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Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2024 2:21 PM Title: A Workout To Break You In

Please continue!

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2024 7:16 AM Title: A Workout To Break You In

So happy to see someone continue this story that has so much potential. Pretty much my favorite premise. 


Good work so far, but could use a bit more description on what the main character sees/smells/feels/tastes throughout the mom's day.

Reviewer: Locutus Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2024 10:58 AM Title: Changing His Answers

 fine 3rd chapter! I'm glad someone is finally on their way to completing this story!

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