




Date: March 05 2025 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)
Incredible chapter, loved this ending. This chapter really proves Ryemi is Mimis daughter lol. They had pretty much the same idea of humanity living on their breast, though just nipple in Mimis case. Not to mention it turns out Ryemi is a yandere as well lmao. Though I doubt Ryemi would actually hurt anyone but shrinking Ren for blushing when a girl is flirting with him, when Ren and Ryemi aren't even dating definitely seems like yandere behavior to me.
Also both endings have Ryemi or Mimi reflect on the loneliness they feel despite all the lives on their body, though Ryemis case is much better than mimis. The most hilarious part has to be that the dark Mimi ending might actually be the best ending for humanity as there are far less causalities. Since in that timeline Layla does not kill billions unlike in this one. Though living conditions for the survivors are far better in this timeline lol.
Another parallel I noticed with that ending is that both of them end up being by far the strongest and yet they long to go back to how things were before.
Its interesting to see how Ryemi responds to becoming a goddess, she had powers all along but she could only use in them in short bursts so she only ever used them in important situations so she was nothing but heroic with them, but now we get to see her be a bit more selfish, especially when even her stray thoughts can cause reality to warp.
Like those rebels that she shrank. Definitely an entertaining scene but I don't see how that punishment is really supposed to teach them anything.There are a few goddesses who deserve that treatment a lot more than they did lol. Considering they are just normal humans, you can just put them in a normal prison and actually try to sort out their grievances. Though if they just targeted only the goddesses that came to earth as part of the cycle and made sure there was no collateral damage then they wouldn't really be wrong.
I would to like to see how some of the goddesses like Alluria went from brutally killing countless humans to actually living with them. Especially Ethesia, considering her hatred of humanity caused pretty much the whole story. I feel she got off easy lol, but she is useful in getting through to the other goddesses. It would be cool to see her thoughts at some point and maybe expressing some remorse since even when she turned it was more of a lets give these humans one more chance rather than actually admitting wrongdoing.
At least Layla had the tragic back story, Ethesia just had one precious person die which had already been avenged and then some, but she just carried on killing anyway. I think a proper redemption for her might be to have Mimi take away her power willingly so she can actually live as a normal human like how Mina does
Also if last chapter wasn't already enough to confirm the Ryemi and Ren romance then this ending pretty much sealed it. Considering Ren does not mind Melody flirting with him, clearly the age gap is not a problem and Ryemi clearly likes Ren romantically, like shes actually yandere for him lol. I would really like to see more of Ren and Ryemis relationship, with how Ryemis new power and distance affects their dynamic.
If Ryemi keeps this behavior up, I could see Ren actually being a little afraid of Ryemi, since he has no idea that Ryemi is just jealous and not actually angry at him. Like at the birthday party we already had Ren trembling a bit in front of Ryemi. Though im sure Ryemi would be heartbroken when she realizes the misunderstanding she created.
Also I feel like Alluria being a teacher would let her meet Ren if they taught at the same school or something. Alluria would remember him and Ryemi, since she was the one who mind controlled him to beat the hell out of Ryemi and yet Ryemi didnt fight back despite having the power to do so. Even back then, when she only knew him for a day, she would have rather died than hurt Ren, let alone now. If events do happen where Ren is genuinely afraid of Ryemi or at least does not feel valued by her anymore than maybe Alluria could tell him about this incident, since Ren still does not know. I hope Ren and Ryemi get together.
Also for fixing the planet, couldn't ryemi temporarily give Fae more power and then get Fae to fix a planet. Since in the 2nd ending when Fae absorbed the shards, she was able to restore a completely destroyed earth. It seems Ryemi has a limit that some other goddesses dont have, as clearly Fae does not need to visualize or at least know everything to bring a planet or person back perfectly.
Its kind of funny that having her go to school would probably make her a lot stronger if you just got her in a science class, maybe Ren and Ryan can give her a crash course lol.
Also can Ryemi revive Chromphemus, since unlike the rest of the dead people, she actually knows and has met Chromphemus so she shouldn't have trouble visualizing her. Would Ryemi just imagining Chromphemus being next to her or something be enough to do it?
Love seeing Ryan and Mimi together. I would like to see more about that one year they lived together and how they reconnected. Also did Mimi get over her trauma and shrink down or did Ryemi shrink Mimi down with her power?
Though speaking of Mimis trauma, there is still that innocent city Mimi destroyed at the end of part 1. Can she really move on without telling Ryan? I wonder how Ryan and possibly Ryemi would react. Ryan having his secret be his gts fetish was hilarious but Mimi has an actual dark secret. I can just imagine Ryan expecting something like that and then he gets hits with this lol.
I can just imagine Genesis spirit watching Mimi destroy that city and facepalm as she now chooses Ryemi to be the hero that saves everyone instead lmao. I mean Ryemi did do pretty much everything Mimi said she hoped to do in part 1, with saving the world and keeping the peace.
Also Lyre is winning as usual, after the prison, he just spent 16 years being with a fire goddess every day and now lives in a huge mansion with her, what a legend.
I see that Ryan and Mimi are not married yet, im predicting that their wedding will be in one of the side stories and Ryemi will really want to go. Maybe at that point they find a way around the planet problem so she can attend and she can finally give Ren a hug again lol.
Speaking of Ryemi and her parents, its kind of sad that just when Ryemi grew big enough to finally see Mimi face to face, Ryemi is now so big that the situation is reversed but an even worse scale. Though I can see Ryemi and Mimi bonding over romance., I can imagine Mimi telling Ryemi when Ryan said he fancied Lucy, that she claimed him right there and that's how Ryemi was born. That might encourage Ryemi to go on the attack with Ren but hopefully not scare the living daylights out of him lol.
Nice to see Ryan being basically leader of the earth and together with Mimi. He has definitely earned it. Now it is Ren who needs his happy ending instead of having a jealous near omnipotent goddess mess with him without Ren even knowing what he did wrong lmao.
Loved this ending, this is my 2nd favorite just behind the dark Mimi ending. Though it is this ending that makes the story feel complete and actually gives a satisfying end to all the characters, with the dark Mimi ending being just pure fun and letting us see Mimi at her full potential. This has been an absolutely fantastic story and I cant wait for more.





Date: February 20 2025 6:16 PM Title: Epilogue C - New World
Woo hoo! This was s fun ride of a story. I love the concept, I love the artwork sprinkled in to help get a sense of the characters and their scale. The descriptions of the world from the perspective of the goddess and the humans. I did feel like the sense of scale was a little skewed at times given that people can climb such gigantic bodies so quickly or travel across the planet from city to city on foot so quickly but the rest was great! I'm a sucker for the difference in scale between humans and gigantic beings and giga sized super powered goddesses interacting with the world is the best form of that.
Not much I can say on the various endings that hasn't been said by others already. On that note, given Ryemi's power couldn't she get the other goddesses to demonstrate theirs so she can learn them? Then she can create planets, transfer humanity to the new world and finally live among her friends and family. What a cathartic moment that would be! Bonus for a later story where she and her mother combine their unique abilities and possibly revive Genesis. You did hint that she's still around in a spiritual form watching everyone.
One critique is that I did want to see more of the other goddesses, like Alluria, both as goddesses and while they live as humans but I guess that what side stories are for. Anyway, great work! I hope to see you again!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Like what you said, I think I could have handled the sense of scale a lot better, I'll try to do better in the future on that part. For Ryemi's power, she can definitely learn by replicating other goddesses for sure, but whether the other goddesses have the powers to do such feats(like create planets) is a different story. Given her infinite potential, Ryemi will eventually learn how to do something of that scale at some point, but there's no telling how many eons that could take.
As for the other goddesses, the cast is really huge and I may find it hard to give everyone a chance to be featured. The first few after stories planned still focus mainly on a limited cast of goddesses, so not all the goddesses will be featured for now. But that may change in the future.





Date: February 20 2025 3:57 PM Title: Epilogue C - New World
I originally wanted to wait until all 3 endings and epilogues to be posted before I commented, but I think other have already voiced out most of what I wanted to say. Similarly I had a couple of things I wanted to see in side stories but the Ryemi ending basically covered most of them (e.g. the idol concert and the canon couples). So perhaps the only thing I'd be curious to see are situations where full-sized goddess live in peace with humans; as mentioned in the story they were asked to shrink down so the goddesses can gain a better perspective of humanity, but it would've been interesting to see nonetheless (and after all, giantess content is what we come to this site for!).
My personal favourite was of course the Ryemi ending as it's the "good" ending, although all 3 endings were unique and nuanced in their own ways.
Looking forward to reading the side stories!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Full-sized goddesses living among humans can be interesting, but some amount of restrictions will definitely have to be put in place. With regards to the future role of goddesses in the new civilization, I do have some plans on how to expand on this so expect that once I start on a sequel in this universe. The side stories will definitely feature some instances of full-sized goddesses though.
Date: February 20 2025 11:08 AM Title: Epilogue C - New World
Okay, review of the three Endings, ill be going in what i think is the weakest to the strongest endings
And i think the weakest ending is.... unfortunately Ending C with Ren.
I get that this is the good ending but i still feel this is the weakest just due to the fact that it felt a bit like deus ex machina, even though it really isnt. There was a feeling of betrayal when ryemi got this tool to fix the issue she was faced with ( relatively speaking ) ease, i just think the payoff wasnt there for a "good ending", the things i did liked something about the ending, its the epilogue which i think is about as strong as B and A, it gave a time skip to show how everyone is doing and how ryemi is now doing as her job as essentially God. This ending isnt bad, infact, its good! its just that i felt like there could have been a bit more foreshadowing on what ryemi was capable of doing... that and the fact that due to this being the "good ending", and is probably where most of the side stories will be held in, it had a lot of weight on its back to carry unlike the other two, still, 7/10!
Next is Ending B!
Ending B is intresting, as we have a ending where the villain ( layla ) won, and... it doesnt look that good for her. I feel like due to this ending not having as much weight to carry as ending C, it got a lot more freaky, which doesnt really have much substance for story and i think its fine, it showed two bad endings, bad ending for our casts, and bad ending for layla herself, which is an interesting take on the villain winning, showing that even if she won, that doesnt actually meant *she* won. 7.8/10
And for my favourite ending, Ending A, i swear its not bias.... mostly
i just think this ending was the best of the three as it gave us an understanding of how fucked this world is if ryan isnt here to keep mimi in check. Ryan will act on reaction and forced through problems with his problem solving skills and luck really, and mimi is the problem everyone will have to deal with if Ryan's shit doesnt work.... and well, this is what could happen. honestly, not much to say, 8/10
Endings are incredibly hard to make, and honestly even with all i said negatively ( about ending C ), its still a perfectly acceptable ending that captures what you want us to see ( which is ren and ryemi's relationship )
Anyways for a side story i think it could be fun ( in the Ending C timeline ) if lucy decided to tell ryemi and/or mimi ryan's freaky desires from the first part LMAO
Thats it! Congratulations on finishing the story! and as always, thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
For ending C, it is understandable that you would have preferred more foreshadowing about Ryemi's true capabilities. My intention was for her Domain to be an overpowered extension of her mother's Domain of Origin, seeing as she was her direct offspring, but that was not really set up in the story at all. I will try to keep this in mind in the future.
For the other 2 endings, I'm glad that you enjoyed them as I spent an equal amount of effort on them as well.
For the side story, it's interesting that you mentioned this of all things, because something similar to that actually does happen! (although it's kind of different as well) I won't spoil too much but do look forward to it once I upload it.





Date: February 20 2025 9:39 AM Title: Epilogue C - New World
Wow that chapter was fantastic I absolutely loved it from all the characters and stories from the one year timeskip
as far as upcoming stories I hope we get one with the mini rebels and how they struggle to survive in their current form and size.
overall great conclusion and voted too
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support!
Glad that you liked the ending, and thanks for voting!





Date: February 17 2025 2:15 AM Title: Ending C - Ren
Incredible chapter, Ren was awesome this chapter, he actually managed to change the future. Also I'm completely convinced their relationship is now romantic. He is literally calling the light that lights up his existence and his only want when the world is ending is to be with her. Sure that could just be very strong platonic possibly fatherly love.
But then Ryemi has no problem at all being hugged by ren even when shes naked, her nipples got erect when Ren was on it. And she could barely feel him there so it was definitely the thought of him being there that did it. Not to mention she gave Ren quite a show when she put layla in her vagina and winked at him. I highly doubt she would have done that if ryan was there instead of Ren lol. Sure there is the age gap but lucy is a 1000 years old and a romantic relationship between her and ryan did look like a real possibility in part 1. So at least in my head canon ren and ryemi get together lol.
Loved the action this chapter, the bigger the girls the better in my opinion and so Ryemi outgrowing the earth was amazing. Her putting Layla in her vagina like that, damn she really is her mothers daughter lol. It is hilarious that ryemi has appeared completely normal up till now but turns out she has a bit of freak in her as well. She didn't stand a chance when her parents were mimi and ryan lmao. Though after that stunt, Ryemi has no business being weirded out by ryans gts fetish lol.
Also I completely forgot ren had the index. I loved the way it was used by actually letting ren tell ryemi what her domain is. I thought her domain was just copying goddess powers, I did not expect limitless reality warping. Though im assuming the one limitation it has is that it can not directly affect goddesses so she cant just think about a goddess being directly defeated. Since im pretty sure all domains aside from origin cannot directly affect goddesses. So chromphemus will not be able to be revived.
For the cliffhanger im going to predict that mimi may be able to help out as well with the creation power of her domain of origin, since that has been mentioned before and this is the last chance to see it lol. Also ryan has now officially the most overpowered family in the universe lmao. Speaking of ryan and ren as well, looks like the aging problem can be fixed easily now, all ryemi has to do is just imagine ren and ryan young, every few years or she could just straight up make them ageless.
Ren has always been a very calm guy so to see him absolutely lose it at the end and even tell ryemi to stop being a little bitch, Ren has been nothing but kind to Ryemi this entire time, so rens behavior raised the tension and completely caught me off guard.
I realized that in the mimi epilogue, if mimi never sealed ryemis powers, then eventually ren probably would have checked the index, told ryemi about her domain and she could have just brought ryan back to life lmao. If there is a continuation for that then if ryemi finds out what her domain is, then all she has to do is tell her mother and get her powers back. Maybe she could even bring back the millions of people mimi casually killed.
Loved this ending, can't wait for the epilogue
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I've just uploaded the final epilogue so I hope you take a look at it. And please participate in the poll too once you are done reading!
This ending is focused not so much on Ren's own capabilities, but more so on Ren and Ryemi's bond, which ultimately became the difference maker in saving the world. Given that this was the case, it comes as no surprise that you would think there would be more to their relationship since so much focus was put on the both of them in this timeline.
The subtle amount of sexual tension between them is intended, but it's really a part of their complicated and deep relationship dynamic. I wanted their bond to have many sides to it, and to a large extent, they will both struggle with their multi-layered and complex feelings towards each other(whether truly romantic or otherwise). I wanted to stray away from a more standard couple dynamic that we already see in Iggy/Lyre and Mimi/Ryan. The bottom line is that they are both special to each other, but whether that bond is romantic, fatherly, platonic, or an amalgamation of all that and much more, that is something that will be constantly evolving between the two of them. And with Ryemi as a near-omnipotent goddess now, that will introduce even more sides to their already complex dynamic, which would confuse things even more between their perception of each other. In the after-stories, I will do my best to show many sides of the Ryemi/Ren dynamic and hopefully, I will be able to show you the clumsy beauty of their undefinable yet immensely special relationship.
About Ryemi acting really uncharacteristically bold with how she dispatched Layla, that primarily has to do with her experiencing an unparalleled high from growing so big and exercising so much power. That was also why Ryemi was also acting kind of giddy right after her growth. So unfortunately, Ryemi isn't as much of a freak as her parents, but she may continue to exhibit unexpected sides of herself now that she has become a near-omnipotent goddess.
This wasn't stated in the story, but the Domain of Infinity is actually an upgraded version of the Domain of Origin. With what limits the Domain of Infinity actually has, we will just have to wait and see.
I'm happy that you put so much thought into the aging problem for Ryan and Ren. A lot of your past theories and your current one definitely will work in the context of this universe. That may be a theme I will explore in a future story set in this universe, but I probably won't be touching on it that much.
For Mimi's ending, a story will be set in that timeline in the future, but it will feature a drastically different theme and characters and world and tone.
Can't wait to hear your thoughts on the epilogue!





Date: February 17 2025 1:30 AM Title: Epilogue B - Eternal World
Absolutely incredible chapter, I thought this epilogue would just be the aftermath of laylas destruction, I was not expecting the fae stuff at all. I did think Layla actually considered Fae a friend but that was not the case lol.
Still when Fae grew and hugged Layla, I thought this would still be a bittersweet wholesome ending. Layla finally realizing she had a friend all along who didn't just want her for her power and Fae could even bring earth back to life, though the part that would make it bittersweet is that the goddesses would still be dead. So I definitely got caught off guard lmao.
I mean it started of nice with Layla actually enjoying the hug and deep down she does want friendship. But then it took a sinister turn to say the least, this part was amazing. I did wonder if there were romantic couples among the goddesses but I was not expecting a planetary level sex scene. With Fae even using continents as toys for their sex, this was far beyond my expectations.
I did expect this to be the darkest ending but I thought Layla destroying the planet was a dark as things could get. But damn this is an absolute nightmare, Fae has humanity being in an infinite loop of being murdered by their sex and then being resurrected just to be killed again and they retain their memories throughout. With even Layla ending up as a sex slave. This was by far my favorite showing of Fae, she was incredible this chapter.
The fact that Fae actually has no malicious intent for Layla at all and genuinely thinks they are having fun is both hilarious and yet so so dark. Having even Layla cry out for help to the humans shes just mercilessly killed not too long ago, really hits hard.
My favorite epilogue is still the Mimi one but this is definitely a close second. Honestly I thought the Mimi ending would be a whole tier above the rest but I stand corrected, this was also incredible.
A continuation of this would be also be amazing. I'm assuming that ryan, ren and mina are being brought back to life as well in Faes hellish cycle. Having to endure death after death while knowing that their family and friends are dead forever. I can see ryan and ren trying to somehow fix things, maybe if they got to a hidden dimension, since if they are being brought back an infinite amount of times then eventually they may reach it. Then over time maybe ryan can make Artemis 2.0 or something lol.
Though is Lucy still in Laylas ear? If she is then maybe she can do something. Her domain can warp reality which is probably the only way left to defeat Fae, so if she could somehow control it then that might be their only hope. Maybe ryan could do some technology miracle or something to help her control it.
Probably very unlikely they could pull any of this off but still I would be very interested to see a continuation and see if they can somehow overcome this nightmare of a timeline, they do have infinite time after all with infinite revivals.
Loved this ending ,once again absolutely phenomenal chapter,
Author's Response:
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
I'm glad that you enjoyed this ending too! I tried not to hold back when making the dark endings, and I'm happy that it paid off.
For Lucy's case, although I never really stated what happened to her during the battle, you can assume that she is probably also dead in this ending. A continuation of this timeline would be pretty difficult to write, but I could possibly entertain such a possibility in the future if I have any sudden ideas about it.





Date: February 13 2025 10:45 AM Title: Ending C - Ren
Holy crap this ending have been so good and tragic and this last one with ren was awesome can’t wait to see the epilogue
Can’t wait to what spins off can happen next
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment!
I've just uploaded the final epilogue and work on the after-stories have already began, so not to worry. Please do take part in the poll for your favorite goddess after reading!





Date: February 09 2025 11:48 PM Title: Ending B - Mina
Great chapter, Mina made a good effort, though this just emphasized just how well Ryan did in his ending considering how hard it was to even make it to Fae in the first place, especially in just a few minutes. Not to mention Ryan ending gave the best epilogue of the story lmao. The Jacob and Melody moment was really nice, glad to see them make up and I knew Jacob did actually really care about his daughter and I can definitely understand why he did what he did.
I feel that Ren will actual be the secret MVP and the one who will lead to the good ending. I mean even in the chromphemus chapter, when outlining the reasons to choose the person, ryan gets huge compliments, mina gets called a person who can do the impossible and ren just gets a single line about being close to ryemi lol and even in the votes he was last by quite a large margin. Exactly perfect conditions for an underdog comeback lmao.
Also both ryan and mina had their moment to shine, ryan being with his rescue in Artemis and mina giving her divinity and convincing esthesia to stand down. But Ren hasn't really had a moment like that. Despite him being the main protagonist along with ryemi of this part. This part all started with ryemi meeting ren, so it would be actually would be quite fitting if ren was the one to end it all and got his moment. If it wasn't for Ryan I would have definitely chosen Ren, Im betting Ren can get the happy ending and epilogue, though Ryan still got the most entertaining ending and epilogue lmao.
I'm assuming the epilogue for this route is just what if Layla won since minas actions didn't seem to change anything at all. Though I could be wrong and owe mina an apology lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing you comments!
In a way, Mina's method was actually a lot more sensible than Ryan's considering she actually tried to get a goddess's help. Ryan was actually stupidly reckless for trying to do it all by himself, climbing onto Ryemi's hair in the heat of the moment.
There are many time travel stories where the time traveler isn't allowed to reveal that he/she was from the future, but this is not one of them, and Mina can just freely let everyone know exactly how to prevent the disaster. Unfortunately, she has very little experience interacting with a goddess from the perspective of a human. Valiant effort by her but her inexperience in this aspect ultimately led to her failure. Given Ryan's abundance of experience in this regard, he would have probably been able to get all the goddesses' attention in time if he had tried Mina's method instead. An unfortunate turn of events but hopefully Ren does better. Meanwhile, do enjoy the epilogue of this route as it is quite different from the others.





Date: February 09 2025 11:30 PM Title: Epilogue A - Dark World
Absolutely incredible chapter, dark ending? I dont know, I mean there is plenty of ryan x mimi, mimi grows absolutely colossal, 1000 year cycle has ended, all other goddess taken care off and got what they deserved, the light barrier trapping humanity on the planet is gone and humanity is finally safe lmao.
In all seriousness this is a pretty dark ending lol, though even though the other endings have not been released yet, and im sure there will be a more light-hearted and not completely crazy ending but this is still my going to be my favourite ending in terms of how enjoyable it is lol. And hey this is still better than layla destroying everything or even the 1000 year cycle which would have left only a few million people alive.
I love mimi in this chapter, honestly I did want to see Mimi somehow get to the size she was in ryans dream sequence in part 1 but i thought it wouldn't be possible in the story. Glad to see I was wrong, this was amazing. Im assuming this is the true power of the domain of origin since Layla was only a few thousand kilometres but mimi after absorbing all her power manages to get up to a few million kilometres. Also was lucy still in laylas ear, i guess lucy got absorbed as well lol. Is Mimi stronger than Genesis now? She is far bigger at least though Genesis probably held back a lot to avoid hurting anyone.
Mimi destroying the earth, forcing all of humanity on to her nipple, killing millions over one guys defiance and then even extinguishing the sun by peeing on it, she has gone insane and I am all for it. That was awesome, I have been wanting to see Mimi reach her full potential since the end of part one and even have a yandare moment over Ryan, this was far beyond my expectations.
Not only did Mimi end up killing Ryan, especially considering Fae really was not going to kill ryan at all so it was purely Mimi who caused ryans death but then she killed Fae as well, the only chance of bringing him back. I can definitely see why Mimi just completely lost it. Though Im suprised she targeted Ryemi and iggy as well but at this point shes just gone insane.
This is pretty much mimis dark moment at the end of part 1 dialled up to 11, she really did become undefeatable like she wanted to be back then, she will never feel weak again. She actually might be able to bring Ryan back considering the power of the domain of origin and just how powerful she is now, maybe by creating someone with the ability to bring back a human even without a body so a better version of Fae or something. Though I wonder how Ryan would react to this Mimi, she is pretty insane but physically this is basically is exactly ryans deepest desire, though obviously without the insanity and murder lol.
I am really curious to see how ryemi would react to all this. Ryemi does not even know about mimi destroying the city at the end of part 1 so for her to see her mother doing all this must have been completely insane for her. Especially after her father just died. Esthesia reaction would be interesting as well, as her and every other goddess has just been reduced to living on mimis nipple as mortals. Bet she is really regretting the whole 1000 year cycle thing lol.
Loved this ending, if there was a continuation for any of the endings, I feel that the continuation for this ending would have by far the most entertaining reactions from the characters and the situation in general. Once again phenomenal chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Technically in this ending, the majority of humanity has survived(other than the few million or so that Mimi casually killed), so there is some truth in this not being that 'dark' an ending. Yes, Mimi is a tyrant now, but if the world were to be ruled by an iron-fisted dictator, I would rather it be a cute goddess like her than anyone else
I did explain it a bit in the after chapter notes, but this is basically an ending that plays on all of Mimi's evil/yandere tendencies that have been hinted at throughout the story. I'm sure that readers have been wondering just what would happen to Mimi if she were to ever lose Ryan, given that her obsession over him is one of her most significant traits. This ending gives them exactly that in a 100% unfiltered manner.
I'm glad that you liked this ending, because I really like it too. In giantess narratives, I find that well-crafted 'bad endings' are just as interesting and enjoyable as the good endings, so I put a lot of effort into writing this one even though it will most likely not be considered the 'true ending' by most readers. That aside, I put a lot of effort into the other endings as well, so don't sell them short just yet as you might end up liking them more than this one.
(P.S. A continuation of this ending may be in the works, but it will be a drastically different story from The Origin)





Date: February 09 2025 10:43 PM Title: Ending A - Ryan
Amazing chapter, what a mood shift, from the part where ryan reached fae it was hilarious and then got so dark at the end lol. Honestly Ryan did really well, its impressive enough that he somehow managed to make it to Fae in the first place. And Mimi only came because Ryan went after Fae. Mimi took Fae down so Layla has been defeated so Ryans actions did save the future.
I was not expecting that end for Ryan at all, whats tragic is that he had all the pieces to make it work. I mean Fae actually recognised him and had a positive relation with him and was even hearing him out. The call back to Ryan making her orgasm was hilarious. But this was a good example on how Faes stupidity can be really dangerous for humans. But then Mimi showed up, any other situation, this would been a straight up win for ryan but Fae just happened to put him in the one place that resulted in his death.
Ryan had some really bad luck this time and such a tragic end, but still he did succeed in saving everyone, my man is the still the GOAT
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment!
I'm glad you liked the twists that I put into this chapter in spite of its somber ending. Fae is a really unpredictable character(as alluded to in her index entry as well) and I capitalized on that as much as I could in this chapter.





Date: February 09 2025 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 17.5 - Choice (Chrophemus)
Ryemi is definitely going to feel guilty after this, since no matter how this ends, ryemis mercy and then her dropping her guard on top of that, got such a kind goddess to sacrifice her life to fix her mistake, though ryemi still did really well.
I chose Ryan in the poll. Hes my favourite character and I felt if chromphemus was going to depend on any human it would be Ryan since she's actually good friends with him and worked with him for many years and knows his capabilities. She doesn't actually know Ren and Mina lol.
Also Ryan is the guy we have been following since the start so i felt that it would be fitting to have him end things off. He has a close connection with Ryemi, being her father after all and he somehow always get stuff done. Seeing Ryan somehow winning through the crazy situations he gets in is just really entertaining lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Ryan was the most popular choice and I guess he has had the most screentime out of all the characters so it makes sense. He would have been my choice too.





Date: February 09 2025 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Clash (Ryemi)
Amazing chapter, looks like Ryemi is the most powerful being alive right now. She was by far the most powerful human so it makes sense that she would be become an extremely powerful goddess. Since Amara mentioned that Layla should be dead from all the divine energy in her body, I am going to guess that Fae has been regularly healing her and that's why Layla actually became friends with her so Layla isn't alone as she says she is, at least she has one friend lol.
Also yeah ryan will die of old age and mimi will remain alive forever. Still at least she has ryemi now. Though considering mimi has the domain of origin she could probably find some way to keep ryan alive, I mean genesis created two goddesses, chrophemus and fae, who could get over the old age problem. So if mimi just created something with a similar ability or something. I was going to say ryan could have just had chrophemus rewind his age every 30 years or something but that's not possible anymore lol. I feel like maybe mimi would be fine with just making the most of the time they had, until ryan actually starts getting old and ill, then she will go crazy in finding a way to save him.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your comments!
Interesting theory regarding Fae helping Layla out, but Layla has already had the power of hundreds of goddesses in her back when she was still obeying her father, before she met Fae.
Some intriguing ideas regarding the possibility of giving a human immortality through a goddess's domains. I haven't really touched on this idea yet, but through Chrophemus's and Fae's powers, it can be speculated that this is very possible. Good catch on that!
Thanks for supporting the story as always!





Date: January 31 2025 5:53 PM Title: Ending A - Ryan
i wont spoil any of the ending cause i think its best if it doesnt get talked at the very least until all three endings are done. But i will have to say ( something that i wasnt able to since i didnt want to sway the votes ) is that i think no matter what the outcome, Ryan is the right choice for this ending, its more so symbolic in a way, ryan is the one we knew from the start and we kept learning about this new, strange world with from beginning to the end, it was only right that he gets to be the one who we get to see the ending with.
For mina, as much as i think people grew to love her from the few chapters we get to see her as the main character, i think is behind ryan for my pick, as while ryan will be the beginning and the end, mina is living proof that humans and goddesses could live together as equals.
For ren i do see why ren is here, but i actually think hes the weakest of the three, as i feel like he doesnt symbolize anything that ryan and mina already show to us, he isnt a bad pick per se, i just think hes the weakest
for the author, wrath, this is great, a lot of these ideas are well executed and really catered to the smaller side of the gts community that likes insanely large sizes, for that, thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
There are definitely reasons for picking any of the 3 characters as they all have their strengths and symbolize different things. There is some significance to choosing Ryan because he was the first main character back in part 1, but he is definitely more of a support main character in this part. Still, the ending I derived for this route does heavily focus on plot/character aspects that are significant to him as a character. I can talk more about that after the epilogue of this route.
I appreciate your continued support for this work. I love most kinds of size work regardless of scale, but there is definitely a soft spot for me when it comes to these insanely huge sizes. It's really difficult to write stories like this, especially when it comes to interactivity and scenarios, so I'm really grateful that you are willing to read my work in spite of my inexperience in this aspect.
In this case, the goddesses having enhanced senses has really helped make the interactions more personal in spite of the stupidly large size disparity. But in the future, I will try my hand on works where the giantesses really aren't able to perceive humans. I have some ideas on how to make such a story feel more personal between characters, but it will probably be a much more serious/dramatic narrative and not as heavily smutty or fetishized.





Date: January 24 2025 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 17.5 - Choice (Chrophemus)
Thanks the link worked !!
Author's Response:
Glad that it worked!
Date: January 24 2025 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 17.5 - Choice (Chrophemus)
Im not going to comment anything about the vote as to not try to sway votes from the other characters though all three are valid options i will just say.
Now to my previous comment, i think its incredibly fun to talk about these kinda stuff ( and also the fact that im a pretty big fan of genderswap in general ), and these things makes for great content for when you make future works about this universe as its going to be a bit more lighthearted than this, like the first man turned to a goddess would definately be big talk across pretty much everyone, might make for great content.
I do have some ideas on what i think you would do for after story content but i think ill start dreading the fan work now ( seriously the story is ending i actually have to do it now aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa )
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
For my future content there will definitely be more lighthearted stories that are more slice of life-ish, and I've already worked on a few chapters of that. But I still do want to try stories that are more serious and even darker. Either way, I hope you will keep reading my stories. For the fan work, don't stress too hard over it, just take your time since there's no rush. I'd be excited to read it whenever it comes out.





Date: January 23 2025 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 17.5 - Choice (Chrophemus)
Hahaha should have known time would be involved lol how exciting also the link is not working for me but I’ll see what I can do about it
I can’t wait to see how it ends
Author's Response:
Is it working for you now? It seems to work for most others.
https://strawpoll.com/XOgOV4162n3
Could you give it a try again?
Date: January 23 2025 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Clash (Ryemi)
Okay! im going to yap about the after story of this now, cause this battle is only the start of something more terrifying, an endeavour i know only ryan could do: mediate the relation between goddesses, he has so little time to do all of that, he'd need atleast five human lifetimes to complete this task. I feel like a story like that shouldnt really belong here as it will be a more down to earth story, but i think its going to be an incredible read if someone is able to do it....
Anyways! enough of being logical im now going to theorize what kind of goddess ryan would be if on a hypothetical he did become one, cause you know, its fun to have something more lighthearted on my reviews cause i think ived been a bit too serious lately. I think if ryan turned into one her powers would be more human in nature and so would have a human like trait, since i talked about him possibly being one of the few who is able to mediate the relation between both parties, maybe a goddess of contracts? contracts are something quite human in nature. maybe perhaps goddess of mediation as (s)he is the person who will ensure that both humans and goddesses come to a peaceful conclusion. or maybe perhaps... just, goddess of peace, to show the path he has paved for the people and goddesses...
But fuck that what if his(her) name is something relating to the end, kinda to show how mimi is the new start, while ryan is the ending to the old ways. I think im going crazy now so ill end it quick!
Hopefully i gave you a fun thought as i wait for tommorow's poll! Have a nice day!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your interesting comments!
I never really thought about giving any of the male characters any special powers before, much less making them a goddess. In the flashback chapters we can see that men are unable to harness divine energy of any capacity without being vaporized, so this is probably not something that would happen for now. But it is intriguing to see what kind of ideas my readers have about goddesses and prospective domains. The trait of a goddess is important, but what is usually a challenge is coming up with the abilities that come together with it while conforming to most of the basic rules of a domain(e.g. a domain cannot directly affect other goddesses, with the exception of special domains like Mimi's).
For goddesses with domains that aren't as clear cut and straightforward as fire or water, it can be difficult to define abilities that make sense and are meaningful. For example, if there were to be a Goddess of Wealth, it doesn't feel that great for her ability to be to create money or gold, since that is kind of completely useless for a goddess.
Hope you enjoy taking part in the poll! It should end on the last day of January so try to make your choice before then.





Date: January 23 2025 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Clash (Ryemi)
Bah gawd that's Fae's music! Who knew she's getting such an important role after only 1 appearance. Now that I think about it, was it Layla who leaked Artemis' location to Fae?
I do feel for Mimi and her realisation that Ryan does not share her immortality. I wonder if other goddesses with have a similar epiphany and this makes them more cautious against building one-on-one relationships with humans, or they would become like Iggy and just live in the moment (who, by the way, was absolutely adorable with her moment this chapter; she really seems to want Lyre clinging to her body at all times)
I also like Estheia's recent character development; her actions seems to be driven by her loyalty (to Genesis at first, and her fellow goddesses given her conversation with Ryemi) which is a noble trait, but she is perhaps now starting to see that there is always more than one side to any story. If peace is restored, I am interested to see if and how she takes on a leading/guiding role for humanity.
Looking forward to the next one (and the poll) as always, although it's a shame to see this story end.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Good observation regarding what happened at the end of the chapter, and about how Artemis's location was compromised.
As for Mimi's realization, it is a rather solemn concept that comes hand in hand with immortality and may be something I would like to explore further in the future. Particularly about how the fleeting nature of relationships are precisely what make them valuable to eternal beings like goddesses, preventing them from living a mundanely constant immortal life(which is also in a way connected to what we explored with Lista's death and the conversation with Chrophemus).
It is a shame to see any story end, but you will probably be able to see these characters again in a more light-hearted tone in the future(perhaps) if I decide to write an extended epilogue to the ending. And as I have mentioned in other reviews, I do intend to make more stories set in the same universe.





Date: January 23 2025 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Clash (Ryemi)
Holy…..SHIT!!!!! wtf just happened lol I can’t believe it!!! I need to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment, you were very quick lol.
Come back tomorrow and take part in the poll I will be posting! It is very important to deciding the ending.