




Date: January 21 2025 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)
Absolutely amazing!!!!! And she’s back let’s gooo !!!!
and Iggy being there added with Ly just made it better can’t wait to see what happens next chapter dude
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving another comment!
Hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint!





Date: January 20 2025 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)
Amazing chapter, I did say it would be hilarious if ryemi found out about Ryans gts fetish but I did not think it would actually happen lmao. I completely forgot mina would know about it. Though mina has no room to talk about ryan, with the sexual stuff she has done to humans in the past. Im pretty sure mina called ryan handsome at the time and even encouraged him to come back later for some activities lol.
Ryemis and Ryans relationship right now is really funny though I am hoping it will be a very wholesome and nice relationship overall. This story already has enough bad fathers daugher relationships, with mimi, melody and layla lol. Though its only laylas that was actually really bad.
I cant really blame Jacob for how hes acting, especially about killing Estheia, like shes been killing billions of innocents for 10 000 years and started this whole mess. Its nice to see that melodys and jacobs relationship is still pretty good for the most part. Like even while hes raging he still uses an affectionate nickname for her lol.
I am pretty surprised at how easily Estheia agreed, but I guess seeing mina change so much for the better, just by spending a few days with people, pretty much goes against her entire world view.
Finally chrophemus uses her power, yeah she is definitely powerful if she can even affect layla. Im pretty sure she will be important in the final battle as well. Im assuming if it wasnt for layla she might have been able to end the 1000 year cycle herself with her power and popularity with other goddesses.
Also my man Ryan is getting roasted from every angle. By mina, ryemi and iggy lol. I think he needs one more epic moment to redeem himself in his daughters eyes. Or just have Mimi reveal that she is a bigger freak then ryan could ever be lol. Im pretty sure Mimi would be estatic if she learned about ryans gts fetish. At that point ryemi might just get ren to adopt her lmao.
Finally Mimi returns, Ive looked forward to this for a while. Nice to see she still loves ryan just as much, she even checked on him before her own daughter. This is also the first time mimi has actually seen ryan from her big size since ryan fled last time and before that mimi couldn't see humans. The situation is pretty serious now but just mimi forgetting everything and instantly getting slightly arroused at the sight of ryan so small and vulnerable in front of her would be hilarious. Especially since ryemi would realize that both her parents are freaks lol.
Lyre has been living the dream with Iggy, what ryan could have had with mimi if he didnt run away. Though speaking of Iggy im assuming faye must have revived her or something in the past since im pretty sure layla killed her in the past.
So Mimis kill count has been confirmed, over a million and it even says what she did. Yeah that is definitely going to be a bombshell when it drops. Looking forward to seeing more mimi and ryan.
Author's Response:
Thank you for sharing your thoughts again!
I guess the contrast between Mina's past reaction to Ryan invading her mouth to her current mortification shows how much her worldview has shifted regarding humans. Back when she used to see them as toys, Ryan's intrusive act did little to ruffle her feathers. But things are different now that she sees humans as equal beings. It is a similar idea as to why Ithyrminah could parade around in her underwear all day without a care back then, but now she displays bashfulness and embarrassment when baring her body in front of humans. Being seen naked by bugs is not something even worth thinking about while being seen naked by beings that you regard as people is a whole different story.
Nice that you can see where Jacob is coming from. Even if peace gets achieved, it can be expected that many of the humans will still harbor resentment towards the goddesses, and rightfully so for all their lost families and friends. I think Jacob lets us keep in view that perspective that countless humans definitely empathize with.





Date: January 20 2025 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Arrival (Ren)
So Ren still has the index. Im just imagining him being curious about Mimi and then he just sees a kill count of over a million lol.
Also ah so Mimi couldnt shrink down and wasn't just so detached from her humanity that she never bothered. Considering how nice Ryemi is, it would be a bit strange if mimi was really that cold towards humanity.
Glad to see Mimi was affected after all by what she did and what makes it worse for her is that she probably does not have anyone around her who can empathize since Iggy does care about lyre but shes been killing cities for ages so she probably cant empathize with the pain and guilt mimi feels right now.
And Amara literally kills human for the slightest disobedience and uses them for experiments and thats without her being even being angry with them at all lol. Though she has probably changed after being mortal for so long. Im pretty sure human science might interest her so she might get a fondness for humanity that way. Maybe Ryan can win her over with his science talk about dimensions lol
Also huge contrast in how Estheia interacts with Layla now. In the last chapter she was using her illusions and was all calm cool and collected and did a good job of manipulating layla for her own purposes. But now Estheia is just terrified of her. I'm assuming a lot of laylas hatred comes from Estheia manipulation. I kind of want to see Layla just crush a bunch of goddesses as well just so Estheia could see what kind of monster she created with her hatred lol.
Lucy is the absolute goat this chapter. I will be honest since she cant use her domain I thought she would lose against a goddess with a powerful domain or would at least need help. I did not expect her to beat Estheia by herself. It seems lucys suit can dissipate energy so I guess goddesses have some advanced technology after all.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Interesting thoughts regarding the extent of empathy Mimi gets from her friends. Iggy has changed her viewpoint somewhat ever since meeting Mimi, so it is unlikely that she is still the same destructive giantess she used to be, but she probably isn't the best emotional support all in all. Good observation on how much the dynamic between Estheia and Layla has shifted, Estheia willingly used Layla even though she even killed quite a few goddesses back in the day, she is definitely paying the price for that decision now.





Date: January 20 2025 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 14.5 - Solitude (???)
Amazing chapter. Yeah last chapter basically already confirmed it, this is Layla. Though I didn't expect her to also be the goddess of solitude. Looks like the answer was simply yes when i asked if Layla was the emperors daughter or the goddess of solitude lol.
I always like to see some tera action and this did not disappoint, I was not expecting her to destroy a 100 planets. I definitely see parallels to what Mimi did to that city in part 1. Both were pretty much completely unnecessary atrocities that left them both feeling empty afterwards though Laylas was far bigger in scale.
Although Laylas father betraying her in such a horrible way is a lot more reasonable then going mad just because Amara got beat up lol. Though Layla then loses the plot when she just starts killing everyone. I like at the end she even killed the one person who cared about her and then cried about being all alone. Yeah I can definitely see her hatred towards humanity just being her coping and herself being the one she truly hates.
Estheia being the master mind behind the turn definitely cements her as main villain along with Layla. I did think for a second she could have used Alluria to brainwash the emperor into betraying her but there was absolutely no need when the emperor is so stupid and evil himself lol. Its hilarious that taking his daughter on a picnic was all he needed to do for him to win everything lmao.
Looks like Mimis training is finally going to pay off since shes pretty much the only one who has a chance with her domain of origin and has a similar experience to what Layla went through.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Layla's father is pretty much the root of all the problems humanity faces today. Interesting thought about Alluria manipulating her father, but it would be pretty obvious if that were the case since her victims always display a crazed sense of attraction to her that overwhelmed everything else.
As for whether Mimi's training will actually pay off, we will have to wait and see.





Date: January 20 2025 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Brutality (Ryan)
Lucys return was awesome. Looks like she put the military training to good use or at least im assuming thats why her moves are so good. Having actual martial arts training is a big advantage. Though she might still have trouble against goddesses with powerful domains. But still she absolutely saved the day in this chapter.
Considering Chromphemus controls time which has got to be one of the most powerful domains, Im pretty sure she could have easily defeated clone Layla but then that would just make the real one angry. But still considering how powerful Chrophemus should be, I would like to see her actually use her abilities lol.
Also nice to see Chromphemus kill count being 0, I thought Lucy would also have a 0 kill count but i guess not, looks like Chromphemus is the only one who can claim that. Though it also shows how much of a calamity goddesses are when literally only one of them hasn't killed the equivalent of multiple massacres lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
I'm glad you liked Lucy's return, I tried to make it as epic as possible and even gave her a new look.
You are right that goddesses are so massive that even the act of walking puts a tremendous risk to humans in their vicinity. But if you've noticed, we have never seen Chrophemus really leave her hidden dimension or even walk around before, letting her be able to claim her 0 kill count.





Date: January 20 2025 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Identity (Mina)
Great chapter, I wasn't expecting Estheia to have such a kinder side. Also wouldn't her kill count be a lot higher since in part 1 when she fought Amara, I am pretty sure their clash destroyed some cities.
Nice to see Mina actually still being a good person even with her memories back. Though I cant blame Jacob for what he was trying to do considering what hes seen of Mina in the past.
Looks like Melody will finally become a goddess, though I definitely didn't expect Mina to rip her shard out, she is really trying to redeem herself lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Good observation about her battle with Amara, perhaps it should be a little higher but I thought a few hundred would be a decent albeit conservative estimate.
I wanted to show that Mina really is a good person at heart. The atrocities she commited in the past were all based on her just not seeing humans as individuals. Living as a human in a human group, no matter how bad the experience was, forced her to confront the fact that these people were not just toys or bugs but intelligent and aspiring individuals.





Date: January 20 2025 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)
Absolutely amazing!!!!! And she’s back let’s gooo !!!!
and Iggy being there added with Ly just made it better can’t wait to see what happens next chapter dude
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and I'm glad you liked the chapter! Hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint!





Date: January 20 2025 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)
I liked seeing this chapter from Mina's perspective as a newly "demoted" human, although part of me wishes she spent more time with Melody.
Estheia was easier to persuade than I thought, I was expecting a fight where she had to be taken down. Perhaps it was specifically because it was Mina trying to convince her?
Poor Ryan can't catch a break, first he gets teased by Iggy and Mina for his preferences, now even his own daughter thinks he's sus. Hopefully Mimi is here to the rescue, in more ways than one.
Finally, my man Lyre is living the dream! I wonder how they keep their relationship spicy after 16 years, and if Iggy prefers human size or goddess size.
Looking forward to the next one as always!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Estheia can be pretty set in her ways, and Lucy did have to fight her in the previous chapter because of that. But you are right that she has a soft spot for Mina.
As for whether Iggy prefers doing it normal size or otherwise, I think we all know the answer.
Date: January 19 2025 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)
SHES BACK! SHES BACK! HOLY SH*T SHES BACK im so excited to see that the old gang and the new gang are finally together again, well, without amara but i know we'll see her soon enough, i think mina ( i concede on calling her her goddess name its impossible ) breaking down the relationship between ryan and ryemi due to ryan's irrefutable giantess fetish, which we already got a glimpse off in the first part ( when lucy used her powers on ryan to uncover his desires, if you dont remember this, its on the origin chapter 17 - desires ), well we could say mina was pretty spot on with her sixth sense.
Lyre and Ignis being on that kind of relationship was pretty expected, though what i didnt expect is them going to town human size or goddess size, lyre, you devilish fella, what a man.
and going back to a more serious note, chrophemus using her power to slow down time is a great inclusion here, since thats what id expect for her to do: not acting until absolutely necessary, shes definately gonna be one of the goddesses to help mend the relationship between humans and goddess once all of this is settled.
The next chapter will be pretty interesting as its either gonna be from the perspective of ryan, the boyfriend, and ryemi, the daughter... its definately gonna be quite a read when it shows up.
Thanks for the chapters!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comments!
Glad that you enjoyed seeing some of the old characters come back. And I have to say that you are correct that Chrophemus will be playing a very important role in the story.
Date: January 14 2025 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Arrival (Ren)
okay on 15 something really made me realize something i should have far sooner, and its that estheia is a person who cared about goddesses but, in a fit of her never ending rage that formed the cycle, became someone who lived for the purpose of vengeance, though we do see that she cares for goddesses, seeing as how she begged for layla to stop her actions as this will cause death of numerous goddesses.
In contrast to that, chrophemus and lucy, who wants this vicious cycle to end. In chrophemus' case, she is strong, but she does not flaunt her power, willing to be a spectator as she doesnt want to harm humans or goddess, she acts as a peaceful negotiator to humans (ryan), and helps them to reach a peaceful end to this conflict. And in lucy's case, she is more willing to fight for what she deems is right, and if it means harming other goddesses, shes willing to do it. They fight for the same cause but their actions are vastly different from each other, which shows their characteristics to the forefront.
And then we go to mimi, we have heard of mimi since ryan and ryemi's conversation about her, but the information stating that she doesnt want to go back to turning human size because of what she did to a city, really made her... human. She realized her mistake that caused tens if not hundreds of thousands of deaths. Shes unwilling to shrink back, cause she doesnt want to face the people she wronged before, and its a immense weight on her shoulder that she carries, she hasnt lost emotion since becoming a goddess and got intoxicated by power. She feels regret, anger even that she was able to do such horrible thing. Amara knows mimi a lot at this point, and i truly hope that she was the anchor that kept mimi intact in her trying times, cause just the few lines ryemi said alone... She needs them.
melody and jacob are the spitting image of layla and the emperor.. the difference now is that melody has people she can count on in ryan, ryemi, ren, and ithyrminah who i know wont let her astray due to jacobs anger towards goddesses.
And finally... Layla, Shes an intresting person, a person, like mimi, weighed down heavily by her wrongdoings, but... because she didnt have support from people like in melody's or mimi's case to keep them in check, and in face of estheia, was molded into a person she is today...
Lets also have a show for her goddess name, "goddess of solitude"... The state or situation of being alone, she was alone when mira, her maid perished, when her father cared for nothing more than personal gains as she puts planet after planet into submission, she was treated by her father as nothing more but a tool, and like a tool, estheia used her to her advantage as a revenge plot against humanity, she never had people to care for her when she needed it the most, the only person she can trust is.... herself. which is why her power fits her tragic story so much, as making clones of herself says that "she needs no one but herself". She wasnt a person born evil, she was a person who turned evil, an enemy of both humanity and goddess alike due to her past that she carries now to the present.... and we can only hope she can be freed of this loneliness she feels....
This felt more like a character assessment more than anything but F it! i think a assessment of the important actors of the story, but arent specifically the main characters ( minus mimi but i know shes coming soon COPIUM ) as theyre very strongly built characters with backgrounds that you can guess due to the lines weaved in the story, theyre truly great characters and its honestly very scary knowing that i have to write a fanwork of a story that has depth such as this, though i will definitely try my damnedest.
Thanks for the chapter, and i shall wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your assessment of the characters!
It is always interesting to see my readers' takes on the characters, it helps me notice other sides of them as well. I added a few of my own thoughts to your analysis, focusing on the parts that really resonated with my own interpretation of the characters. (only referencing past events so as to not include spoilers)
There were many intriguing points that you brought up, such as the one about the parallels between Layla and Melody's situations. While this parallel was made quite obvious in the latest chapter, Layla's 'solitude' being the key difference between their situations was a cool point to bring up about it, highlighting the fact that Melody had more than just her father around her. Melody was loyal to her father, but unlike Layla's case, her father was not her entire world. Dependence on a single individual can lead to a suffocating form of solitude. And now that I'm reading this chapter again, it's even more apt that Melody's domain is Harmony, which is quite a polar opposite to Solitude. (The contrast between Solitude and Harmony was not intended, I was just picking a domain that best fit Melody as a character, but still kinda cool I guess)
For Lucy's case, indecisiveness was her character flaw that was addressed way back in Part 1 of the story. So to show her development, I wanted to display how confident and decisive she became in Part 2, showing how she fights for what she believes in with no hesitation. Your comparison of Lucy and Chrophemus is extremely spot on given that Chrophemus was the one who took Lucy under her wing, meaning that Lucy's indecisiveness back in part 1 largely stemmed from Chrophemus's own passivity and non-confrontational approach. The Lucy in Part 2, driven to change by Ryan in Part 1, has managed to fully shed her past inhibitions(which was partially influenced by Chrophemus).





Date: January 14 2025 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Arrival (Ren)
Wow this was awesome and now I’m curious on how many goddess are there? Layla background is amazing and compelling but I think something will change her mind.
Lucy is goated and melody keeping her words with Mina was perfect. And Jacob seems like Layla’s father but has more care for his daughter at least a little in my opinion but who knows.
betting it’s Mina on the hill lol.
So four or more chapters left I think wow this climax is going to be amazing
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
There is quite a finite number of goddesses since Genesis only created them over a span of a couple thousand years. I'm glad that you enjoyed Layla's backstory, it was quite hard to fully flesh out her character in the span of 3 chapters as only a small portion of her origin story was able to be shown.
There are similarities between Melody/Jacob and Layla/Rudith situations, but the characters are also vastly different from each other. Even though Jacob isn't the most likable right now, there are parts of his heart that are in the right place. For Layla's father however, the same definitely can't be said. In many ways, he is the true villain of the entire story, having killed Genesis in addition to driving Layla to her current state.
Without spoiling anything, I went really hard on the ending since I've always felt like the most important(and often best) parts of good giantess narratives is the ending. I really hope that I don't disappoint you when it finally comes.
Do remember to check back sometime next week when we reach the true climax of the story.
Date: January 13 2025 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 14.5 - Solitude (???)
This was.... exactly what i expected! almost... didnt really thought estheia is the one who did all of this... and layla, between her and estheia i think estheia is the main antagonist of this story since as lista said with her entry:
"Estheia, shes always so serious, following every single one of genesis' instructions to the letter, It saddens me that she has changed so much since her death"
ill explain my theory on why i think estheia is the main villain of this story.
As lista said on chapter 13 ( Identity ), she is saddened to see her change so much after genesis' death, which im going to assume is that while shes still serious to the core, she treats humans with care before genesis' death, and after her death, she was the one most affected which made her hate humans, and started to plan her eternal vengeance against the humans.
And here layla comes as the perfect person to plant astheia's hatred. We know astheia is smart, so she likely has the actions in 14.5 planned long ago, and that is what caused layla to act like she did on chapter 14.
Now i think as old as layla is now, i think we have the perfect people to give her heart again in the form of ryan and ryemi, since they might be a contrast of layla and the emperor. Though in which way i cant really put into words, the next chapter is sure to reveal some of what i said is either true or false.
thats it! These last few chapters are very fun as it got my head really working out on the scenarios and theorycrafting and such, Thanks for the new chapter and im eagerly waiting for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Both Estheia and Layla have been the antagonists that stand out the most so far, with most of the other antagonists only having minor roles. It is interesting to see how you feel the story will progress in terms of the development of these two characters.
One of the things I like to present in this story is the idea that anyone can be an antagonist and anyone can be an ally, everyone has their own alignments and principles but they can intersect or conflict in various ways, which leads to many different possibilities. Ignis, Amara, Aegis are just some examples of former antagonists turned into allies. And although there aren't really any super obvious examples of an outrightly good character turning into a villain, we have had examples of good characters committing atrocious acts, which presents the idea that there is potential for them to become a true antagonist even if that potential is not realized.
This concept will definitely be furthered explored as we reach the ending, so stay tuned!
Date: January 11 2025 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Brutality (Ryan)
HMMMM.... it looks like im most likely right on who layla is, with her being the emperor's daughter, since 10 thousand years isnt that much of a elapsed time for goddesses, so its likely theres only have been 9-10 cycles of this.... though the only crack on my theory is how if thats the case, the daughter of the emperor should also have her entry since theres no way Lucy is older than her at this point.
On the other hand, Lets go Lucy! MY GOAT IS BACK! and that means backup! im hopeful that she was successful and she has bought backup in the form of goddesses willing to fight for humanity.
Super excited for next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment!
I'm glad you are as excited about Lucy's return as I am. I hope you liked her new look too. Next chapter will be coming soon and will be a rather huge one, so stay tuned!





Date: January 10 2025 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Brutality (Ryan)
Holy shit !!!!!! The great return of (spoilers) was beyond epic and damn what even is Layla at this point to be that powerful and scary holy shit
this sorta final battle will be huge (literally lol) and damn ryan is so brave and very very very lucky in so many ways.
I’m predicting either lots of goddess unite and Ryan is gifted with an unknown power to help in the fight like so super sonic, super SAYIEN !!! Transformation
will it happen probably not would be cool if it does HELL YEAH
10/10 chapter and damn 5 ish more left crazy
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment!
Interesting predictions about the final battle, it very well could do down that kind of path or a completely different direction. You'll just have to wait and see.
And not to worry, in terms of actual content left in the story, there will be quite a bit more than 5 chapters worth.
Date: January 09 2025 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Identity (Mina)
Firstly, im going to need to write an apology form specifically for ithyrminah for completely forgetting she is also a main character now, though from the way shes being set up.... i have high hopes for her, both as a part of the story, being a main character, and being a goddess who now treats humans as an equal ( yeah i dont really have much to say its mostly just apologizing for ithyrminah for completely forgetting chapter 9 existed )
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment!
She was introduced really late into the series so it's understandable. I really only have a few chapters left to flesh her out(especially given the fact that we have 4 main characters to juggle through now, there's really not that many more chapters left that will be in Mina's perspective before the ending), but I hope that I'm doing a good job so far. I'm probably never going to try a series that juggles this many POVs again, I will probably stick to at most 2 just like in part 1.





Date: January 09 2025 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Identity (Mina)
That's really trusting of Mina to give her divinity to Melody, not what I had expected but I do hope Melody repays her faith.
I think Estheia can be a sweet motherly type if she didn't have a vendetta against the humans.
Also I saw your comment about wanting to see our thoughts on Ryan's and Ryemi's relationship. Personally I hope Ryemi gets to coddle her father a bit, as it's rare that we get to see a situation of a younger giantess caring for an older male.
Looking forward to the next one as always!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind support!
We don't really know much about Melody yet, so I guess it's normal to be suspicious of her. As for Estheia, I think this is the first time we've seen a non-hostile side to her, I hope it adds more depth to her as a character even if she hasn't had the most screen time.
For Ryemi and Ryan, you are right that we don't really have many instances of a younger giantess caring for an older male yet. It's mostly been younger giantess bullying an older male so far...We'll just have to see if that will continue to be the case or not.





Date: January 09 2025 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Identity (Mina)
Wow chapters so far have been crazy can’t believe we are so close to the end now at least for part 2 I’m assuming part 3 is in progress or something else ?
Either way I hope melody and Mina are true friends and she’s true to her words rather than something else
plus Mina regaining her memory and her still not wanting to kill Jacob is actually pretty cool and great character building.
overall great stuff
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
To answer your question, Part 2 will be the last part of the story 'The Origin', but will not be the last series set in this universe. Something else is already in progress so not to worry, I will be posting more stories after part 2 ends.
Mina's introduction as a 'main' character was really late into the story, but I hope I still did justice to her character development in spite of that. Her role in part 2 will become very clear in the next few chapters, so you can look forward to that if you like her!





Date: January 06 2025 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Book (Ryemi)
Awesome chapter, I was not expecting the index book to actually be in the story. I think that Mimis entry is going to be a bombshell, particularly the kill count. I was wondering if mimi destroying that city at the end of part 1 would come up again and I think this is the way it will. This will probably destroy Ryan and Ryemi if they see a kill count of like a million or something.
Also finally Ryan and Ryemi meet, I think it was done pretty well and I definitely look to more scenes between the two of them in the future. She probably will think hes amazing after he saved everyone and is basically the leader of Artemis. Then she may find out about his giantess fetish and maybe even discover how much of a freak mimi is as well at some point lmao.
The layla reveal was pretty big but to me a reveal that was just as big is that mimi has never shrunk down in front of Ryemi ever. Unless she has actually somehow lost the ability to shrink down or just physically cant do it anymore for some reason. Then she has never even hugged her daughter in her life just because she does not want to be human sized even for a bit. I can now see why ryemi was so eager to find her human father.
Im really looking forward to seeing Mimi now and just how much she has changed and her meeting up with ryan and ryemi again. Despite how much shes changed I still think she will tackle ryan to the ground when she sees him, since even her profile in part 1 mentioned her undying loyalty to ryan. If her profile still has a line like that, I can imagine ryan blushing until he gets to the kill count lol.
Of course finally the layla reveal, yeah I knew she was suspicious but this just completely confirmed that she is a goddess and not just someone linked to them. As for predictions, I think she could be the emperors daughter from the past chapters. Since chrophemus was terrified so it cant just be some random goddess.
Could possibly be the goddess of solitude and layla does like to be a loner but I still think the emperor daughter is more likely. As she cried when she first entered Artemis and said it reminded her of her old home. She had no reason to fake cry so I think this was sincere and since Artemis is a futuristic city, it probably is very similar to the kind of city the emperors daughter lived in back when humanity's technology was really advanced.
Author's Response:
Thanks for another amazing review!
Yeah, the idea about the index struck me when I was contemplating whether or not to put in an info entry for each goddess in part 2 even after they were already featured in part 1. I wanted to change things up so that it doesn't seem repetitive and in the process, I considered tying it into the actual plot itself.
There are a lot of ways for Ryan and Ryemi's relationship to progress now that they have finally met, I would like to hear more of your thoughts on what kind of dynamic they will have in the future.
I can see that you are really excited to see Mimi again, she will definitely have some moments in the later parts of the story, but whether or not they will be what you expect...that's a different thing.
There's a lot of speculation about Layla's identity among other people as well, but I will just neglect to comment about her for now. I will say that it is pretty cool to see that you still remember the Goddess of Solitude from part 1. She was only mentioned in a subtle one-liner by Chrophemus and I was pretty sure 90% of readers have already forgotten about it by now.





Date: January 06 2025 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Rescue (Ryan)
Amazing chapter, this was awesome. Easily one of my favorites. Looks like I was right about a few things lol. I'm really glad it was Ryan. In my review for part 1 back when it ended, I actually did mention it would be really cool if you did a scene where Ryan somehow rescues everyone after it felt like he was getting a little out shined by mimi. Well I would say you definitely delivered!
I did not except the return of the godkiller though. That was awesome, especially the way ryan used it. Both epic and hilarious. Also I like how he has now made both iggy and fae climax before he has done anything with Mimi willingly. I kind of want Mimi to find this out and just jump him lmao. Maybe she would just trap him on her body and not let him leave until hes satisfied her.
Nice to see Ryan and Ren getting along and already working together. And of course finally ryemi gets to meet ryan. Once again incredible chapter, I really enjoyed this, pretty much everything I wanted to happen actually happened but in an even better way.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts again!
Good prediction on Ryan being the one to save Artemis, I hope I did a good job detailing how he managed to do it. Mimi's role in this story is definitely a lot smaller than part 1 so you may not get to see too much of Ryan X Mimi moments, but there will still be some.
However, Mimi is one of my favorite characters and I do want to do more with her in the future. So do keep updated on my future works after this one ends and you might be able to see her again.
Date: January 04 2025 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Book (Ryemi)
i have returned! and as the pace quickens the intensity of everything gets higher and higher!
now firstly.... layla, i knew she was a goddess, she was too suspicious even on her introduction, but seeing that she seems to show no hostility to the humans, i think i have a guess on who she is, and thats the emperors daughter from the ??? chapters, since she seems really scared of showing them the truth that lies behind the lista's book, and looking back at the ??? chapters, you didnt write lista's entry of her in the bottom, which every goddess besides her have, though the truth behind her will unveil soon, so i'll just have to wait and see.
Now the way lista is properly introduced to everyone is very well made, how she is a goddess who decided to end her life as she found herself to have no more purpose in life, and how other goddesses will follow up that fact if not for humanity being there, as the embodiment of knowledge, she has nothing to learn, so its understandable why she did what she did....
and now mimi mentioned!!!!! its honestly unsurprising that she doesnt dig the human size now, we saw what she did on the first part, and considering that her group ( i think its fine to call their group the goddess group, since most of mimi's group are goddesses )... yeah.. now that begs the question: where are they now? mimi has been mentioned so its only in due time she reveals herself back to the limelight, maybe the group our perspective is on can have a peek at her index... who knows really.
and finally to end this lengthy review, all our main characters are now together, and it will now, what looks to be, a much more focused story since all three are in one place now.
oh wait... the end notes excites me quite a lot, oh! this will be fun! Thanks for the chapters!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment!
Glad you like this chapter! It seems that you have a good idea of the direction the story is heading towards, but we are still a few chapters away from the climax so do keep reading!
You are right that the main characters are all gathering together, but there is still one key person missing from the group as of now.