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Reviewer: Omanahan88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2024 11:00 PM Title: Shadows of Treachery

Great submission! Love the feeling of abject despair in those last couple of moments. 

Reviewer: Giganto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2024 7:40 AM Title: Shadows of Treachery

Excellent story 

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 01 2024 7:35 PM Title: Shadows of Treachery

This is a great idea, I love the premise. I always like halloween stories and shrinking but not many exist. Please consider making a sequel or prequel. I'd love to know more about the incidents 

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