A very sensuous chapter! This is smut done right for me. Even though there's no second character in the action (yet), a big girl can still find satisfaction in the pleasurable sensation of growth. 

Every aspect of the writing really helped enhance the experience with little tickles of the brain that make it a pleasure to read. The dialogue is fantastic, but especially when it gets eclectic as her spoken words mix with her internal thoughts and the detached narration. It's exciting and drives me to read faster, building up the scene and pushing it toward a climax (pun intended). The few sprinkles of alliteration were a nice touch, too! And of course, you can never overuse the greatest word in the English language: "bigger." 

Really nice stuff here! Hopefully this isn't the last such scene in this story. 

Very enjoyable so far, I really hope to read more. Hopefully they get over their anxious reservations and enjoy a growing good time.


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