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Reviewer: It Was Me Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2024 5:58 AM Title: Part I

I've figured it out! You've got a guy in the patent office. That's how you always whip out those trademarks so fast! Mystery solved!

On a slightly more serious note, I really enjoyed these two chapters! I love these tourist-style stories, so I was pretty excited when you said you wanted to give your take on it.

I'll admit that I was a tad bit skeptical when I realized that the different regions were going to completely isolated until Alina made her way through. For me, part of what makes these tourist stories fun is how the size differences by country are natural instead of novel for the natives, making the giant tourists more of an inconvenience than a walking apocalypse (even when they're squishing the natives), like this is just something they have to deal with routinely instead of a life-altering event.

However, despite Alina being the first to visit smaller regions, you kept that same vibe going. I think part of it was the regions being aware of each other, and another factor was how all of them are connected through the Alina's livestream as her popularity grew. But, for example, that scene after Alina arrived in Dixieland and took that selfie with those dudes on the building? That type of interaction made the story feel less like a normal rampage and more like a tourist story (especially when she obliterated them after one said Mercy sucks; that was the perfect end to that).

I think my favorite scene, though, (other than my death!) was Alina sampling the local cuisine at the Dixieland fairgrounds. In particular, the way Alina held that one dude right in front of her lips while looking at her phone, not knowing or caring about the tiny guy struggling to avoid being eaten, only for her to describe how the tinies taste as she's eating him was phenomenal. That's one of my favorite scenarios, the casual indifference with which she disposed of him. Incredibly well done.

Thank you for killing me, by the way! I loved the way that turned out! A victim of my own request, and when she went for seconds no less! As for her question, I would have told her what was me, but unfortunately I'm dead now, so I guess we'll never know!

I'd like to tell you that you did a fantastic job with all of the butt stuff in chapter two, but I feel like that would only encourage you to write more of it, and seeing J-Vader melt down when he doesn't get booty is a prime source of entertainment for me. So I hated every hot, tantalizing second of it!

I loved the foot-tall people giving Alina an easy ride through their land to prevent any incidents, and the gentle interactions between the seven-inchers and her was adorable ass well. Alina giving them Ittybittyman just because she forgot about him was fucking hilarious, too!

Finally, as someone who doesn't play Overwatch, this was still incredibly easy to follow, even when the characters mildly delved into gamer talk. So that was really appreciated.

Overall, this was such a fun romp, absolutely perfect for what it was! 



Author's Response:

The isolation between each nation made sense to me. Because what was stopping the hundreds of Alinas out there from wiping out smaller nations? Additionally, people seldom think about bugs, insects, and birds in these scenarios. In order for the logic to work in my mind, these barriers were a must. But with the hack of getting through these barriers, we can expect to see more “tourists” in the future.

All nations can communicate through radio signals and whatnot. Yes, they are aware of each other. I’ll still say rampages are near non-existent, and in this story, we saw people reacting to Alina’s presence in different ways. Classical retreat, to intrigue, to pampering.

Your favorite scene was the casual vore? Yeah, me too! Vore is always good. Her indifference to his plea was hot—I agree.

So, I must admit something. The whole reason I wrote this … the lore, worldbuilding, plot … All of it was a ruse! I crafted this story and asked my discord followers to use their names in my story—and you fell for my trap! Like a fly to a Venus flytrap, you allowed me to use your username. Why? So, I can learn the truth behind your handle. IT WAS ME. It’s been haunting me! What was you? I used Alina to ask you in a very meta way, what was the truth behind your username. But alas! You won’t reveal it. Not in story, nor in the comments. And now you’re dead! The world may never know WHAT WAS YOU.

Anyway, thanks for the comment. Thank you for saying it was perfect … for what it was. Just a fun little story, y’know?

Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2024 2:09 AM Title: Part II

So many good interactions! I loved the opening scene of the 7 inchers applying sunscreen to her. This and the first chapter had a lot of fun scenes with the larger tinies, and those really stood out to me because I'm used to giants being much bigger or like Amazon height. It's rare to see tinies in the ~foot tall range, especially in rampage stories. Speaking of bigger though...

The micro and mm regions where really well done, showcasing the absurd size difference through the simplest actions, like the clap of Alina's ass cheeks deafening people lol. The scene towards the end of her just lying down and wiping several city blocks out in the process was really hot, as was her idly playing with skyscrapers with her toes. Playing with her "subscribers" and seeing the destruction through their perspectives was fun too. It's a shame It Was Me won't ever get to finish Roomies though. Felled by his own hubris, the poor soul.

I was wondering how xxBigDiksxx would go out. I was not expecting up the nose lol. And you didn't even use the nose tag! This could be your only chance! Tan jacking off to his imminent demise in both parts was really funny. I loved the overall attitude in this story of people watching Alina committing atrocities across dimensions and most of the victims we see going "Yeah, but she's hot tho." 

What a great romp! All the various methods of destruction were very well done, and the moments bereft of violence proved equally entertaining. I hope Alina can someday find a way to get those sub counts back up lol.



Author's Response:

Hey, thank you for your comment! It worried me when people weren’t commenting on the second chapter. I felt like I fucked things up badly, lol. So, your review comforted me!

Alina traveling to all the different sized nations was fun to imagine. And her interactions with the “taller” people differed vastly from the others, for obvious reasons. Hard to crush and vore 1-foot tall people, lol.

Poor, poor, IT WAS ME. Bro just liked foot crush a little too much. Hopefully, he’ll keep writing ‘Roomies’ in the afterlife.

The NOSE tag! Fuck it, you convinced me. I updated the tags on the story. I just love it when tinies are so small, they can be inhaled like powder. And Tan’s fate, being unknown, just highlights how insignificantly small he was.

Again, thank you for the comment! It was meant to be a fun, silly break from my main story. I’m happy to hear that others enjoyed it!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2024 8:01 PM Title: Part II

This chapter will be forever be my favorite of the one shot story so great!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks, bro. You made me write something I never wanted to, lol.

Reviewer: stardestroyer1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2024 1:39 AM Title: Part I

Can’t wait to see what she does with her ass in Picotopia!  And I hope they’re just as super microscopic there as promised!



Author's Response:

Microscopic destruction, incoming!

Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2024 8:44 PM Title: Part I

 A giant influencer streaming herself being a nuisance, or a cataclysmic force of destruction, is always bound to be a great time. Her cosplaying as an Overwatch character is an extra enjoyable layer to the idea.

I was not expecting her to travel to multiple, different sized countries, but it was really cool seeing her interact with all the different peoples. I loved the relatively larger ones taking selfies and giving her free rides the hell away from their countries, and every instance of ill-advised fanboying/fangirling was adorable. And of course, the destruction and vore were superb.

For some reason, I assumed this was a one-shot, so I was initially disappointed to see things end before the main event, but now I’m just excited to see the coming antics Alina has in store!



Author's Response:

It's a one-shot in two chapters, lol.

Thank you for the comment! I'm not sure how the idea came to me, but it was a visual I really liked, hence this story. I had fun writing the destruction, and of course, vore. I've been craving for something like this for quite some time. Anyway, I hope you enjoy part II.

Reviewer: Thousandaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2024 7:48 PM Title: Part I

Your shrink stuff is great, but your macro stuff? HELL YEAH! Give me more, please!



Author's Response:

Yooo. Chapter 2 is up. Lots more macro stuff in that chapter.

Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2024 4:42 AM Title: Part I

10/10 giant woman with big ass and titties jiggling 

Seriously tho, fun concept and execution. The Overwatch theme just makes it more fun. Her being an E-Girl and not actually Mercy makes it hotter.



Author's Response:

A Mercy cosplayer as a giantess is my weakness, lol. Glad you liked all the booty and titty jiggling!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2024 4:35 AM Title: Part I

This is great! I love any tourists story and I like Overwatch. I think soon any streamer will want to do something like this and these tiny countries will be overrun with massive tourists.



Author's Response:

Oh yeah! When other e-girls see how successful Alina is, there's gonna be some copycats. Lots of streamers and countries to choose from!

Reviewer: rave777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2024 3:08 AM Title: Part I

aaaaah classic tourist city rampage my beloved... the destruction already top notch, but the bridge part... I read that over and over.


Another banger!



Author's Response:

Haha, it's so hot! Casual destruction of a bridge full of people is awesome! Thank you for your kind words!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2024 3:04 AM Title: Part I

This first rocks !!!! The size details was so great and hep with imagination and vore scene was really good and the lack of care she had crushing the cities and people around here was top tier 


overall 10/10 chapter 



Author's Response:

Yoooo, thank you! And Alina thanks you for the 10 gifted subs, lol.

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