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Reviewer: bigedgasfarm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2024 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

long time lurker first time poster

I have been reading stories on this website for far too long and this is the best one ez

three dimensional characterisation, no messing about, great action

Loved the scenario, so well excuted. More of this if possible!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2024 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great stuff GA! All of the teasing was so good in this one. Loved that whole section of Ryan going microscopic on Liza’s toenail. I thought this was just a one off while reading, but then I saw it’s not done. Excited to see what these two get up to haha. Liza really earned that 5 star review! 



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She might not have set up those TVs but she did put a smile on the customer's face.

Reviewer: Sketchy17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2024 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful work as always Anon, looking forward to seeing how this story plays out.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Giganto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2024 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story 



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Thanks!

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