but somehow you exceeded all expectations, both in idea and execution. I don't think anyone could have predicted how this turned out, but, as I read through the whole thing, every part of it was so well thought out and crafted. Amazing work, even by your own lofty standards!

So yeah, I kind of liked it, I guess.

After reading the story for a second time, I can confidently say it’s by far one of the best giantess stories I’ve ever read. Everything about it is fantastic.

First, let’s talk about the action. All I can say is that we are truly blessed with this story: feet, ass, pussy, vore, crush all of it with just enough detail to let us visualize the scenes. You can feel what the characters are experiencing, whether it’s the tiny or the giantess. There are even some really fun and creative ideas, like the nylon games in Chapter 18. When you read it, you’re left with one wish: to take Trevor’s place and smell Donnica’s nylons yourself.

But what makes this story truly exceptional is the incredible work put into the characters something too many stories lack. In this story, every character gets some development. You can see them evolve throughout the narrative, witnessing their strengths and weaknesses. Even the giantesses have vulnerabilities, which is a refreshing change from the typical mean or gentle giantess archetypes. The attention to the characters’ emotions is impressive too; you can really feel what’s going through their minds. Their backstories help the reader connect with them because, despite being tiny or giant, they retain a human element a struggle we all face in life. As you read, you’ll experience a wide range of emotions: fear, anger, love, sadness.

The critique of our society is another fascinating aspect. Even in this world of giants and tinies, money remains a dominant force. The story highlights the darker sides of humanity, with inequality standing out like in the island arc, where tinies are reduced to mere toys for wealthy giantesses.

In conclusion, this story is absolutely fantastic, and I recommend reading it even a second time to catch all the small details that make it even better.

As for the story holy shit things took a wild turn.

I'm not sure how Amber is gonna take to her new -big sis- but I'm sure Dominica will break it to her easy if she has to.

Anna seems to have finally found her true calling in life so good for her.

Amber really could use more friends to rule over tinies with.

My condolences, that’s rough! No wonder your story has so much emotion in it :(

I’m sorry for your loss and I wish you good fortune in these difficult times. Hopefully you have some support, you seem like a kind person and deserve it.

As always, thank you for writing!

R.I.P your mom, I'm sure she's in a better place now. Feel free to reach out on Discord at any time, take as much time off as you need obviously, and hopefully remember that she loved you and cherished every memory you gave her. I'm sure she couldn't be more proud or happier of the child she had. :)

Perfect as always and like i told you if you need anything i'm always here for you bro

Great chapter and I’m so sorry about your loss and praying for everyday and hour man keep your spirit up and stay safe and strong man 

loss is hard but you will pull through and come back stronger I truly believe that 

once again sorry for the loss but take all the time you need and come back when you are ready and I’m mean truly ready 

all the love man