Date: November 20 2024 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)
The construction of the characters and their feelings, as shallow and sometimes forced, manage to capture my attention a lot and that's why this is one of the stories I like the most. Most of the stories are fetishistic and sometimes ridiculous, but this one has really proven itself worthy of being called history. Seeing the development of the story, if I were in her position I would highlight the romantic relationships of some giant characters with humans, such as giving Alluria a situation where she finds a boy who is different from the others and makes her rethink all her actions so far, or her continuing as she is but with a boy who is her favorite. I think I'm trying to intrude too much into the story, but I have to say that even if it was going to reflect my ideas or not, your story will definitely be in my favorites.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback.
I tried my best not to make characters that are too straightforward and simple(although the cast is relatively big so it can't be helped if some of them are less fleshed out), so I guess it can sometimes become rather lengthy and forced when I depict their feelings. I am still relatively new to writing so there are times when I struggle to put my ideas into fruition in a natural way. I've already written quite a bit ahead, and I hope to say that future chapters probably improve on this aspect and actually feature some genuinely good(although rather melodramatic) character development. Hopefully.
With regards to romantic relationships, that was more heavily the focus in part 1 of the story, this part probably won't be highlighting that much of it but such ideas will still make it to the story here and there in the future. I hope you keep following the story anyway and I'd like to keep seeing your thoughts.
Date: November 20 2024 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Compassion (Ryemi)
Ryemi is such a sweet girl. I can't wait for the day she grows to Goddess size and cuddles the living daylights out of Ren.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
We will have to wait and see if that happens haha.
[Report This]Date: November 18 2024 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Prison (Ren)
Why I love this duo and also Ren is becoming a favorite of mine besides Ryan in term of the full human characters
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the response.
These two will play a very major role in this story and I'll really be trying to dive deep into their character development, far deeper than I did for anyone in part 1. I'm putting a lot more emphasis on character development in part 2, so if you are into that I hope you will enjoy the direction the story is taking. At the end of part 2, I'd like to do a poll to see who are everyone's favourite characters.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2024 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Haven (Ryan)
Guess that answers my question about Ryan. This was an awesome return. It seems I was right about him being on earth all this time but I didn't predict him getting a phd in theoretical physics lol.
Guy is one of the best martial artists on earth and now a genius as well, would be crazy if his opponents weren't colossal goddesses with powers as well. Feels like how batman is ridiculously peak human but still the underdog when compared to the rest of the members with actual powers.
Ren was also some kind of scientist so I guess Ryan and Ren might get along well if they meet. Anyway this was a great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Ryan will continue to be integral in this story as well so I hope you can look forward to that. There will be other returning characters from part 1 that play major roles here as well.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2024 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Haven (Ryan)
Damn the sweet return of ryan was perfect and damn this story keeps getting better and better every chapter. Also don’t mind if it’s less smut and more character focused this time maybe part three will be heavily smut lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestion, I will try to figure out what is best. I will try to write the story as spicy as I can even if there won't be as many explicitly smutty scenes in this part. (although I can definitely promise there will still be some for sure)
[Report This]Date: November 13 2024 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)
I just left my review for part 1 and then came here. Great story as always.
I have so many questions, I definitely was not expecting a 16 year time skip and new main characters.
It looks like ryemi is the same age as mimi and Ryan were in part 1. Though I hope the person ryemi is looking for isn't Ryan due to Ryan being on earth all this time.
I felt bad enough for Ryan when he had missed mimi and her eventual baby for 1 year, let alone 16 years. He just missed her entire childhood. And its pretty rough for mimi as well, in nearly every chapter of hers there was always a mention of her love for Ryan so she must have been hit hard. Well assuming this is what happened but I guess the person could be someone else and Ryan was there with mimi to raise their daughter.
Also its funny how in this one chapter ryemi used her flames more than ignis did in all of part 1 pretty much, though I'm guessing aunt iggy was the one who trained her to use her flames.
I like the dynamic between ryemi and ren so far, im eager to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your reviews.
I did the 16 year time skip to accelerate the story. There are many ideas I have for the characters introduced in this part and I wanted to skip the parts that the reader would probably be less interested to see in depth(e.g. Mimi's training and raising her daughter). I also didn't want the story to drag on too long and become too intimidating for new readers to get into. Given what I have planned for the series, I will most likely need a part 3 as well to fit all the content in.
Regardless, I will try to keep the chapters exciting and filled with enough giantess content to make it easy to get through.
[Report This]Date: November 12 2024 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)
Happy to see you back. I'm looking forward to the new chapters
Author's Response:
Happy to see you here! Hope you enjoy this part as well, although it may be a bit more story focused than the previous one with more main characters.
[Report This]Date: November 12 2024 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)
Omg !!! My glorious king has returned!!!!!!!
Wow 16 years and I’m guessing this mysterious girl is the daughter of two known characters that I won’t spoil for people who don’t know.
I honestly can’t wait to see where this goes now
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
More chapters will be coming soon, but do expect my upload schedule to be slightly slower than part 1 since I have been getting busier lately.