Date: November 07 2024 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 2: “The Rise of a Giantess”
Curious to see if Lauren grows any bigger or if her growth spurt is a "one and done" kind of deal. In any case, amusing stuff so far. I'm guessing that there'll be some chaotic, destructive shenanigans in the next chapter.
Date: November 06 2024 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2: “The Rise of a Giantess”
I like your writing style, I think the beginning of the story is fantastic, so the continuation is guaranteed to be good :D
Date: November 06 2024 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 2: “The Rise of a Giantess”
Aaaaaand here comes the (accidental) rampage.
It all starts with one step.
Date: November 06 2024 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 2: “The Rise of a Giantess”
I really like this chapter, the way you describe the grow and how lauren reacts, now she is moving we will see how the little people reacts, but i hope we see a lot of destruction in the next chapter
Date: November 05 2024 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: "Just Another Tuesday"
Amazing story :) ! I just love giantess moms so much and Lauren seems really realistic and believable. Like its not your average power thirsty psycho from chapter 1. Feels like an actual relatable mom.
That said, I specifically love how you describe how powerful her breathing is and everything related with it and I was wondering if you would include some sneezing on the story :) . Like maybe she has allergies and out of clumsiness ends up sneezing upon a crowd (or a city block) with devastating consequences.
Just a suggestion (and a personal fetish of mine :P
Keep the nice work going ;) !
Date: November 05 2024 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: "Just Another Tuesday"
Nice start
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: November 04 2024 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: "Just Another Tuesday"
Great start. I was wondering, I see you posted this in spanish as well, so do you write in english or spanish for the original? It feels to me that you have a good grip on the mom mindset (of course I'm a guy, so I don't know how women actually think).
I don't usually read giantess only stories, but something about yours compelled me to try it and I am certainly enjoying it. Keep going please.(I posted this same review earlier, but forgot to put a rating on it, so I deleted it and re-posted with the rating this time)
Author's Response:
"Thank you so much! I’m glad you're enjoying the story. I originally wrote it in Spanish and am still translating it into English, so I’m thrilled to hear it’s coming across well. With Lauren’s character, I try to bring in a sense of realism, at least in these first chapters—I often ask myself (with ChatGPT's help) what a middle-aged woman might actually do in a situation like this. It’s definitely an interesting angle and a lot of fun to write. I appreciate you giving this story a chance, especially if giantess stories aren’t usually your go-to. I hope you continue to enjoy where this journey takes Lauren!"
Date: November 04 2024 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: "Just Another Tuesday"
I appreciate Lauren NOT becoming a giantess right away, even ending on a cliffhanger juuust as her growth kicks off. Gives us a better sense of the status quo, and how it will be shattered.
And wow. Bratty daughter? A-hole boss? Trouble at work? Lauren hit bingo on "Adult Problems".
Gonna be watching this one.
Author's Response:
Thank you for noticing the buildup! I wanted to give readers a solid glimpse into Lauren’s 'normal' life before everything gets turned upside down. And yes, she’s definitely dealing with a lot of classic 'adult problems'—a bratty teenager, a difficult boss, and workplace drama. I think these everyday struggles make her journey more relatable. I’m glad to know you’ll be following along, and I can’t wait to show what’s coming next!
Date: November 04 2024 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: "Just Another Tuesday"
Very nice writing. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your feedback! I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far.
Date: November 04 2024 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: "Just Another Tuesday"
Cant wait to see where this is headed.
Author's Response:
I really appreciate your thoughts! It’s great to hear you’re interested in where this is going.