Date: November 14 2024 4:51 PM Title: One-shot
I like where this is going.
Date: November 14 2024 3:40 PM Title: One-shot
Ok, I really enjoy the concept of this story I really enjoy the concept of tinies having an irrational inherent primal fear of giants and wish it was used more. This storu shows promise but so far the characters seem one note- the angry giantess is just angry Maria is jsut nice, Charles is jsut scared, Nurse is just sexy.
I'm always intereseted in the lore of the types New world orders, Is Gynophobia a common occurance? what is the power dynamic between smaller and bigger giantesses, do those on the smaller side feel efeminiated? How did society get to this point and would a society with Amazonian women differ from our own?
For me the main attraction for this type of story is nuanced character interaction that's enhanced by having 15 foot tall women, so if this was ever continuedi'd like to see that expanded upon.
I'm not the biggiest fan of the use of AI, I think it sucks, looks awful and a proper drawing can always do the job much better.
I'd rate this like a 6/10 it has potential but nothing of major substance happened yet, it'd be cool to see the characters be developed upon.
So far I actually like Jasmine interaction with he brother it's the most interesting one here, It makes em think does she still deep down love her brother, feel apathy towards or straight dislike or resentment, how does it compare to the way she views her sister or mother?
Anna, she might've well has a cameo because almost nothing to with her hcaracter was established here other than she does listen to her father I have the same questions for her as I do Jaz.
As for his mther she's not in this one. I kinda was hoping hse'd be the tallest but that's just my petty lil preference, It makes curious though.
Does Charles' family know about his Gynophobia? was it ever officialy diagnosed? does only his parent know? if not are they atleast aware of his fear and trepidation towards them? if they do know does it factor into how they treat him for better or worse?
Now as for Emily our starting point is fine but it'd eb cool to see more development of why she's like this, does she have a prejudcie towards the smalls or a superity complex over them?
Maria seems nice but I wonder if she has a playful or dominative side? I wonder how being so tall plays into her lifestyle? does it make her more confident when dealing with giants shorter than her? does it make tinies more scared of her on average? are there any societal expecatations for the taller and stornger members of amazons society? How do seeming polar opposites in ehr and Emily become friends? will we see Emily's softer or empathetic side when they hangout or exchance dialogue?
If Maria was just "Nice" it'd be pretty boring I can't lie.
Finally Nurse does she ahve a thing for smaller people? what's her history with them? Will she be able to restrain herself from taking Charles home with no one to stop her? Find out next time on Dragon Ball z!
Even a seemingly more minor chcaracter liek this culd be fleshed out if you gave them more depth.
I hope all this yapping I ded actually ammounts to something lol.
Author's Response:
Date: November 14 2024 9:25 AM Title: One-shot
I love stories where women have a kind of humiliating relationship with men but not in an exaggerated way as I saw in your story. The use of artificial intelligence I also liked for the fact that women look simply stunning in them and save the imagination from doing the job. I would love it if you could continue this story since I found this phobia of women tall incredibly captivating and that can generate several controversial situations, even more so if a somewhat dominant girl starts to like him or even his family.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'm considering continuing this story, I really enjoyed writing this genre.
Date: November 14 2024 3:44 AM Title: One-shot
Very nice story. I love tall strong women stories, especially where the girls are a little mean and even on the cruel side. Sexual aggression is the icing on the cake.
Please continue your writing. I would love to read more of your work!
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