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Reviewer: sevano19900 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2024 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Stage

Love this chapter! Your world building is fantastic. I’m a sucker for some boob crushing so thank you for including that! Looking forward to more chapters in the future! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! It's an honor to receive such compliment... and yes, boobcrushing is hot

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2024 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Stage

Daaaaaaamn this characters make being ruthless and cruel to the subjects sexy and hot as hell!!!!!! …….. I love it!!!!!

ps more ass, odor and vore !!!!!!!!!!! …..please and thank you 



Author's Response:

unethical, they say...


odor!? convince me lol


and thank you!

Reviewer: sevano19900 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2024 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Blood Eagle Wings

Wow! I love the concept! I’m excited to see where you take this one!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Hopefully I could do it justice!

Reviewer: Shrunkenvandal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2024 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Blood Eagle Wings

Yoooooo, this was so amazing! I loved how cruel and uncaring both Luna and Jessica were! I can't wait to see more of this story!.

Bro you cooked and served!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

scientist... they're heartless unethical bunch, aren't they (except when they're 300ft tall and such a beauty, they're allowed)

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2024 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Blood Eagle Wings

The great return of the goat himself sensei Rave777 


this chapter was a great start and look into this world again. Characters are already exciting to see and I can’t wait to see more of them already.

also the vore, butt crush scenes were awesome and down beautifully. 


Nice job and can’t wait for more 



Author's Response:

Sensei!? lmao

it feels good writing about Haven City again, I feel like there are potentials that could be done beyond the afrementioned micro cities.

Thank you for the kind words!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2024 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Blood Eagle Wings

Are the new chapters of haven city coming? 



Author's Response:

there will be one day, yeah.

this prequel aimed to expand the story of this very setting since I feel like I haven't done enough, also to explore so many untapped potential in the lab type settings that I wanted to do.

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