You truly have a way with crafting foot torture as you've shown us here, if she weren't so utterly utterly horrible I might have even for a second or two wanted to switch places with Becca. I'm not sure if this will swear her off feet for good but if/when she gets back to Amber she might need some time to steady herself before tackling those massive teenage dogs again...or ever again.

I do wonder now how many times she subjected Naomi to her feet fresh from those slippers..we haven't heard anything about it at present time but given her famously shitty nature I could see her at least forcing a few foot rubs out of the poor girl. Though knowing what we do about her that seems like the least horrible thing Naomi could be subjected to inside that nightmarish household.

Milton really...really owes Becca a lot if he makes it out of this alive. I know its not his fault and he was just in the wrong place, wrong time but I can't see Amber or Naomi or Anna keeping him around long especially in their blind rage of wanting to kick Victoria's ass for all she's put Becca through. Really feels like his best hope would be Scarlett taking care of him that is if they even have time to save him when they come for Becca...he could get left behind in more ways than one.

You also did a good job explaining how if she applied herself Victoria could find herself quite the dish, the state of unkemptness really seems her own doing and letting the world beat her down instead of using her rage and vigor to fight back against and prove it wrong. She'll learn nothing from this whenever the other shoe drops but she seems too far gone for anyone to help even if she actually wanted it.

All those poor metrosexual soy boys catching strays even, though it does seem shrinking would ruin the poor girls of Onlyfans/Findoms since they'd be too small/broke to hemorrhage money from thus likely useless. Though I assume people like Anna would make a killing breaking in the new crop of wimps for her clientele. 

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Quite a lot to unpack here...

It definitely seems like if they can't get Domica fully onboard that they will do their best to persuade Amber to come around to their way of thinking. Which given her reaction did not seem like that hard a sell, I do wonder if she would be so gung ho on it if she knew what Becca has been going through since the trip began.

Don't get me wrong I could totally see Amber in the Sisterhood just by how she acted both with her capture of Becca AND in random places like the Smoothie shop where she wanted to subject the tinies to her smelly feet before she was stopped. It did seem like she was slowly coming around to Scarlett's way of thinking beforehand though but this ego trip might have swayed her back across the tiny abuse fence.

I do however wonder if the Sisterhood did a bit of snooping beforehand as the fact that they had a tiny whom looked just like a teacher she hated ready to go, a soccer pitch AND a girl who looked just like Becca ready to flatter and kiss her ass all set up perfectly before her arrival. Knowledge of Becca would've likely been the hardest to figure out but there is the odd chance of somebody having either seen her taking her and the means she used to get things done about Becca's things etc or the big deep dive of Anna lowkey in secret being a Sisterhood trainee sent to monitor/spy on them, given her blind devotion to Domica it wouldn't be hard to see her falling under the spell of somebody like Marion.

I do admit Amber's soccer fantasy was rather hot as well.

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Holy shit with the grapes and the reveal of WHO was inside of them, a double whammy of cruelty and really driving home how far the Sisterhood is willing to go to protect their way of life, liberty and brutal cannibalism. Which also gives me pause on if they know Amber is currently good friends WITH a tiny rights activist and they've gotten pretty close...surely they would not take kindly to Scarlett's beliefs if they already know and/or find out about them as she'd surely be a pretty big kink in their cog.

I'm not sure how Domica will react to all this as she has already shown to be quite brutal and degrading on her own but The Sisterhood putting her on the backfoot to be MORE so just to be accepted by a shadow cartel might be a little disrespectful to her once she mulls it over. Domica may not have a Kingdom like Helena or whatever Marion calls hers but she has built a tremendous empire on her without one iota of help from said Sisterhood, even full size normal people fear her and she's not even calling them Goddess/Maidens in waiting or what have you...she just rules with pure power and aura.

Plus there is still Trevor whom might like the current Kingdom he finds himself in but he's also seen the ugly side of it with the slave cages, I can't imagine no matter how enamoured with it he is that he'd want his big sweetheart to spend her days actively hunting down people marked for death just because they disagree with her stance on snuffing out their kind. He does tend to think with his penis around her as does Becca around Amber with her woman parts but there is no way deep down no matter how much good the Kingdom style does for those lucky enough to be in it does for the subjects sign off on the mindless hunting, herding and slaughter of innocent people just to find some stuck up bitches egos/lust for power and what they view as the -right- order of things.

Plus by their insane logic a woman like Victoria in all her horror and vindictiveness would be the kind of woman they'd covet if she was in anyway presentable to them beyond being a total wreck. Her views on tinies, inherent cruelty to anyone and everyone even her own daughter, willingness and creativity to manipulate to get her absolute way among other -qualities- all seem like attributes the Sisterhood would be gaga over inducting into their ranks.

Actually now that I think about it I wonder if any of the kidnapped activist were related to Scarlett's family in anyway or at least friends, something that might pop up later but a minuscule chance granted unless Domica ever spills the tea on what occured in that room.

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Becca's ability to break down even the scariest of giants should be commended no matter how her next bit of story ends, she stuck to her guns to help countless people who have totally done some right questionable things to her and stood up to some truly delusionally power hungry woman despite being the size of a flea.

Victoria's rage also cost her fifteen thousand dollars and the only thing that kept Becca tethered to showing any form of subservience to her, granted Becca is in quite the pickle now but whatever power rush Victoria held over her is gone now. She might break her physically but the mental dominance and revelation she seems to so desperately crave is gone now and only the stern defiance remains.

I fully expected either Naomi/Anna to rescue them while she was out buying more booze or for her to get arrested for her reckless driving buying some time at least for them to make a rescue attempt once it was found out she was incarcerated. Which to be perfectly honest she doesn't seem as rich/powerful as Domica or Helena or the rest of her group AND there HAS to be signs of her treatment of Naomi thus it boggles the mind how nobody has called the authorities on her even if she is somewhat rich the public menace/beating of her daughter would've surely gotten somebody to step up.

While you seemed to have -solved- the Milton problem should rescue come I wonder what possibly made Naomi enter her home -alone- without any form of help from Anna? I know it would be risky to bring somebody else around not knowing where she had Becca or what was hanging over her head but I imagine Anna wouldn't have held back beating her ass to give up any info or buy Naomi some time to search and rescue poor little Becca.

Another wrinkle I kind of see now is Becca's ties to Naomi vs Amber, while Amber loves her to death and we seen a little of her friendship with Scarlett rubbing off on her with her slight questioning of how her mother treated tinies recently. BUT given her excitement over the blind, unwavering worship that Marion's tinies had shown her it gives pause that maybe she is slowly swinging back towards the other side of the fence inching her way towards becoming another Helena in the sense of letting the adoration of people blindly and devotedly fawning over her go to her creating something that even Becca might not recognise when/if she escapes hells gates.

Naomi truly feels maybe more than anyone that she needs Becca's encouragement and guidance like never before, she's lost everything except her and Anna and has suffered more than anyone not smushed into paste during the tale. Maybe not as lovers like she is with Amber and possibly Scarlett down the road but as true friend/uplifting force in Naomi's life to help her repair it and find her way in the cruel hellscape she's been thrust into.

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The parallels between the Sisterhood and things like the Illuminati are spot on, except her the prizes on the line are living things that can fit in your pocket versus things like wealth and nepotism and so forth. It truly seems like Amber and Domica have fully switched towards Helena's way of thinking and maybe even a little past it as Domica's idea of the Kingdom feels way less kind to its citizens than the others we have seen as it would seem Domica wants all the divine perks with none to little of the wholesomeness that allows people like Kass, Mara and even Darla to thrive and contribute in their tiny lives.

I am glad to see even if the tinies went against the word about not taking them into the heated rooms after what we saw with Helena not so subtly subjecting Kass to the extreme heat a few chapters ago. I'd like to think Amber would've decided against which she did but given her slight attitude shift this chapter I wouldn't have been surprised if she had taken them in just for rush of dominance over them.

It does kind of feel in a roundabout way the big bad of the story has switched a bit from Helena to Domica if I am reading her ideas for her own Kingdom correctly, Helena only became a supreme bitch due to Celine growing bitter and distant during her mother's passing where Domica seems to fully believe and embrace her own hype and ideals without any prodding or emotional trauma...like Helena but with the gloves off or shoes in this case.

The Sisterhood praying on Amber seemed smart on their part as well given that if Domica wouldn't have played ball they would still have somebody in her direct bloodline in their good graces. Who knows if Amber will end up more powerful than her mother or the other Sisterhood members but it seems like after this experience she is on the path to becoming maybe the Greatest Goddess of all time if this segment was any indication.

It does give you pause for Trevor and Becca once they are reunited with their chosen rulers, Becca is currently suffering through hell at the hands and other parts of a tyrant with unchecked morals and now her girlfriend has seemingly embraced becoming a more prim and polished version of that very same ideal. Trevor fights for tiny rights and maybe taken by The Kingdom and a few of its citizens but will he blindly sit back and let Domica create her own version without the protections and whimsy of what Celine and her family or even Marion have built for their chosen tiny denizens.

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I had the odd inkling it -might- happen but I also thought Anna would've found a way to have her -removed- without it tying back to her or the firm in anyway, still I guess this is a karmic domino falling in that Final Wave the Sisterhood keeps hinting at which tells us if Victoria could fall could anyone...Helena has always seemed to me like somebody who might end up in the Final Wave if there is more to hit.

Which brings us to Naomi, what happens with her now as if Victoria shrank could she have the gene within herself to one day meet the same fate? Granted she'd have Anna to look after her but once Amber finds out about all this...well if she ever does it would certainly not bode well for a tiny Naomi especially given Amber's new found shall we say outlook on life thanks to Marion's helping hand.

Naomi's cold forwardness to finding out her Mother shrunk makes perfect sense as while I expected a long silieque about all the pain and suffering she'd put her through but distancing herself from any shred of emotion and power Victoria held over her seems like the most prudent move in healing her wounds.

Becca's calming powers did not seem to work for Victoria which makes me think she was too far gone to really benefit from them, the world had taken its toll and she had no more peace or love to give it. Though I now wonder if Becca can pull Amber back from the Goddesshood kick the Sisterhood sent her on, she's young still so impulse is to be expected but her buying into the beliefs of people like Helena and Marion can't be good for people like Becca or even Scarlett if push comes to shove.

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1. Again I fully expected Anna to find someway to take her off the board if she had to, be it using Domica's reach or even Helena's to make her disappear. I had an inkling some major players might shrink including Victoria so it was always in the back of my head but it did land perfectly given how shitty a person was to Naomi and now she gets to make it up to in a twisted morality sense with likely her blood and tears both of which she took from her daughter over the years.

2. I figured Milton would eventually die somehow either being forgotten with Victoria when rescue came or mindlessly crushed by said rescue before Becca could explain to them who he was and why he mattered. It made sense for the story you were telling in Becca's inner strength to stand up to insurmountable odds no matter the pain and danger she found herself in.

3A. Anna being a Deathstalker makes perfect sense giving her job as a breaker and her level of insanity at times, you could totally tell she's possibly and likely done things like this before to get tinies but also some bigger folks out of the way for clients or her own betterment.

3B. Becca's rescue was perfect, while I didn't expect Victoria to have shrunk I expected the rescue all the same. After all the shit she's been through since Amber left and honestly before even she deserved a nice moment to be appreciated and protected by the world that's taken so much from her.

4. I LOVED the slippers! I know Victoria was evil but the glee and joy she gathered from subjecting another human to her old ratty slippers and the hell they unleashed was truly wonderful for this old footfan.

5. It seemed right after all she had put Naomi though that she ended up under her thumb so to speak. The universe seems to suck a fat one regularly but in this one instance it seems to have smiled upon Naomi in a unique and for her wonderful way.

6. I have a feeling Becca might be screwed even if she doesn't realize it. Becca's new outlook screams not boding while for not only her autonomy as a tiny person but her status as a trusted, free thinking/feeling person at all. We've seen what happens when Amber got into her moods and took over Becca's entire being but she was always able to be tethered back into sanity and calm by said tiny and Scarlett. Now with this new outlook it feels like the tether is gone and Amber will rule with a smelly iron Teenage Foot from this point forward incompasing Becca and likely others like her in her own version of a Kingdom with one ruler for all with liberty for none.

7. Domica's shoes are off now and she's free to be herself more than likely ever before, this was the universe not only telling her her ways and views were right but AFFIRMING IT! She now has carte blanche to reign terror down upon the people below her with the assured reasoning of it being right as a woman of her stature, while I think Amber might be savable from her new outlook into a more softer/fairer Goddess in Domica's case it seems she is about to unleash an even MORE powerful self unto the world and there doesn't seem anyone poised to even attempt to stop her once she gets going.

8. The fact they we tiny rights activist hit harder than the initial vore given how hard and deep Marion went to track these people down and confine them to this grizzly fate. It makes you wonder with a woman like Domica's determination and will alongside the backing and reach of the Sisterhood it makes you wonder if hollowing grapes out to shove tinies into for shits and giggles will pale in comparison to what she'd have planned in her brilliant and vengeful mind.

9A. It was the natural course it seems, Domica is a woman built on power who pulled herself up through the ranks and doesn't take no for an answer thus of course she'd take Marion's words to heart and see herself as THE Guiding Force in it like the world was giving her Carte Blanche to be herself turned up to eleven. And as we know if Domica is hellbent on power and glory it would only make sense for her daughter to do the same eventually, I don't know if Amber will ever reach the heights of her mother's grandeur but the seeds are there for her not only to rule the tinies but maybe even THE Sisterhood one day given her youth and determination since the seeds have been planted and there would likely be no stopping her ascent through the ranks until she was Top Dog on the pecking order.

9B. I kind of answered this with the prior paragraph but I'd like say nowhere good for people like Becca and Trevor and possibly Scarlett givin her stance on tiny rights. It feels like in an odd sense this might be Domica/Amber's heel turn and shockingly enough people like Helena and Anna might end up being the ones who have to oppose them or talk them down from the ledge so to speak.

Holy shit finally! Our dear Rebecca is saved and Victoria gets her just desserts! Let’s hope Amber never finds out! But goddamn this was a good chapter for the 40th! Poor Milton died but it was integral.The vore scene was great, stuffing tinies in grapes, what’s next, olives? And then Amber, a goddess in the making or is she already? Both her and her mother deserved to be worshiped and pampered but god do they so desperately need to be loved and worshiped by their little lovers that the so clearly miss. Can’t wait to see how this goes and how Donnica intends on making and ruling a Kingdom of her own.

Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Milton. Rebecca did everything she could to save him, but in the end Victoria’s bitterness won out. I was curious what you thought about the grape eating vore scene... it was something new I experimented with, and since I’m not naturally a vore guy, I’m really glad to hear you enjoyed it.

And yeah, Donnica and Amber have definitely changed a bit since they left. It’ll be interesting to see how they interact with their tiny lovers when they get back.

As for the kingdom (empire, really!) of Donnica... there are a lot of implications wrapped up in that ;)

Holy shit this was amazing dude absolutely loved every segment and how that ending felt so satisfying!! Absolutely perfect 

Finally, I waited for this chapter so much 

Author's Response:

Haha, it’s been a pretty tense six weeks leading up to it, hasn’t it? ;)

Last segment of this chapter time goes back to Trevor, who continues his exploration of the kingdom in the company of Mara.

And I have to say, I loved this one so much. As always, the descriptions are incredible; the kingdom becomes more and more interesting as we slowly discover all its wonders through Trevor’s eyes. The fact that it’s such an opposition to everything we’ve seen in the story before gives it even more intensity. It’s like a place like that shouldn’t even exist in the dark and twisted world of DAW, but here it is : the perfect world for tiny people, the perfect place for giantesses and tinies to coexist.

We even learn more about the complexity of this place ; the parallel with the Svalbard Global Seed Vault is fantastic too  I don’t know if it was intentional, but I loved it.

Then we discover even more about how pollination works, thanks to the trees rather than bees like in our world. Once again, the kingdom amazes us. This place is truly incredible ; it’s the perfect blend of science, nature, and even religion, in perfect balance, creating the closest thing possible to heaven.

Another detail I really enjoy is that technology is limited to the bare essentials. Trevor who  thinks the giantesses are constantly watched thanks to technology just to realize it’s not the case at all  is funny. I loved that Trevor didn’t trust it at first, but he starts to, just like us readers. At the beginning, I thought the kingdom was some kind of cult designed to feed the giantesses egos, but no : this place really is paradise. I hope we don’t end up discovering a darker, more twisted side to it.

But what I love most about the kingdom is that its people truly understand what life means. They’re a bunch of happy people who enjoy life as it’s offered to them, being natural, without being forced to wear a mask to fit into a messed-up society.

Mara’s character is great too ; I love that she’s almost the complete opposite of Trevor. And of course, the whole pollination process is fantastic we can really feel the effort you put into building this segment, and it shows while reading. I just wish I could be there with Trevor and Mara watching it, but it’s only the beginning of the beauty this segment has to offer.

The Pocahontas (the Disney version, not the real story) and Avatar vibes are lovely. Pragmatic Trevor is fun too : he wants to understand everything, find answers ; he can’t just let himself go and enjoy the moment. But you can feel the kingdom and its wonders slowly changing him  he starts to relax and lower his guard, which I absolutely loved in these two segments with him.

Mara is great ; I really enjoy her story, which is once again the opposite of Trevor’s. I loved the way she sees things, and also her take on how shrinking changes humans  like her husband who tried to kill her. She tells Trevor that shrinking changes them because they lose contact with the earth. It’s interesting, even though I’m more on Trevor’s side : for me, it’s more about losing everything that defines who we are, losing that feeling of strength and security that comes with our size. But Trevor doesn’t challenge her  another great evolution. Not long ago, I’m sure he would have argued with her. He doesn’t even want to ; quite the opposite. His first reflex was to confront her, then he realizes that the real magic of the kingdom isn’t its beauty  it’s the bonds it creates between people, no matter who you are, where you come from, or even your size. Everyone can love and help each other without being judged.

Finally, Mara gets to see what she’s been waiting for so long : an eruption. And even though I already said it at the start of the review, I have to say it again : the descriptive work is fantastic.

After that, it’s time to work and document everything. Once they’re done, Mara tells Trevor the truth : the kingdom has accepted him, even chosen him, and he can no longer leave.

To conclude an incredible segment. I want to praise the descriptive work again and again everything is so perfect that we can visualize every scene, yet you still leave just enough room for our imagination to fill in the gaps. Mara’s character is fantastic and really fun to follow, Trevor’s evolution is great too. But the most intriguing part is the ending : how will he react when he has to leave this paradise to go back to Donnica ? Will he be able to abandon this place full of wonderful people where he finally feels safe ? It’s going to be very interesting to see how it all unfolds, but now we have to wait a few more days for chapter 40… damn, I’m so hyped !

Time to go back to Rebecca and Victoria, exactly where we left them, right after Victoria received her mysterious package. After a little while, we discover what’s inside the box: a tiny. It had always been Victoria’s dream to own one just for herself, but for a long time it felt impossible. She had considered kidnapping one and enslaving him, but she was too scared of getting caught and sent to jail.

I love these little details it’s a great parallel with Donnica, Helena, Annie, and even her own daughter Naomi. They all have access to tinies, but not Victoria. She’s a coward who can only act strong around the weak. So instead, she searched online, and after a lot of digging she finally found exactly what she wanted. This whole passage is fantastic; it really feels like the descent of an addict drugs, gambling, whatever where the little fantasy starts to ruin your life, takes your money, and devours your soul. That’s exactly what happened to Victoria: in just a few weeks she spent more than $15,000 to get the “perfect” tiny woman, Aurélia.

Sadly, when she opened the box, there was no Aurélia. In fact, there wasn’t a tiny woman at all there was a tiny man named Milton. And if Aurélia was supposed to be perfect, the same definitely cannot be said of Milton: he’s skinny, depressed, and terrified.

Slowly, Victoria realizes the truth: she got scammed. When she tries to contact the guy who sold her “Aurélia,” he’s gone no trace of him anywhere. Even the emergency number is disconnected. There’s no other explanation: she’s been scammed. She spent $15,000 on the perfect tiny girl and all she got was a broken tiny man.

This sends Victoria into an uncontrollable rage. She wants to destroy everything and damn, (I feel like I say this every segment) the description of Victoria’s rage and Milton’s reaction is fantastic. You can really feel Milton’s fear rightly, so he has been kidnapped for month just to end up in Victoria place I feet so bad for him.

Another detail I loved is the little backstory about Milton’s kidnapping: he was just enjoying life, playing video games, when he randomly got snatched while going to get a drink. It’s a great way to show how tiny Americans like Lucia end up on Azurea Island.

Finally, Victoria decides she’s going to crush this pathetic excuse of a man she got instead of her perfect Aurélia. But Rebecca steps in to protect him, and Victoria realizes she can use Milton as leverage to make Rebecca obey just like she already does with Naomi. Thanks to Milton, Victoria might finally have full control over the last two women left in her pathetic life.

To conclude, this segment is really interesting. As always, I love the work on the descriptions. And I’m not going to lie seeing Victoria get scammed is deeply satisfying. Anything that makes this pathetic woman miserable is perfect. I also continue to love Rebecca even after everything she’s been through, she still risks it all to protect Milton. She could have abandoned him to save herself, but no. And that probably means Victoria will now blackmail her to keep Milton alive. And the backstory about the kidnaping of Milton is also fascinating.

Now it’s time to leave sweaty little Rebecca, tiny Milton, and pathetic Victoria behind and go back to paradise with Trevor and Mara.

New segment, who makes us go from the hell of Victoria place to the paradise of the kingdom; we follow Trevor who now lives in the kingdom. Most of the day he just has to leave for his daily phone call with our beloved Donnica.

And I have to say I really enjoyed this calmer segment after the first one, the way you build this segment is perfect especially the influence of the kingdom on Trevor, it’s really interesting to see how things have evolved and how the tinies have been forced to build an armor around themselves to survive in this new world but in the kingdom everything is different even if the giantesses are still here it’s not like the outside. In the kingdom the tinies can be normal, enjoying the small things of life without the fear of being crushed or just suffering from their presence.

A detail I enjoy is Trevor finding excuses to not go to work when not so long ago he said to Kassandra he couldn’t live like that; he needed to be active. It’s a little evolution that makes me smile, it’s probably a part of the armor Trevor built to survive always work, be useful, to not think about what he has lost.

Another time I have to say it: the work on the descriptions is fantastic as always from the description of the kingdom, the architecture, the reactions of the people, everything is perfect.

Now it’s time for Trevor to eat and he ends up in a restaurant with other tinies he doesn’t even know but still enjoys their company while enjoying the best food he has had in ages, and I have to say I really loved this moment. It feels so natural, we can really feel that for once Trevor can be himself without wearing his cynical armor, he is just happy without any problems for a few hours and it’s relaxing to read, it’s almost like it’s a different story: no more cruelty, no more ego wars, no more broken characters, just a simple life with people being happy enjoying what life has to offer. After the first segment and the previous chapters it’s more than welcome.

Trevor was even relaxed enough to enjoy a nap; I hope one day Rebecca will also enjoy the stuff in life she deserves more than everyone else.

After that the day was done and even if he feels a bit guilty about not joining Vikki and Ricci to work with them, he promises himself to go the next day, but when he was on his way he meets a mother and her baby who asks him to push the stroller. Another time this moment is so wholesome, we can see how people trust each other in the kingdom, it’s so different from the rest of the story and we can even extend that to our own world: people don’t trust each other anymore. This kind of little moment adds so much to the paradise vibe of the kingdom. Lucky for Trevor and for us the kingdom has so much more to offer and Trevor will discover it the next days after he heard music, and he decides to follow it to know where it comes from, so that’s how his new journey in the kingdom starts.

First, he thought it comes from Kassandra’s place making him remember everything she told him and the pain she was hiding behind her own armor. But also the guilt of Trevor  toward her, he told her stuff he regrets. It’s really interesting, I like this little sour moment in such a joyful segment, also it could be a tease for his next big mission: fix everything between the powerful and beautiful Helena and the rebellious Celine, but he will have a lot of work to make that happen but if someone can do it it’s Trevor but before that he still have a few days to enjoy the wonders the kingdom has to offer.

After that little introspection he heard the music again and went on a mission to find the origin of it and this moment is fantastic, I really enjoyed the simplicity of that moment: just Trevor looked for the music. When we know what he has been through and not even that long ago it feels so good to have some calm moments like that, also all this moment is another time so relaxing: Trevor walking in the kingdom looking for answers. After a few moments he finds some group of people also listening to the music, a little detail I enjoy is the freedom in the kingdom: everyone can be who they want to be, not a copy of the goddesses who rule the place. After a little while Trevor is interrupted by a new amazing character: Mara. She explains to him the music is called “Whispering Grass”, and it’s another wonder of the kingdom. After that they talk a bit more, Trevor discovers she is a scientist specialized in pollination, a bit later we also learn she has a kid named Matthew and it’s something great in this segment: I love the fact we have some happy children after the revelations on Rebecca, Naomi and Amber’s past, seeing children with good parents is enjoyable.

After that it’s time for Trevor to follow Mara to discover even more of the wonders the kingdom has to offer and there will be plenty in the last segment.

To conclude i want to congratulate you for this segment: it’s so different from the rest of the story but it’s still fantastic, the lighter tone of this one is great even if we still have some darkness also with the moment Trevor thinks about Kassandra and the story she told him, also I really enjoyed Trevor in this segment: it’s really nice to see him just enjoy basic stuff life can offer without being scared to be crushed, eaten or any other things giantesses can do. The character of Mara is incredible, so different from the ones we used to see in DAW but refreshing, also it’s the first segment who doesn’t show giantess being active we heard about them but not see them at all. Now it’s time to leave paradise to go to hell again.

Neat Chapter.

More Victoria i'm so happy (NO)

Author's Response:

Yeah, I thought you’d be ecstatic! Aren’t you the leader of the Victoria fan club? :o

that vore scene was so good omg. have you ever thought about doing a story thats more vore focused?? because i would 100% read that. the buildup you wrote just made it way better honestly. seriously amazing story man, can’t wait to read more!!