Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon

I have to give it a thumbs up :)

If you can't tell by my alias, I like this type of story (basically any story where someones normal life goes out of control). Not sure what kind of eventual ending you are shooting for, but don't forget to give the guy some hope every once in a while. Happy endings are always nice, but life isn't always a happy ending (at least not for all those involved :)   )