[Report This]Date: December 01 2024 3:00 AM Title: PART 6
Your so talented each chapter is go good, the power you give to the woman. Thanks for this
Author's Response:
Thank you for saying so :)
loving all your comments, glad you are enjoying the story, more updates to come!
[Report This]Date: November 29 2024 3:54 PM Title: PART 6
Oh no!!!! Not Rebecca !!!!! I hope Trevor can save her from Amber !!!!! Gaaah I’m so conflicted on one had I love the domination of Donnica and Amber but at the same time I want some tiny justice to be served lol so morally conflicting haha making this story even more fun
hmmm is possible that it could be a Rebeca X Amber show where Rebecca mind turns into a brainwashed woman who worships Amber or maybe even Amber feeling some mercy for Becca hmmmmmm very interesting hope we find out.
Will Don show mercy on some level if she find out she’s Trevor’s friend. She might have Trevor beg for her mercy on her and allow her to stay as ambers plaything.
can’t wait to see what happens next P.S hope we get some ass stuff lol
Author's Response:
You wont have to wait long for more ass stuff, the next chapter will open with one of my favorite ass scenes ;)
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 11:28 PM Title: PART 4
I wonder if Donnica and Amber will ever visit Trevor’s home. There should be enough space for two girls right?
Author's Response: Maybe we'll find out about Trevor's tiny home in the next part ;)
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 6:49 PM Title: PART 5
This story is pretty hot. It’s all of the little details that are doing it. Donnica also isn’t shy of taking power.
Thank you for writing it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it :)
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 3:56 AM Title: PART 1
The writing in this story is some of the best I've seen. The visuals. The atmosphere. Subtle things that complete the experience.
Love this story. Feels like Donnica has a more soft side than she's letting on think I don't hate. The contrast in situations where the daughter left the room and she changed.
I could go on for days. Love this. I'd be interested in reading anything from this author.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for saying so :)
Just starting my giantess writing career but hopefully more stories will come
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 1:47 AM Title: PART 5
This chapter is absolutely perfect, i cant wait to read the next one. This story is incredible.
Author's Response:
yes I enjoyed writing this chapter after a mainly Amber chapter last time. Thank you for the reviews, this is my first story and I love reading the comments :)
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 1:47 AM Title: PART 5
This chapter is absolutely perfect, i cant wait to read the next one. This story is incredible.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2024 3:05 AM Title: PART 4
I wouldn't be surprised if Donnica wants to keep Trevor with her at all times in the future. Bringing him to work to showcase him as her slave. Keeping him in her pussy, her breasts, or her ass. I guess breasts would show him off more to make her more intimidating.
Author's Response:
Donnica definitely getting more and more possessive over her star slave ;)
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 1:05 AM Title: PART 3
Fantastic story can't wait so rest the next chapter
Date: November 16 2024 10:13 PM Title: PART 1
Enjoying the hell out of this story so far. Really enjoy the dynamics between these three and I’m very excited for Trevor to spending the night up hai girlfriend’s ass. Hopefully you do a similar flashback type scenario so we can see a bit more of Trevor’s perspective in Donnica’s pussy and ass. We really wanna hear all about his experience.
Author's Response:
Hey FYI i actually went back to the end of Part 2 and added Trevor's perspective of those events. Thank you for this feedback it was really helpful. Glad you are enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2024 9:47 PM Title: PART 2
Yessss I loved that he is sleeping in her ass tonight let’s gooo I hope we see more of this in future chapters!!!!
[Report This]Date: November 16 2024 9:46 PM Title: PART 1
I loved this story already Trevor seems to be my spirt animal lol and Donnica is a MILF goddess already and Amber with that inner teenage rage and appeal is interesting and I can’t wait to see more
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review :)
This is my first story so I love seeing the feedback, glad you are enjoying.