I’m more than happy to keep reviewing haha. This is a fantastic story! I wish I had more recommendations, but I think the passing is great so far and the situations have been good :) I wouldn’t mind some unaware anal play, some more masturbation and rubbing, unaware insertion, perhaps unaware mouth play (with tongue stuff and cumming), I’ve seen stories do well with that, but that’s all also personal preference. Situationally, it’s been great! For future chapters, maybe a girl goes to soccer practice and he’s stuck in her panties, shower/bath scenes are always great, getting stuck in a students’ moms pussy and then sex scene (or a HS sister or something), sleep content. Just some suggestions, you’re doing great!! Enjoy what you’re writing and the story will flow :)

I think the story is going good so far! I will say, I think that some unaware insertion or masturbation would make the story great! In addition to that, some unaware shower stuff where he gets rubbed all over one of his students bodies (or more of it’s a gym shower) would be amazing too.