You weren't lying about that very, very, VERY soon stuff! Damn did all that anticipation from Donnica threatening to crush all her former co-workers pay off in a big way here!

But the Amber/Rebecca stuff stuck out to me even more. Mostly, I was surprised to see how much power Rebecca has over Amber.

That may sound weird, given all the cleaning and licking of Amber's feet Rebecca did at the start of the chapter, but it's pretty clear that Rebecca's words hit Amber at least as hard as Amber's humiliating demands do Rebecca.

We saw this at the start of the chapter, when Rebecca tells Amber that she sucks at soccer. Amber predictably gets pissed, thinks of Rebecca as an annoying worm, and revels in putting the tiny in her place. But Rebecca's words linger in Amber's head, and Amber has to know what Rebecca meant, so she asked. A goddess wouldn't care about a critique from a bug, would she? Not only does Amber care about Rebecca's opinion on this, but she gets pissed when Rebecca keeps licking her feet (like she told Rebecca to do in the first place) and can't keep her frustration contained. She even called Rebecca by name when yelling at her!

This trend continues as the scene progresses, with Amber acting less like Rebecca's owner and more like a stubborn teen reluctantly trying to get more advice while protecting her pride, defending her style of play at first and hinting at other things she wanted Rebecca's opinion on without asking outright. Amber's mood keeps softening throughout the conversation, seeming happy and even playfully teasing Rebecca in a way I think she thought Rebecca would enjoy (more on that in a minute).

Then, Rebecca, not in the mood for any of that shit, ruins Amber's happiness with a simple insult about Amber being at the bottom of the depth chart, and Amber, in her anger, once again uses Rebecca's name. Not worm. Not bug. Rebecca. And for the rest of the segment, Amber's joy at the thought of dominating Rebecca and showing her who's in charge was hampered by the urge to immediately put Rebecca's advice to practice. Amber was inspired by Rebecca's coaching.

Finally, at the end of the segment, we find out that Rebecca is always getting into Amber's head and under her skin. Rebecca's words now have a profound impact, have power even, over Amber, even if neither of the girls fully understand this.

And then in the back end of the chapter, we see how defensive Amber gets when others are fucking with Rebecca, even when they don't know they're doing it. That was significant to me not only because of how protective and possessive she was of Rebecca but also because of how harsh she was with her teammates. Maybe some of the way Amber has treated Trevor and Rebecca is more of a personality trait, a reflection of a deeper issue in her life, or even possibly a mental health condition. I just thought that Amber addressing them with the same degree of anger and harshness that she has the tinies up until now stood out here.

But the sweetest thing about this chapter by far was how much seeing Rebecca's pride in her meant to Rebecca. First, we found out that part of Amber's rage at her full-sized teammates was because they "ruined her moment." In other words, telling Rebecca and seeing the tiny's reaction was more important to Amber than getting along with her (I'll say it again) normal-sized teammates. Hell, Amber didn't even tell them that she was starting when they tried to insult her by asking if she had been cut, choosing to just tell them she was playing rather than rubbing the fact that she was starting in their faces. She wanted to save that news for Rebecca.

Which leads to a larger point. Amber didn't care about her teammates hearing her good news. She didn't even think to call her mother, who clearly would have wanted to know, based on that phone conversation at the start of the chapter. No, the only person she wants to share this moment with is Rebecca. Amber wanted to make the tiny proud. And when she did, it was such a heartwarming moment, especially with Rebecca trying so hard to not feel that way but failing.

Oh, and there's also a very noticeable change in Amber's language in this chapter. She no longer refers to Rebecca as a pussy slave, but she talked a whole lot about fucking the tiny. Before, it was about Rebecca eating her ass then, after Trevor's negotiation, her pussy. Now, putting Rebecca inside her is sex to Amber. I doubt the big even noticed the change in her own perception here, but I think it says a lot about what Amber really thinks of Rebecca, regardless of how she treats the tiny.

Rebecca is a bit harder to get a read on, though. Amber and Rebecca herself both ask why Rebecca is helping Amber with the soccer advice. I don't think Rebecca believes her "I'm probably just bored" excuse. Amber, on the other hand, thinks it's because Rebecca secretly loves the way Amber treats her, and I'm starting to wonder if the teen might be on to something.

Of course, we saw Rebecca's resolve start to crack when Amber kept insisting that the tiny "fucking loves it" when Amber treats her like shit and makes her worship the spoiled giantess. But this exchange made me go back to that first segment and think more about Rebecca's "act of defiance" when she kept licking Amber's toe. That's how Amber saw it, at least. We never really saw Rebecca's thought on it. Was she trying to use Amber's words against her in a mild act of protest, or was she too into her new task to properly make out Amber's new demand? I honestly can't tell.

Rebecca had already started to accept going up Rebecca's assault few chapters earlier, writing it off by thinking that "even the worst situations normalize after enough time." But is that what was happening the and, more importantly, is it what's happening now?

I think the fact that she still seemed legitimately grossed out inside Amber's cleat would suggest otherwise. And ghe fact that the other girls' feet made things so much worse for her seems to confirm that she's not just adapting to the shit treatment or terrible smells. There's not enough evidence to know for sure yet (or at least i didn't see enough), but I think it's all about who is doing this to her, as opposed to the natural submissiveness Amber thinks all tinies possess. I think a part of her really does like Amber. That's why she helped her. That's why the "slave" stuff doesn't terrify her anymore (more on that in a second). That's why she was proud of Amber's accomplishment.

I also noticed that while Rebecca's actual resistance to Amber doesn't amount to much anymore, the tiny has no problem speaking her mind and upseting Amber. Not once did Rebecca beg Amber for mercy like before in this chapter. But Rebecca also didn't basically ask for death like she did before, either. She talks shit to Amber without fear of the consequences. She knows she's not getting crushed now, sure, but I think there's more to this than that. I'd say Rebecca likes getting under Amber's skin, but we didn't really see that from her, either.

So I think this comes down to two things:

1. Part of Rebecca enjoys the banter

2. On some level, Rebecca actually trusts Amber, so it doesn't matter what she says.

Those are my best guesses, anyway. It'll be really interesting to see how these two continue to develop, but I really, really like where this seems to be going.

But back to Donnica, that scene with the tiny restaurant was phenomenal. Like I said above somewhere (there's a lot of words up there!), you did a great job of building anticipation for this moment. Everytime she threatened to crush one of her former co-workers if they didn't obey her, if they screwed up, or if she simply decided to, I was waiting for her to actually follow through. Not that how she actually treated them wasn't satisfying, too, but each time she showed mercy and kept them as slaves instead left me wondering if the next time was the time she'd crush a tiny.

So to see her get her revenge by squishing so many tinies all at once (and the restaurant!) was so great! The way each lethal step felt unique, with different expressions on her face or timing with her steps, was masterfully done. And I loved Annabel's reaction to it all! That tease at the end with Annabel searching to rubble for survivors, hinting that she found some to crush, was the perfect way to end the segment.

Donnica's feelings for Trevor continue to be intriguing. The way she both loves and hates the way Trevor talks to her is awesome! She hates that he makes her not feel like a goddess when he talks to her like a girlfriend, but she loves that he's untamed, that he, again, sees the real her. Not a symbol of power or a source of fear. He sees her, and he chooses her, despite keeping his own will, something that she finds delightfully maddening.

But even if she wasn't into him treating her like that, she still wouldn't take control of him like she does everyone else, regardless of size. She loves and respects him too much to do that. As she herself pointed out, he gave her everything. She didn't take it from him or trick him into giving these things up. He did it willingly, knowing exactly who he was giving everything to. That's something she's clearly never had before, and despite thinking she deserves the world, this is the one thing she seems to value above all else.

And Trevor is hilarious in how he deals with her here. He knowingly teases and jokes with her, pushing her buttons for fun and even making her wait. I love how comfortable he is with her while the rest of those in her life are constantly on edge.

That cute couple talk near the end was so endearing, and I really enjoy seeing this side of Donnica, especially after seeing so much of the side she shows the world. And her "threatening" him by saying he'd be banned from her ass for a week if he didn't get in there right now was so perfect! She'd never make him do something against his will, but that doesn't mean she can't find other ways to get him to do what she wants. This fit so well with "whiney Donnica," too.

Lastly, going all the way back to the start of the chapter, the disconnect between Amber and Donnica was kind of sad. Donnica wants everything in her world to be perfect, and that placed so much pressure on Amber that she no longer had fun playing soccer. The saddest part is that I don't think this is intentional on Donnica's part. She just wants the best fir her daughter but doesn't know how to communicate that, so it comes off as blaming and pressuring Amber. I think that's why Donnica's tone softened at the end of the conversation. By the way, I love that we didn't get to hear Donnica's side of it, leaving it open to interpretation.

But yeah, I'm really starting to think that this story might be leading up to some kind of confrontation between Donnica and Amber but not over Trevor, as the early chapters led us to think. I'm so curious to see how this relationship continues to take shape.

Anyway, that's enough out of me. Excellent work once again, and enjoy your holiday!

enjoy your holidays - deserve the break after cranking out chapters of this. loved this chapter as always, especially Donnica realizing how much she treasures her little butt boy

So first off enjoy your break.

     So I am in a quandary about this story. I love Amber and Rebecca,. and their relationship or lack there of. I like seeing Rebecca used by Amber,. i also love seeing Rebecca actually give helpful advice to Amber and give shit back to her. I love that jessica stands up to her as best she can.. I want them to come to some kind of real equilibrium. I want Rebecca to come to enjoy her life with Amber. Amber needs to learn to love and nto just possesses Jessica. 

     This isnt against you as a writer, but I dont usually care about guys in stories like these. I dont care for Trevor. That is a guy who is so far up a giantesses ass( to be fair I cant blame him) that he cant see the anything else but her shit. 

     As for the way the story goes that is your call. But the way I see it, A giantess needs a tiny, and a tiny needs a giantess. So I hope Jessica can come to some kind of life with Amber eventualy, one where one isnt dead, but some  kind of mutual respect/

I've been enjoying this story for a while, and I'm really loving the more emotional developments in these later chapters! At first I thought this was going to be a pretty straightforward story, but Donnica and Amber are evolving into quite complex characters and as such, the story is now becoming much harder to predict, which is pretty awesome!

But first, I have to say that I love the way you convey the difference of scale between the giants and tinies. You really hone in on minor details, such as the shockwaves and vibrations from footsteps at ground level for tinies and how powerful a giant's voice is to a tiny, for example.

You also really hit a place in terms of character mentalities that keeps drawing me back to this story, almost hypnotically so. For instance, the way Donnica walked as she went to dethrone the other head of the firm, imagining how powerful she must look to any tinies below who happened to be standing nearby (with the implication that she couldn't be bothered to look down and see if they were there) and how enthralled Rebecca was the first time she saw Donnica, falling into that trap of viewing a giant as something divine, were both extremely powerful passages. A lot of the language used throughout this story emphasizes these mentalities, and this has built up gradually since the very first chapter. Well done!

But what compelled me to write this review are the ways that Donnica and Amber were portrayed in this chapter (particularly in the back end) and how previous chapters have built to our girls' big moments here.

I'll start with Amber. Holy shit did I, despite everything she's done, feel so terrible for her by the end of the chapter. I've mostly thought of her as a simplistic bratty character throughout most of the story, but the last two chapters have shown her to be anything but simplistic (yeah, bratty still fits, thankfully!). I was a little surprised last chapter when she actually negotiated with Trevor. He stood up to her and called her bluff, and she surprisingly seemed to respect that. It was an eye-opening moment for me. Granted, I was sure part of this was her being afraid that Donnica wouldn't believe the doctored photo against Trevor's word, but honestly, after reading this chapter, I'm not even sure she was ever going to follow through with that threat. I now think it was seeing how serious Trevor was that got through to her in that moment, and she compromised with him as a result.

It was sad to see her freaking out when she realized how serious her legal troubles were. She really didn't comprehend how big a deal fucking with tinies like that is on the larger legal stage, and she was terrified not only that she would go to jail but that she may have fucked things up for her mom as well (which shows that her teasing that she didn't care that killing Trevor would get her mom in trouble, as she claimed back when she first started fucking with him). I think it says a lot that, despite Donnica feeling rage toward the tinies for this (more on that in a minute), Amber never once took out her feelings on either Trevor or Rebecca during the time her future was in doubt.

Then we have an elated Amber coming home after being cleared, looking to reward Trevor for saving her, almost assuredly by showing him up her ass. And I'm now convinced that, in her mind, that was exactly what that would have been for him, a reward. After seeing the emotional, frightening scene that started as soon as she saw that Rebecca had left her room, it's obvious that two things are true when it comes to Amber's views on tinies:

1. She tells herself that they're just bugs to justify what she does to them, but she clearly doesn't really believe this.

2. She had convinced herself that, deep down, all tinies loved the way she treated Trevor and Rebecca.

In short, I went from thinking that Amber was evil to realizing that she's just delusional, at least to a certain extent. The two points above were tools she used to keep herself from feeling any guilt from raping and otherwise fucking with the two tinies in the house. Because she would feel guilty. Part of her realizes that tinies are actually people just like her, only smaller. And that makes a lot of sense when you think about it: We already know from Donnica's anecdote earlier in the story that Amber is afraid of real bugs and certainly wouldn't enjoy playing with them. She loves that she can fuck with real people, especially ones older than herself, but she's not really as terrible a person as we first thought, so she would feel like shit if she allowed herself to accept the truth.

So she lies to herself, tells herself that their basically just bugs, not people like her, despite the fact that, if this were true, the appeal of what she did to them would be lost. It's a lot of mental gymnastics to go through, but, for her, the end result was worth it.

Then there's the other way she eased her conscience. She caught a glimpse of how much Trevor enjoyed being at her mother's feet. So she convinced herself that tinies secretly love being dominated. No matter how much they beg and plead, they actually want her to do what she's doing to them. And in her defense, she's not entirely wrong when it comes to Trevor specifically. So everybody wins, right?

Except that Rebecca's outburst shatters that narrative. Not only does Rebecca's hatred show that she wasn't secretly enjoying being Amber's pussy slave or the time spent up the giant's ass (which, from the negotiation with Trevor, she probably realized already), but Rebecca's constant insults and lack of fear at the prospect of being crushed is even more devastating. Rebecca would quite literally rather die than continue to go through with Amber's fun. There's no way to uphold the illusion that Rebecca actually wanted any of this at that point, which is what makes the tiny's words so powerful to Amber.

How do I know any of this is true? Because Rebecca isn't a stain somewhere. Amber threatened it multiple times, even mad movements to suggest she was actually going to do it. But she never did. Because she knows that would be murder, and I don't think she's a killer. She was only trying to scare Rebecca back into a state of mind that allow Amber to keep lying to herself. Rebecca told her to fuck off instead, and that's why the chapter ended with Rebecca unhurt and Amber crying into her pillow.

This is a really exciting development for me. I think/hope this might be the start of Amber turning things around, maybe even going on a redemption arc (one of my favorite things). It's certainly not assured that things will go in this direction for her, but the door is open if she wants to walk through, so I'm suddenly extremely interested to see where she goes from here.

Will she realize how fucked up the things she's done really are? Will Rebecca forgive her? Can Rebecca forgive her? If Rebecca can't, will she continue to push Amber, and, if so, will this cause Amber to snap? Am I wrong about all this and my rant above is just the raving of an idiot? These are fun questions to ask!

Then there's Donnica. I love the conflict at the center of her character throughout this story so far. She loves Trevor; he's special to her. But he's also a tiny, a group of people that she's sure is beneath her. Seeing her try to rectify this inherent contradiction throughout the story has been so much fun.

When she was away from Trevor early on, she still thought of him as a slave. A special slave, but still a slave, like any other tiny should be, in her eyes. But that wasn't quite what she thought when she was around him. Her love for him was more present within her in those moments, and she had a harder time thinking of him in those terms.

A perfect example of this is when Trevor was short with her and she punished him by shoving him up her ass (I'm noticing a theme here!). As soon as she had done this, unlike with other tinies who had to suffer this punishment, she immediately felt regret, to the point that this powerful, ruthless woman found herself in tears. While this was a satisfying act of dominance with every other tiny, she hated doing it to him.

And he showed her exactly why she loves him in that very scene. Hearing her cry, even while inside her ass, Trevor feels guilt and sympathy for her, trying to make her happy by licking her asshole. When she pulls him out in response, he apologizes, not out of fear or self-preservation, but because he hated that he made her feel that way. This is the reason that Donnica feels the way she feels about him: He's seen her at her worst and not only accepted her, but embraced her in those times.

There was Donnica's "awakening" when she finally gave in to those darker impulses and treated him like a slave for the first time. He loved it and made her feel loved as he followed her orders, giving her the confidence to take over her firm and try to change society as a whole.

Then there were Donnica's actions when her anger at tinies in general over Amber's legal troubles boiled over. She mocked Trevor, threatened him, kicked him out, and, in the spur of the moment, even considered actually stomping him (I'm convinced that she would have never forgiven herself once she calmed down) as he was leaving. Yet he still stayed, wanting to say goodbye and help her one last time before leaving, despite all that shit from the night before.

I loved the way she was portrayed at the start of that scene, both angry and relieved to see him, feeling like she had to follow through on her threat but struggling to find the will to actually do so. Her need to be a goddess to him and her actual feelings about him were in direct contradiction here. This was really important, I think, as it showed how much she cared about him even before he saved the day. This made her feelings after seeing the video feel more legitimate and less motivated by some temporary happiness and guilt. She's loved him this whole time because he understands who she is and accepts all of her, something no one else has ever done, if I'm reading between the lines correctly.

So all of this made the back end of that scene so much more satisfying. Donnica finally accepting that Trevor was her equal (something I think she quietly felt but suppressed until this moment) felt so good to read. He saved her family and gave her everything, not even being upset about the way she treated him in her anger the night before. He dismissed her guilt and apologies, saying he'd do anything for her and that he only wanted to help. Given her thoughts on every other partner she's ever had, this seems like the first time she's experienced real partnership in a relationship. So she could no longer put herself above him, no matter how small he was, instead looking to offer something to him as well in the way she held him so protectively.

I love the theme here, too. Donnica is a powerful, independent woman, but Trevor is her rock. He's the one that gives her the strength to become better, not the thing holding her back. Having someone like that in your life makes you stronger, not weaker. This is great stuff!

Of course, unlike Amber, I saw nothing here that would extrapolate her feelings for Trevor or the lessons learned from all this that could be extended to the rest of the tiny population. And despite how happy she is that Trevor saved her daughter, maybe even saved her, that anger she felt toward the other tinies surely hasn't diminished in the slightest. In fact, rather than taking the day to celebrate Amber's name being cleared, she dropped her daughter off at the house and went right back to the office. I can only imagine this decision was driven by revenge.

Before, Donnica's goal was to subjugate the tinies, show them their place beneath their betters. Now, however, I think she'll be out for blood. I couldn't help but notice that the crush tag for this story hasn't been utilized yet. I think this is going to change sooner rather than later, and I suspect Donnica will be the one to make use of it.

I'm a happy endings guy, and I hope these developments here have long-term effects that end up making both Donnica and Amber better people. But, at the same time, my horny brain is telling me that Donnica making good on her fantasy and storming the tiny area would be hot as fuck! So I guess I win either way?

As for Rebecca, I love that she's reached her breaking point. I can't tell you how many stories I've seen where I felt a tiny would act exactly like Rebecca is here, only to see them grovel and accept their situation instead. So this was a breath of fresh air for me! I loved how badass her not-give-a-fuck attitude was so much! That it's had such an effect on Amber is the proverbial icing on the cake!

And I understand why she's pissed at Trevor about the video evidence, but ultimately I agree with Trevor on this. I understand why she wants to see Amber suffer too, but this is the worst version of herself, and Trevor has a hard time recognizing his friend when he sees this. He's trying to save her soul, but she's too far gone to care. I'm so interested to see what happens with her moving forward, especially if Amber goes in the direction that I think she's going to go in.

Overall, this is a fantastic story that's developing into something more than I initially thought it would. I look forward to seeing where you take it from here!

Well shit that was quite an impactful second half.

Perhaps things will get better for our tiny duo.

Love it; it's nice to see Trevor stand against the giantess who owned him. And I really enjoy seeing Donnica in a more weak side when she speaks about her past. It's really good to have a bit of context about her. She is my favorite by far. 

Another fantastic chapter! I really love the interaction with Jill and Alexa; the fact they use a tiny just for a dumb bet is so funny and shows how tinies are seen for normal people, not just the two powerful giantesses we know. The part when Jill uses Rebecca to have revenge on Haley, even if it's not her, is fantastic. And Donnica, the fact that she tortures Tiny without even knowing them is so hot. Hope to see some interaction with just one-time giantess; it's different than with Amber and Donnica.

I really hope poor Amber gets her justice from that evil Rebecca trying to run from her.

As much as I think Amber's antics are very hot. I am really surprised Donnica hasn't figured anything out about what her daughter has been up to. I am wondering if and when such a thing might happen. Especially since she destroyed Trevor's home. You would think that Donnica would have been contacted about that.

Wow!!