Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2025 2:31 AM Title: PART 15

Rebecca seems to slowly but surely getting through to Amber and maybe making her a better person for the future.

Not sure what kind of future with her mother about but a future none the less.

Author's Response:

Big things have small beginnings

I enjoy writing those little moments in life that build to change... I mean I also love writing about the big moments (which writer doesn't!) but there is a certain clarity to writing about the little things, small nudges over time. 

I love exploring all those tiny interactions between Amber and Rebecca.

Thanks for the comment :)

Reviewer: It Was Me Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2025 2:11 AM Title: PART 14

You know, I found that opening segment to be oddly sweet. I know that might sound odd, given the constant fighting throughout the segment, but, even though I disagree with Donnica here, I feel a lot more endeared to her than I did before (and I liked her before this, too).

One thing I love about this story is the complexity of its characters. There have been so many times so far that a character (read Amber and Donnica) has said one thing but meant something entirely different. I feel like almost everything Donnica said to Trevor in that segment was her disguising her true feelings. In fact, Trevor flat out tells us this in the narrative, when he notes that he sees the worry in Donnica's eyes after she tells him that he will be watched at all times and that he "can't be trusted alone." This makes sense, as the "trust" issue isn't that Donnica thinks Trevor is trying to "escape" her or somehow screw her over but rather that she "can't trust" him to be safe on his own. She says some harsh things to him here, but those stern words are coming from a place of concern, not spite, hate, or disgust.

To me, it seems obvious that the same is true of most of what she says in the second fight of the segment. The first thing she brings up after telling him that she won't let him take the new job is that she won't allow him out of the house during the day. She's not there during the day, so why is it a big deal that he stays there when she herself is working? Again, I think this is a safety issue. She's mostly respected Trevor's autonomy so far (as annoying as she finds it), as we saw when he told her he was searching for a new house to fill his lot. But at the start of this chapter, as noted above, we saw her put her foot down and be firm when it came to his safety. And given all the things she has gotten away with when it comes to tinies, I can see why she'd be concerned that another giant might take him from her or even just kill him if they get the right opportunity. So he needs to stay in her house, where it's safe. It's so obvious to her.

Then there's Donnica referring to Trevor as a slave and telling him that she owns him, as well as her getting indignant when he says that he needs meaningful work. She suggests that he can worship her while she's working as he's looking for meaningful things to do and gets mad when he tries to explain that a job is different. This all sounds pretty arrogant and bad on her part, but, in its own way, I think it's pretty sweet. Given what we've seen of their relationship so far, a lot of the more derogatory meaning behind these words is kind of removed. In my mind, all of this is just her way of saying that she wants him with her always, even in the literal sense. She doesn't want to be separated from him, and the fact that he would "insult" that notion by claiming that he needs to work upset her more than he can understand right now.

The thing about Donnica is that she doesn't seem to know how to express herself around the people she loves. We've seen this a few times with her interactions with Amber, maybe most clearly when we couldn't even hear her side of that call with Amber about soccer not going so well. Donnica cares deeply about her daughter, just as she does Trevor, but, unless she's pushed to the emotional brink, the power attorney just can't convey her real feelings to them. She's used to making demands and having them met almost immediately. Even her own friends are afraid of her (we'll get to that in a minute). Donnica is used to bullying her way into getting what she wants. She doesn't know any other way to approach things like this, and she damn sure doesn't know how to respond when it doesn't work.

We see that as she gets more and more frustrated as Trevor doesn't give in and agree with her. Honestly, she doesn't even need him to when you think about it. She's gotten away with so much with tinies, and she's sharing his registration, so she's holding all the cards. She could just laugh off his complaints and show him that he's a slave by sticking him somewhere he doesn't like and just going about her business. But she can't do that, because Trevor isn't actually a slave to her, no matter how much she tells him (or herself) otherwise. His opinion matters to her, and she wants him to be happy. She just wants him to accept that she's always right and to give her what she wants, too. Unfortunately for her, that's not how relationships work.

So Donnica tries threatening and intimidating Trevor into making an apology for daring to defy her. When that doesn't work, she tries to woo him into it by tempting him with her ass, telling him that licking her anus will be taken as an apology and getting even more upset when he refuses to do it. She knows he loves it, yet he won't do it because he won't give into her. That's so frustrating to her that it starts to bring her to tears. She's so upset that he can't just give her this. Why can't he just go with her on this?

Ironically, the stubbornness that kept these tactics from working are part of what attracts her to him, and I almost think part of her would have been disappointed if she had been able to scare him into submission.

So Donnica decides that she needs to "punish" Trevor. And how does she do that? By making him sleep in her slipper. That's right, the guy with the foot fetish who's totally comfortable sleeping inside her asshole is being "punished" by being "forced" to sleep in her slipper. Clearly this is no punishment at all, given his love of her feet. And, in fact, the very next segment makes clear that this was usually something nice that she did for him and that he "reluctantly enjoyed" the smell, even if it did "feel like a prison" this time. The real punishment for both of them is their anger at one another, but that wasn't intentionally given to them by the other: That's just how they feel in that moment.

Also, I thought it was super cute that she gave him the hand towels to use as a blanket despite her anger. There's something about being considerate when enraged that's just really funny to me.

But Donnica's real problem here is that, while (as I've said before) Trevor accepts her for who she is, she really hasn't completely done the same for him yet. He has a good reason for wanting this job, yet she has no interest in really listening to it. She just wants him to do what she wants. She also gets frustrated at that same stubborn attitude that she sometimes loves, meaning she hasn't fully accepted the good with the bad when it comes to him yet. Whether or not she gets there will determine if Trevor is able to get that job (or another one like it if Donnica can't reverse what she did) and most likely the course of the relationship overall.

One last thing on that opening segment. I thought it was a good move to briefly note that intimate segment in the shower between Donnica and Trevor. It shows that, despite everything, they're still very much in love, but, at the same time, writing a detailed smut scene in between the two fights would have felt really awkward. I think this light touch was a great way to handle it. It really read the room, so to speak.

Man, all that Victoria stuff was intense! That shit built up to the point that, at the start of the chapter's final segment, I was legitimately concerned that she might do something truly terrible to Trevor. That seething anger of hers reaching a boiling point, all the humiliations she put Trevor through, and the general way she treats tinies all had me feeling like bad things were in store for our hero. So excellent work building that tension! It was straight-up palpable by the end of the second-to-last segment, when she turned her attention back to Trevor.

But I loved how Trevor reacted in that moment. He spent most of the chapter thinking that Victoria would mostly listen to him the way that Donnica does, and he didn't really adjust to Victoria's radically different treatment of him. But, when he really thought she was going to do something to him, something serious, he didn't whine or beg; he was defiant without even saying a word. Despite his exhaustion and fear, he wasn't going to give her what she wanted. And even Victoria recognized that. After spending most of the chapter trying to show Trevor that he's not really a man, she acknowledged (to herself) that he actually was, and it turned her on in a way that she hadn't been in years. He separated himself from her husband, and that made her want to break him even more.

But she can't, because she's still sober enough to remember that Trevor is Donnica's and that Donnica would destroy her if she went too far with him. Hell, she even realized that she "flirted" with that line with what she already did. Unknown to her, though, I think Donnica would think she already crossed it with that stunt in the pool, as Donnica does think that Victoria is beneath her little man, and seeing her make him swim between her smelly feet to make him feel less than that probably wouldn't sit well with her.

What Victoria did with those slaves, though? Fucking hot! She did in one with her asshole, one with her clit, and one with her foot, giving herself two powerful orgasms along the way. And the way she held eye contact with Trevor both when going into the shower and as she squished that last tiny was incredible! From a fetish standpoint, I loved this! From a narrative standpoint, I'm curious and concerned about Trevor's mental state after witnessing a murder before his eyes and hearing two more just before that.

All of that stuff should make it very interesting the next time we see Donnica and Trevor together. I don't know if we're going to see that as she comes back from town or if we'll jump ahead by then, but either way, Trevor's likely going to be in a weird, distant place, and I'm really curious how Donnica reacts to that, assuming she's calmed down enough to notice and doesn't try to avoid him or something.

And hopefully, Victoria gets what the fuck is coming to her.

I don't always feel that way when reading stories on this site. In fact, part of the fun is truly not knowing if the worst people will suffer for their crimes and even sometimes not wanting them to suffer (I already said that I like Donnica despite the terrible things she's done, so I'm actually not pulling for her to get her just desserts). It's weird how that works sometimes. But not in Victoria's case. Fuck her. Anybody who hates their husband because he's not miserable enough and she can't drag him down to her level is just disgusting, although that little tidbit explained so much about her.

And don't even get me started on her parenting. What a fucking monster. Naomi actually wasn't too bad this chapter when it came to Trevor (or, at least, she wasn't nearly as bad as I thought she would be the next time she got her hands on a tiny), but I can see why she's as fucked up as she is. Victoria did nothing but scream at her and even physically abused her a couple times. That's so fucked up. Then there's that "I don't care what you want" line. It seems clear to me that the only reason Victoria has custody of Naomi is to keep her ex-husband from having her, which would probably make both Naomi and her dad happy. And Victoria can't have that. Because fuck her!

Yeah, fuck her! Did I say that already? Well, I'll say it again, fuck her!

But I want to clarify that me feeling this way about Victoria is a good thing. You created a truly despicable character that draws a strong emotional response out of me, and that's really the goal of writing, isn't it? So good work, and, you know, fuck her.

Lastly, I suddenly have a lot of sympathy for Naomi, despite her murderous intent with tinies. Again, I have a feeling that something's coming with her that's going to be pretty bad, but, if I'm write about that, putting this stuff into the story before that adds a delicious layer of complication to whatever it is she's about to do, and I absolutely love that! I now know her a lot more about her motivations, and that should really add something to anything she does moving forward.

So yeah, great chapter, even without including the ever-popular Amber-Rebecca dynamic! Given that it sounds like you wrote a lot of this out well in advance and, reading some of your responses to reviews, you might have been a little surprised at just how much the readers are getting into that arc, I imagine you may have been a little concerned about that by the time you got to this point. But you nailed this, and having a Trevor-centric chapter reminds us of just how interesting he is as a character, too!

Author's Response:

With regards to Donnica and Trevors confrontation I find the important thing to remember when writing fights is that people can say some pretty mean things that they don't always mean and even say things they do mean but in a way they might not normally express it. arguments can be a conduit for the truth, but that's usually in larger scale fights. Mostly they - just like in real life - end up causing more troubles than they solve. 

"One last thing on that opening segment. I thought it was a good move to briefly note that intimate segment in the shower between Donnica and Trevor. It shows that, despite everything, they're still very much in love, but, at the same time, writing a detailed smut scene in between the two fights would have felt really awkward. I think this light touch was a great way to handle it. It really read the room, so to speak."

Nice of you to point out, I actually debated with myself whether to go into detail but ruled against it once i took a step back and looked at the context. 

Actually jumping back to last chapter I had a similar debate with myself over the sex scene between Amber and Rebecca after their fight in her bed room. I had that chapter written for weeks and it was only on the day of publishing I lay in bed thinking about it and I was like 'I need to add some relationship dev there' (I wont explain what as it comes into play later) and I wrote it and edited hours before publishing. I think I made the right call there tho because there was no fight scene after, although I'm always uneasy about not being able to sit on what I write for at least a few days. 

"Man, all that Victoria stuff was intense! That shit built up to the point that, at the start of the chapter's final segment, I was legitimately concerned that she might do something truly terrible to Trevor. That seething anger of hers reaching a boiling point, all the humiliations she put Trevor through, and the general way she treats tinies all had me feeling like bad things were in store for our hero. So excellent work building that tension! It was straight-up palpable by the end of the second-to-last segment, when she turned her attention back to Trevor."

Dudeeeeee I'm so happy to hear you say that about the chapters ending, as a writer you're never really sure if things land or not and I tried my hardest to build the tension so that the reader would have the exact reaction you describes, so mission accomplished I guess :D

"All of that stuff should make it very interesting the next time we see Donnica and Trevor together. I don't know if we're going to see that as she comes back from town or if we'll jump ahead by then, but either way, Trevor's likely going to be in a weird, distant place, and I'm really curious how Donnica reacts to that, assuming she's calmed down enough to notice and doesn't try to avoid him or something."

Yeah it'll interesting to see how Trevor reacts to what he saw, and even how he reacts to having witnessed rented slaves in general (other tiny people being enslaved in front of him.) The thing about the character is that while he fashions himself easy going, he tends to not deal with things and pushes the buck down the line, having already felt himself in danger earlier in story like with Amber and even sometime with Donnica. Its a pressure cooker for sure and one thing that is true in life is that everything comes to roost eventually...

Naomi definitely has a lot going on. I know I sound like a writing 101 book here but multiple layers and conflicting motivations make for more interesting characters. Since engaging more with the giantess community I've done some roleplays and honestly most people just want to interreact with boring 2D characters... it's like; you'll be a bad guy or a mean ex so I can crush or eat you. But where's the conflicting inner turmoil that makes me hate you but also love you!?!??!!? Where's the humanity god damnit!?!?!?! 

and as for Victoria, I might have a little something, something planned for her down the line ;)

I absolutely worried about the lack of Rebecca/Amber in the chapter, its actually the reason I decided to release this arc in rapid succession (next chapter should be up either tomorrow or next day... probably tomorrow knowing me lol) but honestly I am super surprised at how well this chapter has been received, not in that I thought it was bad, but just like we were saying it didn't have the girls in it. I'm excited to flesh out Trevor moving forward, some big things coming for him for sure.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2025 1:21 PM Title: PART 14

The goddess, the allmight figure, is one of both nurture and destruction, and Amber and Donnica are living embodiements of these aspects… or maybe it’s more accurate to say they strive to be, to become Trevor and Rebecca’s whole world. This strive is more apparent in Amber’s case because the tiny one is more mature, smarter, more her own self than the owner. This battle to be his own self is also the dynamic of Trevor and Donnica – she has full control over Amber, but fears losing Trevor in every corner because he is already an adult man despite being tiny. Trevor on the other hand wants freedom but is, at the same time, terrified by it. This nurturing and destructive aspects became clear to me when comparing Amber and Donnica with Victoria, which embodies only destruction. She is a destructive force not only for tinies but also for her family. And the irony is that, this 100% destructive force maybe introducing us to a new dynamic between Naomi and Trevor - that of father and daughter – in which Naomi will start striving to take the mother's place in Trevor’s life.

All these complex psychological interpretations are highlighted by the great writen size and feet scenes, the story feels natural. Simply a great use of the blurry lines between desire, lust, power, love and family for development. The world isn’t monotone, the main and side characters aren’t one dimensional. I can only thank you for all the thought, the hard work, for writing and sharing with us.

P.S.: Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

Author's Response:

Wow,

thank you so much for this review, it was amazing to read and re-read many times. It's these types of critiques that really make me think and inspire me.

I appreciate you taking the time to share this with me, and I hope to see more of your insights moving forward :) 

...and don't worry about your English, you expressed yourself perfectly. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2025 3:21 AM Title: PART 14

My Trevor certainly caused a lot of mischief today.

I hope Rebecca is more well behaved in future installments to give these nice women a break.

Author's Response:

Trevor was certainly between a rock and a hard place, hey?

don't worry about Rebecca, we'll be checking in with her and Amber next chapter for their beach day adventure :D

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2025 3:37 AM Title: PART 13

Rebecca finally accepting her place warms the heart.

Also looking forward to more Naomi now.

Author's Response:

I wouldn't say she's fully accepted her place but there's definitely something going on there ;)

Oh yes, more Naomi to come!

Hope you had a good holiday man, thanks for the comment as always. 

Reviewer: It Was Me Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2025 5:17 AM Title: PART 13

The job thing with Trevor is really interesting.

I think Donnica's reaction to Trevor almost drowning is a bad sign for him regarding that talk. Donnica respects Trevor enough to not force him to do what she wants, but she also loves him deeply. She let him out by himself at the pool, then he almost died. Now she's not allowing him out there on his own again. So while she can't bring herself to force Trevor to do what she wants selfishly, she will force him to not do things that she thinks are dangerous, and I think, even aside from her obviously not wanting him to leave her house or work in general, there are some safety concerns with going out into the world to work like it seems like Trevor is about to do.

So this will obviously be a fight, and I'm really curious to see where that goes. Donnica's going to be tested here, and I think she's going to fail, at least initially. I think she's going to metaphorically put her foot down (she wouldn't do that literally to Trevor), but I don't think Trevor is going to stand for that. Ultimately, though, I think Trevor's stubbornness is going to win out, and he'll get her onboard with this. I have a few thoughts about how this might come about (which I won't mention in case I happen to be right), but the big thing is that Trevor is going to let her know that he's fighting so that he can feel like he's worth something for a change. I think, surprisingly, this is going to resonate with Donnica, who thinks all tinies are worthless (except Trevor). I think, in the end, she's going to respect that, especially if the proper sequence of events happens to help him drive that point home. She doesn't want him to feel that way, and she doesn't think he's worthless like she does everyone else.

I also thought it was really revealing that Donnica noted in the narrative that she placed Trevor above her friends (although they don't really seem like close friends anymore, do they?). We saw this before, when Donnica remembered putting Anabel in her place for daring to take shit about Trevor. Honestly, I don't think Donnica just thinks she's better than tinies. I think that she thinks that she's better than everyone, and that manifests itself more clearly with tinies because it's easier to fuck with them. Also, Trevor gave her that goddess-level confidence way back in chapter two, so I think that plays a role in why she more openly thinks that way about tinies than other normal-sized people. But, to me, she clearly does feel the same way about her "peers."

Which is why I think, based on the way Donnica stared down Victoria after she "saved" Trevor (Donnica obviously knew something more was going on there), that at least Victoria is going to be way worse off at the end of this trip than she is right now. Maybe the same could go for Olivia and Katherine as well, depending on if they get a little bold with Trevor. There's more than one way to ruin someone's life than squishing them. That's all I'm saying.

Amber and Rebecca keep getting more and more interesting as this story progresses.

First and foremost, anytime you hear somebody, real or fictional, say something like, "You're not better than me," that's about as clear a sign that the person saying it thinks the person they're talking to is better than them as you could possibly get. And it was clear to me throughout this chapter that Amber does think Rebecca is better than her, and she hates it. She thinks so highly of Rebecca that every hateful word the tiny speaks to her cuts into her soul, even if she'll never let Rebecca know it.

To me, that's the reason why Amber resorts to such cruel punishments. It's not about putting an ignorant tiny her place, no matter how many times she says it is. It's about lashing out against how hurtful Rebecca is to her. That and, in the case of the drawer punishment, Amber not understanding how deadly that could have been (in her first segment, Amber downplayed how bad the heat was, calling Rebecca's complaint about it "nonsense). Again, Rebecca wields enormous power over Amber, and she doesn't even know it.

As for why Rebecca is being so hurtful, I think that, deep down, Rebecca really does care about Amber, and all this slave treatment stings that much more as a result. So Amber gets the only weapon Rebecca has to fight back and make Amber feel some of the pain that Rebecca is feeling: Rebecca's words. Those words are the only thing that allows Rebecca to have any degree of control in her new world at all, even if that control is limited to Amber's emotions. Still, I don't think she realizes just how personal Amber takes her words, because I think she wouldn't attack her quite so viciously if she knew how much emotional pain things like her body shaming tactic put Amber through. She just knows that it upsets Amber, and she likes being able to fight back somehow.

So, ironically enough, I feel like if Amber had it in her to show a little weakness in front of Rebecca, the insults would probably stop and things would be better for the both of them. I don't see Amber doing that, though.

So why do I think that Rebecca really has feelings for Amber? That sex scene. Any doubt I had about that went away after that scene. Rebecca can tell herself that she has to do this all she wants, pretending that Amber will make her answer The Question and worship her pussy, but that's clearly not true. When she told Amber that she was never going to escape these trips and that her life would never amount to more than this, Rebecca stayed calm, no matter how pissed Amber got. There was no fear there. No concern for what would happen. Rebecca seemed damn near tranquil when faced with an angry giant struggling to keep her rage in check.

But put Rebecca in front of a giant vagina and now she's afraid of pissing Amber off? I'm not buying it. Rebecca is telling herself what she needs to in order to justify to herself why she's doing this. The truth is that she wants to pleasure Amber. No matter how many times Amber makes her do this, there's no way she'd let herself get so good at it if she didn't like it on some level. She knew just where to lick and how to bite, as well as the time to abandon clit and go deeper inside, where she also knew just what to do. These are the actions of a willing tiny. There's no doubt in my mind.

That's why Rebecca becomes overwhelmed by the sight and scent of Amber's pussy, why she subjects herself to saying what Amber wants to hear, that she's the slave and that Amber is the master. It's what she has to say to get what she wants. Amber was right all those times she told Rebecca that Rebecca loves it. And Amber exerts a degree of control with the carrot that she can never get out of the stick. But Amber let's her anger get the better of her and punishes Rebecca for her defiance (which I think at least a part of Amber respects). It wasn't until that anger melted away that Amber decided to fuck Rebecca, which gave her exactly what she wanted: someone who is better than her calling her master.

Also, Amber clearly loves Rebecca in there because she cares for Rebecca, even if her fucked up worldview makes it hard for either Rebecca or us to realize it. But I think that's why Amber put Rebecca on her stomach to sleep with her in what was a really tender moment amid all that emotional turmoil preceding it.

Oh, and I love that Amber hates all the other stuck up kids too. That little interaction with Naomi at Amber's door was interesting. As was that last segment with Naomi. At first glance, that seems like this scene was put in just for a bit of crush action, but if you're going to do with Naomi what I think you're going to do, then I think this segment might be a nice bit of foreshadowing as far as the main plot is concerned.

So yeah, once again I really enjoyed this chapter, and I was happy to see it come early even, even if I didn't get around to reading it for a bit. Excellent work as always, and I'm eager to see what our girls' and Trevor's time on Azurea Isle has in store for them in the chapter(s) ahead.

Author's Response:

Hey you! 

NGL I definitely refresh my review page an extra few times a day looking for your post ;)

Glad to see you jump in again, as usual most of your analysis are on or near the mark. 

I'm finding it hard to comment on any one specific point because you're going hard into the plot/characters and I don't want to give anything away. So please forgive me for this short response. 

I will say I do try to make all scenes meaningful, whether to push the plot or establish character motivations/insights, and you're definitely picking up on that. 

I am currently facing a bit of a conundrum, you see I have all the Azurea Isle chapters done and I want to release them twice every week for the next few weeks, but I'm not sure if I'll have time to edit my stuff that comes after that, and then there will be a lull in the releases come late Januray. So I'm more inclined to make a single release every week but I realllllyyy want you guys to read this storyline so I want to release twice a week lol

Oh well if I post tomorrow you'll know what I decided :D

Thanks as always man, I really look forward to these write-ups of yours, I got in late last night and read through this one like 5 times in bed. They mean a lot to me and I thank you dearly for them :)

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2024 7:58 PM Title: PART 1

The reason I asked how they got tiny was because I was wondering if they were ever full-sized. Given that they were, I am pretty surprised they never reminisce about how if they were full sized they wouldn't have had to endure whatever it is they are being subjected to.

Also, I am surprised that the giantesses really no longer think of them as people at all given that they used to be people. Or maybe they do in a way because they picture themselves as goddesses.

Anyway, yeah, given that Donnica is a lawyer, I am just really surprised that she doesn't want to serve the law, and wants to use it to get her way. To make things even worse for these victims who used to be full sized people. Especially since she has a tiny person that she loves, and vice-verse. It shows how she has managed to humanize one of the tiny people in a way that I am pretty surprised doesn't bleed over to other tiny people. 

Just some random thoughts that are occurring to me. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, but these sorts of things just have me wondering.

Author's Response:

With respect to Donnica I feel her relationship with Trevor and her domineering attitude towards tiny people serve to generate a central conflict in the story. She basically thinks as a group they are beneath her in every way yet trevor is a man she loves more than any other she has ever been with. Its a contradiction within her character and one that has propelled the plot forward. I think it works because humans are generally walking contradictions, and also the story would be boring if she didnt feel any internal conflict lol

I would say you're close to the point that these woman basically think they are goddesses. Although these goddesses are prone to very human emotions ;)

No need to excuse yourself for bringing these points up. The fact that your this interested in the story to think on these things is very flattering to me. And to be honest you're right, I havent really touched on Trevor or Rebeccas past as normal sized people. In my writers mind they've only been small for a few years, so maybe i should be throwing some references to that :)

Happy new years man! 

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2024 12:58 AM Title: PART 13

So happy to have a chapter now. this one is really good. I love the Rebecca Amber relations more and more its so nice to see Rebecca fight back even if she know she is powerless .Just the crush part at the end is not what i enjoy  enjoy most. Other than that it's perfect as usual. 

Author's Response:

Hey thanks for the comment as always :)

yeah Rebecca certainly isn't shy about speaking her mind that's for sure lol

Sad to hear you are not enjoying the crush parts as much as the others, there is more to come in the next few chapters. They are at Azurea Isle where there are no laws protecting tiny people, after all.  ¯_(ツ)_/¯

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2024 8:49 PM Title: PART 12

Well sorry you are taking a long break, but hey RL stuff is important. I must say this is one of the stories I always look forward to with great anticipation. I have loved every chapter and find the developing relationships to be what drives my interest. Keep up the great writing! As a writer myself I know it can be difficult to keep coming up with new ways to do the things you've already done. So I appreciate that you are letting the relationships develop and hopefully that will influence the sex as well going forward, making it something new.

Personally I am not an ass person, but you make those scenes seem almost tolerable to me, and luckily you put in a lot of other scenes too. Although I would like to see a lot more detail in your pussy scenes too, as you do for the ass scenes.

I think it would be interesting to see the foot scenes develop into a bit more too, for example maybe Trevor starts to make love to the toes of Donnica as he seems to really love her, but doesn't treat Amber the same way.

I think there is a lot of room for experimentation going forward.

Have a great break, and hope to see more of this story in the New Year!

Author's Response:

Hey it's only like a 2 week break so I wont be gone long ;)

Glad to hear you are enjoying the story.

You know whats weird about the ass stuff? i actually only got into ass stuff within the last few years which I find kind find of strange because I never thought my sexual preferences would change, yet here I am lol I do try to keep the scenes 'clean' as it were, in that I do not like excrement or anything like that so you'll never see me reference it. There is something completely dominating, degrading and humiliating that draws me to the ass tho. 

I appreciate the insight, I always wondered if my story would detract people from reading it because it does go into a bunch of kinks... like its not just feet, or pussy or ass. So i guess it's nice to hear that people who are not into one or the others are still reading it :)

You will definitely be seeing more of this in the new year, I actually already spent a bunch of the weekend writing so I would say early January. See you then!

Reviewer: It Was Me Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2024 8:10 AM Title: PART 12

You weren't lying about that very, very, VERY soon stuff! Damn did all that anticipation from Donnica threatening to crush all her former co-workers pay off in a big way here!

But the Amber/Rebecca stuff stuck out to me even more. Mostly, I was surprised to see how much power Rebecca has over Amber.

That may sound weird, given all the cleaning and licking of Amber's feet Rebecca did at the start of the chapter, but it's pretty clear that Rebecca's words hit Amber at least as hard as Amber's humiliating demands do Rebecca.

We saw this at the start of the chapter, when Rebecca tells Amber that she sucks at soccer. Amber predictably gets pissed, thinks of Rebecca as an annoying worm, and revels in putting the tiny in her place. But Rebecca's words linger in Amber's head, and Amber has to know what Rebecca meant, so she asked. A goddess wouldn't care about a critique from a bug, would she? Not only does Amber care about Rebecca's opinion on this, but she gets pissed when Rebecca keeps licking her feet (like she told Rebecca to do in the first place) and can't keep her frustration contained. She even called Rebecca by name when yelling at her!

This trend continues as the scene progresses, with Amber acting less like Rebecca's owner and more like a stubborn teen reluctantly trying to get more advice while protecting her pride, defending her style of play at first and hinting at other things she wanted Rebecca's opinion on without asking outright. Amber's mood keeps softening throughout the conversation, seeming happy and even playfully teasing Rebecca in a way I think she thought Rebecca would enjoy (more on that in a minute).

Then, Rebecca, not in the mood for any of that shit, ruins Amber's happiness with a simple insult about Amber being at the bottom of the depth chart, and Amber, in her anger, once again uses Rebecca's name. Not worm. Not bug. Rebecca. And for the rest of the segment, Amber's joy at the thought of dominating Rebecca and showing her who's in charge was hampered by the urge to immediately put Rebecca's advice to practice. Amber was inspired by Rebecca's coaching.

Finally, at the end of the segment, we find out that Rebecca is always getting into Amber's head and under her skin. Rebecca's words now have a profound impact, have power even, over Amber, even if neither of the girls fully understand this.

And then in the back end of the chapter, we see how defensive Amber gets when others are fucking with Rebecca, even when they don't know they're doing it. That was significant to me not only because of how protective and possessive she was of Rebecca but also because of how harsh she was with her teammates. Maybe some of the way Amber has treated Trevor and Rebecca is more of a personality trait, a reflection of a deeper issue in her life, or even possibly a mental health condition. I just thought that Amber addressing them with the same degree of anger and harshness that she has the tinies up until now stood out here.

But the sweetest thing about this chapter by far was how much seeing Rebecca's pride in her meant to Rebecca. First, we found out that part of Amber's rage at her full-sized teammates was because they "ruined her moment." In other words, telling Rebecca and seeing the tiny's reaction was more important to Amber than getting along with her (I'll say it again) normal-sized teammates. Hell, Amber didn't even tell them that she was starting when they tried to insult her by asking if she had been cut, choosing to just tell them she was playing rather than rubbing the fact that she was starting in their faces. She wanted to save that news for Rebecca.

Which leads to a larger point. Amber didn't care about her teammates hearing her good news. She didn't even think to call her mother, who clearly would have wanted to know, based on that phone conversation at the start of the chapter. No, the only person she wants to share this moment with is Rebecca. Amber wanted to make the tiny proud. And when she did, it was such a heartwarming moment, especially with Rebecca trying so hard to not feel that way but failing.

Oh, and there's also a very noticeable change in Amber's language in this chapter. She no longer refers to Rebecca as a pussy slave, but she talked a whole lot about fucking the tiny. Before, it was about Rebecca eating her ass then, after Trevor's negotiation, her pussy. Now, putting Rebecca inside her is sex to Amber. I doubt the big even noticed the change in her own perception here, but I think it says a lot about what Amber really thinks of Rebecca, regardless of how she treats the tiny.

Rebecca is a bit harder to get a read on, though. Amber and Rebecca herself both ask why Rebecca is helping Amber with the soccer advice. I don't think Rebecca believes her "I'm probably just bored" excuse. Amber, on the other hand, thinks it's because Rebecca secretly loves the way Amber treats her, and I'm starting to wonder if the teen might be on to something.

Of course, we saw Rebecca's resolve start to crack when Amber kept insisting that the tiny "fucking loves it" when Amber treats her like shit and makes her worship the spoiled giantess. But this exchange made me go back to that first segment and think more about Rebecca's "act of defiance" when she kept licking Amber's toe. That's how Amber saw it, at least. We never really saw Rebecca's thought on it. Was she trying to use Amber's words against her in a mild act of protest, or was she too into her new task to properly make out Amber's new demand? I honestly can't tell.

Rebecca had already started to accept going up Rebecca's assault few chapters earlier, writing it off by thinking that "even the worst situations normalize after enough time." But is that what was happening the and, more importantly, is it what's happening now?

I think the fact that she still seemed legitimately grossed out inside Amber's cleat would suggest otherwise. And ghe fact that the other girls' feet made things so much worse for her seems to confirm that she's not just adapting to the shit treatment or terrible smells. There's not enough evidence to know for sure yet (or at least i didn't see enough), but I think it's all about who is doing this to her, as opposed to the natural submissiveness Amber thinks all tinies possess. I think a part of her really does like Amber. That's why she helped her. That's why the "slave" stuff doesn't terrify her anymore (more on that in a second). That's why she was proud of Amber's accomplishment.

I also noticed that while Rebecca's actual resistance to Amber doesn't amount to much anymore, the tiny has no problem speaking her mind and upseting Amber. Not once did Rebecca beg Amber for mercy like before in this chapter. But Rebecca also didn't basically ask for death like she did before, either. She talks shit to Amber without fear of the consequences. She knows she's not getting crushed now, sure, but I think there's more to this than that. I'd say Rebecca likes getting under Amber's skin, but we didn't really see that from her, either.

So I think this comes down to two things:

1. Part of Rebecca enjoys the banter

2. On some level, Rebecca actually trusts Amber, so it doesn't matter what she says.

Those are my best guesses, anyway. It'll be really interesting to see how these two continue to develop, but I really, really like where this seems to be going.

But back to Donnica, that scene with the tiny restaurant was phenomenal. Like I said above somewhere (there's a lot of words up there!), you did a great job of building anticipation for this moment. Everytime she threatened to crush one of her former co-workers if they didn't obey her, if they screwed up, or if she simply decided to, I was waiting for her to actually follow through. Not that how she actually treated them wasn't satisfying, too, but each time she showed mercy and kept them as slaves instead left me wondering if the next time was the time she'd crush a tiny.

So to see her get her revenge by squishing so many tinies all at once (and the restaurant!) was so great! The way each lethal step felt unique, with different expressions on her face or timing with her steps, was masterfully done. And I loved Annabel's reaction to it all! That tease at the end with Annabel searching to rubble for survivors, hinting that she found some to crush, was the perfect way to end the segment.

Donnica's feelings for Trevor continue to be intriguing. The way she both loves and hates the way Trevor talks to her is awesome! She hates that he makes her not feel like a goddess when he talks to her like a girlfriend, but she loves that he's untamed, that he, again, sees the real her. Not a symbol of power or a source of fear. He sees her, and he chooses her, despite keeping his own will, something that she finds delightfully maddening.

But even if she wasn't into him treating her like that, she still wouldn't take control of him like she does everyone else, regardless of size. She loves and respects him too much to do that. As she herself pointed out, he gave her everything. She didn't take it from him or trick him into giving these things up. He did it willingly, knowing exactly who he was giving everything to. That's something she's clearly never had before, and despite thinking she deserves the world, this is the one thing she seems to value above all else.

And Trevor is hilarious in how he deals with her here. He knowingly teases and jokes with her, pushing her buttons for fun and even making her wait. I love how comfortable he is with her while the rest of those in her life are constantly on edge.

That cute couple talk near the end was so endearing, and I really enjoy seeing this side of Donnica, especially after seeing so much of the side she shows the world. And her "threatening" him by saying he'd be banned from her ass for a week if he didn't get in there right now was so perfect! She'd never make him do something against his will, but that doesn't mean she can't find other ways to get him to do what she wants. This fit so well with "whiney Donnica," too.

Lastly, going all the way back to the start of the chapter, the disconnect between Amber and Donnica was kind of sad. Donnica wants everything in her world to be perfect, and that placed so much pressure on Amber that she no longer had fun playing soccer. The saddest part is that I don't think this is intentional on Donnica's part. She just wants the best fir her daughter but doesn't know how to communicate that, so it comes off as blaming and pressuring Amber. I think that's why Donnica's tone softened at the end of the conversation. By the way, I love that we didn't get to hear Donnica's side of it, leaving it open to interpretation.

But yeah, I'm really starting to think that this story might be leading up to some kind of confrontation between Donnica and Amber but not over Trevor, as the early chapters led us to think. I'm so curious to see how this relationship continues to take shape.

Anyway, that's enough out of me. Excellent work once again, and enjoy your holiday!

Author's Response:

dudeeeeeee

some of you analysis is SPOT ON, I dont want to point out which ones because I dont want to spoil anything but you're pretty perceptive lol

I love that you noticed Ambers shift when she starts calling Rebecca by name... thats one of those little things you write but you're not sure if people will pick up on and its so small you cant draw attention to it. To see you acknowledge it in one of the first paragraphs you wrote actually made me drop my phone and be like "yesssss"

another one is, and this was even more subtle, was the shift in the sex talk from Amber toward Rebecca, again I love seeing you point that out. It would have been strange to write something like "and now Amber started to view her differently, more like a sex partner than a slave" so you just pop more subtle stuff in there and hope people notice... which they apparently did :)

Loving the feedback on how the last segment ended, with Rebecca talking to Amber on making the team. I actually had a hard time sticking that and ended up rewriting it 3 times. judging by your review and others I think I went with the right choice, although I cant get into the reasons why I picked it over the others without spoiling the story. 

I'm actually loving all the Amber/Rebecca talk from this review and all the others, most of the early reviews seemed to favor Donnica/Trevor and honestly I thought Donnica's scenes in this chapter would dominate the comment section (who doesnt love crush!?) but I think people are really getting invested in the 2 women, and thats awesome because I love writing that relationship. 

You wrote a lot about it, and again I cant comment on much of it out of fear of spoilers, but those 2 are like a couple of hurricanes merging into one another, their worlds and the larger world around them being thrust into chaos. 

and yesssss Donnica finally brought the foot down. Actually, without getting into too much detail, there a bit more crushing coming in the chapters I'll be releasing in the new year, so look out for that ;)

Love that you pointed out Annabel, that character is sick, I should probably do something with her...

Man thanks so much for this review, they're so introspective that they actually give me pause for thought on the characters and plotting. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story so much it compels you to write these things. They're the longest reviews I get but I probably read them the most lol

Hope you have a good holiday yourself, I look forward to seeing your thoughts on where the story goes.

-WorshipFromBelow