Date: November 30 2025 6:51 AM Title: Part 2
It will be great as women grow older, they become taller and sexier, so moms become the biggest in each house and ... ;)
[Report This]Date: November 30 2025 6:47 AM Title: Part 1
Very nice, I liked the giantess teacher, mini giantess Milfs, and Moms will make hot scenes
Author's Response:
Tks :D
I’ll make a note of your suggestion.
Date: November 28 2025 9:12 PM Title: Part 2
Ok chapter 2. I like how we're focusing on the mental health and medical side of the Gynophobia this chapter.
I appreciate how the mental condition is expanded upon. Charles as a whole therapists, is mendicaded for the condition and has a history of attacks, It makes it more interesting and makes me emphasize with him alot more.
I also like Alex, She actuall seems to care a modic about Charles and won't let him escape interacting with women. In this crazy world she's a good influence for him.
Again I'm still intesteted in te dynamic between taller and shorter Amazons, Alex seems to have pretty confident demeanour, but would she retain it if she had to deal with Marie from last chapter?
Maybe that's why she's so eager to interact and get along with Alex.
I'm also curious what's ratio of women to men at the college? Charles being the only one in a self defense class as well as having no male friends(since his Gynophobia will make it almost impossible for any to be women) makes me think there aren't many.
The way the women reacted to him in the looker makes me ponnder though. What is the perception of men amongst women? Maybe we could get a pov switch to Alex or Marie in a future chapter.
The teacher's introduction underwhelmed me here's why.The impression you're trying to sell is that women above 3 metres is rare considering how no one else in the class reaches her height.
The issue is chapter 1 contradicts every womenn we met there with an assigned was taller(which honestly I like). Maybe they were the exceptions but they're only ones we spent time with and focus on so the 180 next chapter doesn't take.
Based off her introdctionn and no one else being as tall as her in class I was expecting her to be at Marie's height of just over 5 metres if not a bit taller.
Btw this Visualise the teachers look, not important to any points but I thought i'd share.
https://x.com/musctonk/status/1682931590022971393
I like how Alex immediately get's up some sibling-esque tomfoolery with Charles lol. This is the stuff he should be doing with his actual sisters if they weren't so seemingly cold to him.
Intially I wrote alot more but this is fucking website is garbage, apparently I took to long and it logged me out when I pressed submit so lost the rest of my entire comment. maybe I'll rewrite the rest of later Fucking hell.
Look out for it lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your analysis ;)
As I mentioned in another comment, I plan to work a lot on Charles’s phobia, both the psychological impact and the process he’ll go through to better manage it. I also want to make use of some secondary characters who will become important later in the story.
Regarding the different heights women can reach: I honestly hadn’t noticed that detail, since I was very focused on how to portray Charles’s phobia hahaha. But I’ll keep that in mind for the next chapters.
Oh, and by the way, the image you sent is pretty close to how I imagined the teacher, the only difference is that she doesn’t wear a kimono.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2025 4:41 AM Title: Part 2
So I just read Chapter 1and2. I'm liking so far. I hope this going to be a story about how he gets over his phobia. And eventually comes to a happy ending. And I like to see The many adventures he comes across.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback :)
What I can tell you is that yes, the protagonist’s phobia will be the driving force that moves the story, which will also place strong focus on his relationships (and possibly those of other characters) with the women of this dystopian world.
Date: November 14 2024 4:51 PM Title: Part 1
I like where this is going.
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: November 14 2024 3:40 PM Title: Part 1
Ok, I really enjoy the concept of this story I really enjoy the concept of tinies having an irrational inherent primal fear of giants and wish it was used more. This storu shows promise but so far the characters seem one note- the angry giantess is just angry Maria is jsut nice, Charles is jsut scared, Nurse is just sexy.
I'm always intereseted in the lore of the types New world orders, Is Gynophobia a common occurance? what is the power dynamic between smaller and bigger giantesses, do those on the smaller side feel efeminiated? How did society get to this point and would a society with Amazonian women differ from our own?
For me the main attraction for this type of story is nuanced character interaction that's enhanced by having 15 foot tall women, so if this was ever continuedi'd like to see that expanded upon.
I'm not the biggiest fan of the use of AI, I think it sucks, looks awful and a proper drawing can always do the job much better.
I'd rate this like a 6/10 it has potential but nothing of major substance happened yet, it'd be cool to see the characters be developed upon.
So far I actually like Jasmine interaction with he brother it's the most interesting one here, It makes em think does she still deep down love her brother, feel apathy towards or straight dislike or resentment, how does it compare to the way she views her sister or mother?
Anna, she might've well has a cameo because almost nothing to with her hcaracter was established here other than she does listen to her father I have the same questions for her as I do Jaz.
As for his mther she's not in this one. I kinda was hoping hse'd be the tallest but that's just my petty lil preference, It makes curious though.
Does Charles' family know about his Gynophobia? was it ever officialy diagnosed? does only his parent know? if not are they atleast aware of his fear and trepidation towards them? if they do know does it factor into how they treat him for better or worse?
Now as for Emily our starting point is fine but it'd eb cool to see more development of why she's like this, does she have a prejudcie towards the smalls or a superity complex over them?
Maria seems nice but I wonder if she has a playful or dominative side? I wonder how being so tall plays into her lifestyle? does it make her more confident when dealing with giants shorter than her? does it make tinies more scared of her on average? are there any societal expecatations for the taller and stornger members of amazons society? How do seeming polar opposites in ehr and Emily become friends? will we see Emily's softer or empathetic side when they hangout or exchance dialogue?
If Maria was just "Nice" it'd be pretty boring I can't lie.
Finally Nurse does she ahve a thing for smaller people? what's her history with them? Will she be able to restrain herself from taking Charles home with no one to stop her? Find out next time on Dragon Ball z!
Even a seemingly more minor chcaracter liek this culd be fleshed out if you gave them more depth.
I hope all this yapping I ded actually ammounts to something lol.
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[Report This]Date: November 14 2024 9:25 AM Title: Part 1
I love stories where women have a kind of humiliating relationship with men but not in an exaggerated way as I saw in your story. The use of artificial intelligence I also liked for the fact that women look simply stunning in them and save the imagination from doing the job. I would love it if you could continue this story since I found this phobia of women tall incredibly captivating and that can generate several controversial situations, even more so if a somewhat dominant girl starts to like him or even his family.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'm considering continuing this story, I really enjoyed writing this genre.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2024 3:44 AM Title: Part 1
Very nice story. I love tall strong women stories, especially where the girls are a little mean and even on the cruel side. Sexual aggression is the icing on the cake.
Please continue your writing. I would love to read more of your work!
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